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[Translation from Japanese to English ] Who is evaluating the work? Why can't we make a profit even though we are se...

Original Texts
仕事の評価を査定しているのは、誰になるのでしょうか。
御社の希望価格でお客さんに販売しているのに、なぜ利益が取れないのでしょうか。評価は、営業のモチベーションになります。彼と同じ評価になる為には、4倍の売上が必要になっております。発注したけれどオーダーを通す事ができない案件が多いので、きちんと納品できた案件に関してはきちんと査定して欲しい。営業なので、仕事の評価は、売上に対してなので、自分には重要な事になります。どのようにしたらきちんと評価されるのでしょうか。
Translated by steveforest
Who assesses the evaluation of the work?
Despite selling items at your requested price, how come we are unable to gain the profit?
The evaluation is a motivation of sales. To achieve the same evaluation with him, the 4 times of sales will be necessary. As there are orders but there are plenty of orders which are not accepted, I would like you to assess if I would deliver accurately. The evaluation for work is important as I am a person for sales with the result of sales. What shall I do for asking an accurate evaluation?

Result of Translation in Conyac

Number of Characters of Requests:
231letters
Translation Language
Japanese → English
Translation Fee
$20.79
Translation Time
8 minutes
Freelancer
steveforest steveforest
Starter
I worked for the broadcaster as an engineer for over 35 years.
During my car...