Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

初めまして　nakamura masakiと申します。

現在、私は日本で、海外から輸入をして、日本で販売するというビジネスをしています。

大変、失礼ではありますが、先方とは、長い取引をしたいと望んでますので、こちらの商品を３００ドルまで、値下げできないでしょうか？

ご検討の方、よろしくお願いします。

English

I'm very pleased to contact to you for the first time. My name is Nakamura Masaki.

Now I'm doing a business to sell items that I imported from overseas in Japan.
I'm afraid to ask but would it be possible for you to give me a discount for this commodity? I'm hoping to get a chance for a long-lasting business relation with the customer. Therefore it would be nice if I could purchase it for 300 dollars.

I thank you for your consideration and await your reply.
Best regards

Reviews ( 1 )

nick_hallsworth rated this translation result as ★★★★ 26 Nov 2012 at 23:19

Very polite English which represents the Japanese well.

Advise from a native:

'business relationship' instead of 'business relation'.
'product' instead of 'commodity'