[日本語から英語への翻訳依頼] 日本では、ここ数年でハロウィンの行事が根付きつつあります。 ブームの発端はUSJのハロウインイベントだったようです。 ゾンビメイクの写真がSNSで若者たち...

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日本では、ここ数年でハロウィンの行事が根付きつつあります。
ブームの発端はUSJのハロウインイベントだったようです。
ゾンビメイクの写真がSNSで若者たちを中心に広まりました。
現在では、ハロウィンになるとコスプレの大群衆が渋谷や池袋の街に集まります。
これは渋谷の街の様子です。
子供の姿は無く、若者達のコスプレイベントになっています。
もしあなたが、日本に訪れた際には見物してみるのいいですね。

翻訳 / 英語

Here in Japan Halloween events are taking root.
The origin of the popularity seems to have been the USJ Halloween event.
The make up of zombie photo was spread to young people by SNS.
Now, groups of people cosplayed gather in Shibuya or Ikebukuro in Halloween season.
This is the site of Shibuya.
There are no children, it is a cosplay event for young people.
I would be nice to go to see if you come to Japan.

setsuko-atarashi- 7年以上前
申し訳ございません２点修正お願い致します。

１.　１行目の最後に, during these past few years. を付け加えていただけますでしょうか。
2．　最後の行の、”I”を”It” に変えていただけますでしょうか。

よろしくお願い致します。

翻訳 / 英語

In Japan, Halloween celebrations are becoming rooted in the past few years.
Beginning of the boom seems to have been Halloween events of USJ.
Photos of zombie makeup were spread around the young people in the SNS.
Nowadays, when it comes to Halloween, Many people gather toward Shibuya and Ikebukuro.
This is the state of Shibuya city. There is no children , Yong ages enjoy cosplay event.
If you come to Japan, it sounds good to visit the event.





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翻訳 / 英語

Halloween event is becoming common in past years in Japan.
The beginning of the boom would be the halloween event of USJ.
The pictures of people who wore makeup like zombie were spreading by SNS to young people.
Many people who is wearing costumes get together in Shibuya and Ikebukuro in Halloween recently.
This is the picture in Shibuya.
There is no kids and the event became for costume play of young people.
It might be fun to see the event when you visit Japan.