Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )
Rating: 59 / 1 Review / 23 Mar 2013 at 11:49
こんにちは。
即決で購入しました。
大変申し訳ないのですが、
お支払いは4月1日になりますがよろしいでしょうか?
商品に目立った傷などはありますか?
落札後にお話してすみません。
とっても欲しかった商品なので購入しました。
宜しくお願い致します。
Hi,
I got your item by "buy it now" option. The payment, I am afraid, will be on April 1. Is it OK for you? And is there any noticeable flaws on the item?
I am sorry to contact you after the auction. I was really dying for this.
I am waiting for your response.
Reviews ( 1 )
Whilst the meaning gets across, there is some incorrect English use.
For example:
Is it OK for you -> Is that OK for you
And is there any noticeable flaws -> Are there any noticeable flaws?
I am sorry to contact you after the auction -> I am sorry for contacting you after the auction
Overall I also feel the tone is a little too informal.