あなたは、悩んでいる人の問題を解決できる自信があるかもしれません。
そして、商品はそれなりに売れているかもしれません。
しかし、私が思うに、あなたのセールスページにはまだ不足していることがあります。
読み手は決して、あなたや商品のことを100％信用しません。
あなたの主張は嘘だと思っています。
言葉だけなら大げさなことを言って簡単に嘘がつけますよね？
ですから、あなたがその問題を解決できる実力者であるなら、その客観的な証明の数々が必要なのです。
評価
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翻訳 / 英語
- 2017/09/28 09:58:01に投稿されました
You may have confidence to solve problems which people are suffering from.
And products may have been sold well in a way.
However, I think there is something lacking on your sales page.
Readers never believe 100% of your products.
Your claim is not true.
By words, we can lie easily saying big things, cannot we?
Therefore, if you are a person who have power to resolve the problem, many of these objective proofs.
And products may have been sold well in a way.
However, I think there is something lacking on your sales page.
Readers never believe 100% of your products.
Your claim is not true.
By words, we can lie easily saying big things, cannot we?
Therefore, if you are a person who have power to resolve the problem, many of these objective proofs.
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2017/10/01 12:18:22に投稿されました
You probably have a confidence to solve a problem of those who have some troubles and also your items are perhaps sold well.
However, I think there are something your sales page are missing. The readers of your site don't always trust you and your site. They think what you are saying on your site are not true.
You can easily tell a lie only with words as exaggerating something.
Therefore, if you are a person who have capability to solve those problems, you need a number of objective evaluationds to certify it.
However, I think there are something your sales page are missing. The readers of your site don't always trust you and your site. They think what you are saying on your site are not true.
You can easily tell a lie only with words as exaggerating something.
Therefore, if you are a person who have capability to solve those problems, you need a number of objective evaluationds to certify it.
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2019/10/28 15:54:03に投稿されました
You might be confident in solving other people's problems, and you might selling a large amount of products.
However, I believe that your sales documents are not sufficient enough.
Readers do not trust you and the products whatsoever, and they think you are making false statement.
You can exaggerate in words and tell lies easily.
Therefore, you need to prepare a lot of evidence to prove them objectively if you good at solving the problem.
However, I believe that your sales documents are not sufficient enough.
Readers do not trust you and the products whatsoever, and they think you are making false statement.
You can exaggerate in words and tell lies easily.
Therefore, you need to prepare a lot of evidence to prove them objectively if you good at solving the problem.
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2017/09/28 11:03:24に投稿されました
You may be sure of solving the problems of people who are worried.
And, goods are good sellers in its own way.
I think, however, your selling pages are still lack of something.
Readers never trust you and goods completely.
They think that your insistence is not true.
You can tell lies easily with big words.
So, if you have an ability to solve concern of others, you should account for objectively many proofs that you have the ability.
And, goods are good sellers in its own way.
I think, however, your selling pages are still lack of something.
Readers never trust you and goods completely.
They think that your insistence is not true.
You can tell lies easily with big words.
So, if you have an ability to solve concern of others, you should account for objectively many proofs that you have the ability.
評価
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翻訳 / 英語
- 2017/09/28 11:00:04に投稿されました
You may confident about solving e the problem of people who is suffering.
The product may be sold quite well.
However, I think that there is shortage in your sales page yet.
A reader will never trust you or the product in 100%.
I think your insistence is a lie.
It is possible to tell a lie easily with using just exaggerated words, isn’t it?
Therefore, if you are an influential man who can solve the problem, a lot of objective proofs are necessary.
The product may be sold quite well.
However, I think that there is shortage in your sales page yet.
A reader will never trust you or the product in 100%.
I think your insistence is a lie.
It is possible to tell a lie easily with using just exaggerated words, isn’t it?
Therefore, if you are an influential man who can solve the problem, a lot of objective proofs are necessary.
例えば、何かの賞状、免許、執筆した著書、雑誌で紹介された時の記事、講演会でスピーチしている写真、お客さんからもらった直筆の手紙などなど。
また、ダイエットや病気の症状が改善できたという場合なども、根拠となる公的な機関の資料、データや写真、映像などが必要です。
これらは、もし無ければ仕方ありませんが、商品の成約率を向上させる上で極めて重要です。
あなたは、読者に信用してもらえるだけの上記の資料を用意できるでしょうか？
今すぐでなくても構わないので、出来る限り集めて私に提出してください。
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2017/09/28 10:09:06に投稿されました
For example, those are some certificates, licenses, autographed books, articles introduced by such as magazines, photos with a speech at lectures and letters autographed given by customers.
In addition, you need an official agent's materials to prove them in cases such as recovering from diet or disease symptoms.
If you do not have any of them, you have no choice, to improve reaching a contract rate of product, these are quite important.
Do you prepare those above materials to be believed by readers?
It does not matter to submit some right now, but please collect some and submit them to me.
In addition, you need an official agent's materials to prove them in cases such as recovering from diet or disease symptoms.
If you do not have any of them, you have no choice, to improve reaching a contract rate of product, these are quite important.
Do you prepare those above materials to be believed by readers?
It does not matter to submit some right now, but please collect some and submit them to me.
評価
52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2017/09/28 10:32:15に投稿されました
For instance, any diploma, license, the book you wrote, an article introduced in a magazine, a picture of when you made the speech at a lecture meeting and an autograph letter from a guest, etc.
Also, when the symptoms of diet or disease were improved, document, data, picture or video, etc. of the public institution that will be the evidence are necessary.
It can’t be helped if there is nothing, but these are extremely important to improve the contract success rate of the product.
Can you prepare the materials above to make the readers trust you?
I don’t mind if it isn’t right now, could you please give me as much as you can collect these?
Also, when the symptoms of diet or disease were improved, document, data, picture or video, etc. of the public institution that will be the evidence are necessary.
It can’t be helped if there is nothing, but these are extremely important to improve the contract success rate of the product.
Can you prepare the materials above to make the readers trust you?
I don’t mind if it isn’t right now, could you please give me as much as you can collect these?
