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I contacted to the post office and was told that the investigation will take more than a month.

Please let me know of your preference from the choices below.

1. We send the item to your new address.
Please note that the post office in the UK might charge you the VAT (20%) at the time of arrival of the item.

2. We send you the item to your current address with EMS. (It takes only about 5 days to get to your address.)
If the item does not reach you before moving, we will pay you back a full amount.

3. We pay you back a full amount immediately.

I would recommend the 2nd choice.

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I contacted the post office and was told that the investigation would take more than a month.

Please let me know of your preference from the choices below.

1. We send the item to your new address.
Please note that the post office in the UK might charge you the VAT (20%) at the time of arrival of the item.

2. We send you the item to your current address with EMS. (It takes only about 5 days to get to your address.)
If the item does not reach you before moving, we will pay you back a full amount.

3. We pay you back a full amount immediately.

I would recommend the 2nd choice.

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彼女はその体験を以下のようだったと記述する。「その映画の主人公達がすぐ目の前に現れて、話の展開を一緒に体感させてくれる映画をみているようでした。」
Magic Leap社の本社があるDania Beach, Floridaでは、ＳＦ小説家のNeal Stephenson氏を「未来派の主要人物」として迎え入れた。↵

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彼女はその体験を以下のようだったと記述する。「その映画の主人公達がすぐ目の前に現れて、話の展開を一緒に体感させてくれる映画をみているようでした。」
フロリダ州のDania Beachを拠点とするMagic Leap社は、ＳＦ小説家のNeal Stephenson氏を「未来担当チーフ」として雇い入れた。

元の翻訳
Virgin Galactic社は今年度中に乗客を乗せた飛行を開始したいとしていたが、昨年秋の致命的な事故によりその計画を大きく遅らせた。その面においてWorld View社は「我々は、2016年の終わりに宇宙のかなたへ人々を連れて行くことを始められるよう努力をしている。」と言っている、とPadilla は述べる。「とてもきつい計画だ。きつい計画に向かって働くことはいいことだと思う。しかし、あれは、きつすぎるかもしれない。我々は、安全性が確認できてから行うつもりだ。」

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Virgin Galactic社は今年度中に乗客を乗せた飛行を開始したいとしていたが、昨年秋の致命的な事故によりその計画を大きく遅らせた。それに関してWorld View社は、「2016年の終わりに宇宙のかなたへ人々を連れて行くことを始められるよう努力をしています」と言ってきました、とPadilla は述べる。「とてもきつい計画です。きつい計画に向かって働くことはいいことだと思います。しかし、あれは、きつすぎるかもしれない。我々は、安全性が確認できてから行うつもりです。」

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World View社は宇宙のかなたへ乗客を飛行させたいと考えてはいるものの、自社をVirgin Galactic社のような、最速飛行で人々を宇宙への旅に連れて行くことを望み、１席を２５万米ドルで販売するような企業を直接の競合社とは見ていない。と、いうのも、とPadilla は言う。Virgin Galactic社の乗客は小ロケットで宇宙へ発射後、５分間の無重力を経験するが、World View社の乗客は上限１０万フィートまで９０分の飛行を経験し、その高度で数時間過ごし、その後、降下に最低３０分を要して戻ってくるからだ。

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World View社は宇宙のかなたへ乗客を飛行させたいと考えてはいるものの、Virgin Galactic社のような、25万米ドルもする座席に乗せて最速飛行で人々を宇宙への旅に連れて行くことを望んでいるような企業を、直接の競合社とは見ていない。その理由をPadilla氏 は次のように話した。Virgin Galactic社の乗客は小ロケットで宇宙へ発射後、５分間の無重力を経験するだけだが、World View社の乗客は上限10万フィートまで90分の飛行を経験し、その高度で数時間過ごし、その後、降下に最低３０分を要して戻ってくるというものなのだ。

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1. Thank you for the continuous business.
When do our registered product appear at Amazon?
Are there any problems with our products registration? If so, please let us know.
Thank you very much.
2. We send the products, which are purchased in this limited time, by Express post.
We appreciate if you give us a good feedback when you receive your products early.
Thank you for shopping with us!

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1. Thank you for the continuous business.
When do our registered products appear at Amazon?
Are there any problems with our products registration? If so, please let us know.
Thank you very much.
2. We send the products, which are purchased in this limited time, by Express post for free.
We appreciate if you give us a good feedback when you receive your products early.
Thank you for shopping with us!

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I phoned and gave the information below as I was told to do so.
Please unlock it soon.

