Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: ある人物（鈴木さん）からきているメールへ返信するにあたり、事前に（ABC様）と相談をしたい、という趣旨のメールです。（文字数が240を超えるため、4つの依頼にわけました）

Japanese

　2)B社はインフラも含めて統合的なサービスの提案であるが、
　　A社は外部（C社）のインフラを代行管理するスキームでの提案であり、
　　B社のほうが、よりオーバーヘッドの少ないワンストップサービスが期待できる。

この為、鈴木さんが求めている「A社のほうが良い点」としては、
ABC様に評価頂いた添付の内容が回答になると考えております。

（Excelを添付）

English

2) B Company as suggested an integrated service including infrastructure, but A Company suggested a scheme to outsource the infrastructure externally (to C Company), and B Company can be expected to offer lower overhead as a one stop service option.

Therefore, regarding Mr. Suzuki's thought that "A Company is more favorable," I was hoping to hear your thoughts on the content of the attached Excel data.

Reviews ( 1 )

14pon rated this translation result as ★★ 09 Jul 2013 at 05:40

Mr. Suzuki's thought that A Company is more favorable
Mr. Suzuki doesn't think that way. "We" think that way, and Mr. Suzuki wants to know the reason why we do so.

I was hoping to hear your thoughts on the content of the attached Excel data.
---> This is quite wrong. See my translation to grasp the meaning in the source text. You may as well correct your translation in the comment box.