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[Translation from Japanese to English ] We added the last part, the ballpark scene with the audience singing along wi...

Original Texts
最後の部分は、野球場で観客が一緒に歌っている光景をイメージして、オーディエンスとの一体感を強調するために追加しました。しかし言われてみるとあなたが指摘した点も理解できるので、一回彼女とも相談してみます。Bの部分ですが、かなり短くして極力違和感がないようアレンジしました。Cの部分はまるごとカットしました。
Translated by naokey1113
I added the last part to make emphasis on the harmony with audience, having an image of audience is singing a song together in the ball park. However, I can understand what you pointed out. And so, I will have a discussion with her. About B part, I shortened it and make an arrangement it to eliminate uncomfortable feeling. I got rid of the whole C part.

Result of Translation in Conyac

Number of Characters of Requests:
152letters
Translation Language
Japanese → English
Translation Fee
$13.68
Translation Time
about 5 hours
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