[日本語から英語への翻訳依頼] 今日荷物が届きましたが中身が違っており999が届いてしまいました。至急888を送ってもらえますか？999はすぐに返送します。返送料は後ほどPayPalで請...

原文 / 日本語

今日荷物が届きましたが中身が違っており999が届いてしまいました。至急888を送ってもらえますか？999はすぐに返送します。返送料は後ほどPayPalで請求する形で良いですか？

翻訳 / 英語

I received the package today, but with wrong contents, i.e. 999 was contained. Please immediately ship me 888. I will return 999 to you promptly. I will invoice you the return shipping fee to you via Paypal, is it OK for you?

翻訳 / 英語

The package was delivered today, but the contents was wrong and 999 was mistakenly delivered. Can you express ship me 888. I will send back 999 soon. Is it OK if the return shipping charges are billed via Paypal later on?

翻訳 / 英語

I received the package today, but I received 999 instead of 888. Could you send me 888 as soon as possible? I will send 999 back to you later. Would it be ok to bill you shipping cost of sending back 888 through PayPal?

aarondono- 12年以上前
Your first and last sentence are not correct.
Sentence #1: There is nothing about item 888 in the first sentence.
Sentence #2:888 is not being returned, 999 is.

Next time do one more proof reading before you turn it in
Good luck!