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[Translation from Japanese to English ] Should the 2 points below be changed? * Display the post "When contributio...

Original Texts
以下2点の変更を行えばよいでしょうか?

・「投稿が不適切と判断された場合、24時間以内に投稿を削除します」のテキストを表示
・渋谷区以外から投稿ができないというテキストを表示

上記の修正でよい場合、渋谷APPSと同じようなアプリで、上記を表示してないように思われますが、参考までに表示しているアプリを教えていただけますか。
Translated by naokey1113
Should I revise these two points as follow?

- Display a message "In case your post is judged as an inappropriate one, it will be eliminated within 24 hours".
- Display message "You can't post from outside of Shibuya ward".

If above-described actions are correct, could you give me other applications which display such messages because I have not seen applications like Shibuya APPS with these messages.

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Number of Characters of Requests:
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Translation Language
Japanese → English
Translation Fee
$14.22
Translation Time
18 minutes
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