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Rating: 53 / Native English / 1 Review / 23 Jul 2013 at 17:56

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premiumdotz 53 Hi, I'm premiumdotz! I am a gradua...
Japanese

ebayであなたからRBZ Tour 8 Headを8個購入しました。
6個は到着しましたが、残り2個が到着していません。
トラッキングナンバーは9405510200986099531549です。
早急に発送処理をお願いします。

English

I purchased 8 RBZ Tour 8 Head from you in ebay.
Six of them arrived, but the other two didn't.
This is the tracking number: 9405510200986099531549
Please process the shipping immediately.

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mellowgerman 53 I have been translating Video Games, ...
mellowgerman rated this translation result as ★★★★ 26 Jul 2013 at 17:58

original
I purchased 8 RBZ Tour 8 Head from you in ebay.
Six of them arrived, but the other two didn't.
This is the tracking number: 9405510200986099531549
Please process the shipping immediately.

corrected
I purchased 8 RBZ Tour 8 Head from you on ebay.
Six of them arrived, but the other two didn't.
The tracking number is 9405510200986099531549.
Please process the shipping immediately.

Very good. I think saying in ebay is also possible but on ebay is more common, although Im not sure.

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