Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: ①と②は全くの別件です

Japanese

①来週、Jonさんが日本に来ると聞きました。
佐藤さんが、対面でmtgをしたいそうです。
以下のご都合はいかがでしょうか。

所要時間:30〜60分
12月20日13:00-16:00の間

②Tanさん
通訳手配もお願いして良いでしょうか？
こちらで対応する事がありましたら、お知らせください。

English

1. I heard that Jon-san is coming to Japan next week.
Sato-san would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
12/20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

Reviews ( 1 )

karekora rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 16 Jan 2024 at 06:55

original
1. I heard that Jon-san is coming to Japan next week.
Sato-san would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
12/20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

corrected
1. I heard that Jon is coming to Japan next week.
Sato would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
Dec 20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

I would say it’s more natural not to include the “-san”, however it would depend on the relationship of the people involved and how they naturally address each other. Great translation!!