[日本語から英語への翻訳依頼] Dear 先日は問い合わせた複数の商品を販売していただき誠にありがとうございます。 現在御社から10％の割引を貰っておりまして大変難しい事は重々承知で...

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Dear

先日は問い合わせた複数の商品を販売していただき誠にありがとうございます。

現在御社から10％の割引を貰っておりまして大変難しい事は重々承知ではございますが、現在受けている10％の割引をもう10％～20％上げていただけますでしょう？
ほんの5％だけでも上げていただければ幸いです。

もし割引を上げていただければ今後とも素晴らしい取引とともに必ず御社の売り上げに多く貢献致します。

良いお返事お待ちしております。

翻訳 / 英語

Dear,

Thank you for selling us the plural products that I referred to the other day.

I get 10% of discount from your company now, and I know well that it will be very difficult but may I ask you to give another discount of 10% - 20% on top of the 10% we receive now?
I will be happy if you can raise It is a even by just 5%.

I will contribute a lot to the sales of your company, realizing splendid business further certainly if you can accept the raise of the discount.

I wait for a good answer.

tatsuoishimura- 6年以上前
「raise It is a even by just 5%」は、「raise it even by just 5%」と訂正いたします。

tatsuoishimura- 6年以上前
「a good answer」は、「your good answer」と訂正いたします。

翻訳 / 英語

Thank you very much for selling our multiple items which I asked you the other day.

Currently we received a 10% discount from your company. So, I am aware it is very difficult since you have already discount by10%, but if possible, could you please discount a little more hopefully by 10%-20%?
I appreciate if you could discount by just 5%.

If you could accept to increase the discount rate, we promise tol contribute to your sales as well as wonderful dealings.
I am looking forward to your favorable reply.