[Translation from Japanese to English ] I just started using facebook in these days, so I wrote a message on your wal...

Original Text / Japanese

facebookはじめたばかりなんでウォールの方に書きました。今東京ですかあ。大阪によられたときにお暇ならよってください。あっ、営業先訪問を優先してね。

Translation / English

I just started using facebook in these days, so I wrote a message on your wall. Wow you are in Tokyo now. Please drop in me if you have a time in Osaka. Oh don't forget to visit your customers first, please!

[deleted user]- over 13 years ago
Thank you for your good translation.

Translation / English

I've just started facebook so I'm writing on your wall. So you're in Tokyo now? If you ever come to Osaka and have some free time, please come and see me! Of course, business visits are prevailing over me!

Translation / English

As I am a newcomer of Facebook, I carelessly sent my message to the callboard (wall) By the way, are your in Tokyo now? When you come to Osaka and have spare time, please come over to me. Be careful to prior your customers though.

mura- over 13 years ago
your は　youの間違いです、すみません。

Translation / English

I just started facebook so I put a comment on the wall. Are you in Tokyo? If you come to Osaka, please stop by. oh, please visit your business clients first.

mura- over 13 years ago
だれがつけたのか知りませんが、あなたのBad(1)は不当です。（３）でいいのではないですか。stop byの目的ががないこと、次のohが小文字であることは間違いと思いますが。