The reason why this happened is because I stayed at a hotel and used their internet line.
The user is myself so I don't see there is a problem

What else should I give?

The information I gave on the phone:
Date of birth
Account ID
Address
Phone number
Email address

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I phoned and gave the information below as I was told to do so.
Please unlock it immediately.

The reason why this happened is because I stayed at a hotel and used their internet line.
The user is myself so I don't see there is a problem

What else should I give?

The information I gave on the phone:
Date of birth
Account ID
Address
Phone number
Email address

元の翻訳
Hello,
Thank you for contacting us.
We have sent the products with a tracking number ↵
and we confirmed that they are already in Brazil.
They should be coming to your door shortly.
We are not able to contact to the post office in Brazil but↵
you could ask the nearest post office for more information.
We apologize for any inconvenience↵
and thank you for your patient.
Please be assured that we will take care of this matter untill you receive the products.

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Hello,
Thank you for contacting us.
We have sent the products with a tracking number and we confirmed that they are already in Brazil.
They should be coming to your door shortly.
We are not able to contact to the post office in Brazil but you could ask the nearest post office for more information.
We apologize for any inconvenience and thank you for your patience.
Please be assured that we will take care of this matter untill you receive the products.

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I also have NZ-21 and NZ18. Would you like to purchase them as well?

I have 21 in total and the total price is $〇〇.
The shipping fee is $100.
I can not discount much as this product can not be found easily any more.↵
I do not charge you the shipping fee so the price will be $〇〇.
I do not usually deal with clients directly.
ebay is not easy place for Japanese buyers.
Would you be able to purchase one at ebay?
I will give you the discount on the total cost.
After that I will charge you directly through Paypal.
Would you like to take an insurance for the products?
We will pay for the insurance if you would like to take.

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I also have NZ-21 and NZ18. Would you like to purchase them as well?

I have 21 in total and the total price is $〇〇.
The shipping fee is $100.
I can not discount much as this product can not be found easily any more, but I do not charge you the shipping fee so the price will be $〇〇.
I do not usually deal with clients directly.
ebay is not easy place for Japanese buyers.
Would you be able to purchase one at ebay?
I will give you the discount on the total cost.
After that I will charge you directly through Paypal.
Would you like to take an insurance for the products?
We will pay for the insurance if you would like to take.

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Thank you for contacting us. Apologies for sending a wrong product. I confirmed the the photo of the original box with the name of PENTAX. Would you be able to return the product to the address below? As soon as we confirm the product we will refund the full amount. Please let us know the returning shipping cost as well so that we can refund through PayPal. We would appreciate if you could use the parcel which we can track. We sincerely apologise about this matter.

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Thank you for contacting us. We are sorry for sending a wrong product. I confirmed that the photo of the original box shows the name of PENTAX. Would you be able to return the product to the address below? As soon as the product is received on our end, we will refund the full amount. Please let us know the returning shipping cost as well so that we can refund through PayPal. We would appreciate if you could return the product with a tracking number. We sincerely apologize about this matter.

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This product is consist of the product A and B.
Two of them (the product A and B) makes one product.
The product A is the body part and B is the base for A as you can see on the product page.
I would like to ask you to change the price to $300 in total of product A and B.
The current price is $300 for the product A and $300 for the product B.
This makes the total price double the actual purchasing price.
I am sincerely asking to change the total purchasing price to $300 which should be including the product A and B.

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This product consists of the product A and B.
Two of them (the product A and B) make one product.
The product A is the body part and B is the base for A as you can see on the product page.
I would like to ask you to change the price to $300 in total of product A and B.
The current price is $300 for the product A and $300 for the product B.
This makes the total price double the actual purchasing price.
I am sincerely asking to change the total purchasing price to $300 which should be including the product A and B.

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Greetings,

I just contacted Japanese Paypal customer center regarding the payment. However, I found out that the money has not transferred yet. Japanese customer centre asked the client to contact directly to Paypal Germany regarding this matter.
As soon as we confirm the payment we will send you the products.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Greetings,

I just contacted the Japanese Paypal customer center regarding the payment. However, I found that the money has not been transferred yet. The Japanese customer center asked the client to contact Paypal Germany directly regarding this matter.
As soon as we confirm the payment we will send you the products.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Coming late to work for Japanese business workers means death.
Coming to work without breakfast means the same.

There are good news and bad news for you.
The bad news is you came to work without breakfast and even worse, all your team members can't eat hot food.
The good news is that the train you have to take is leaving in 45 seconds after the limited express train past, which is just announced.

Here we go, our fight begins!

Take your my chopsticks from your chopsticks holder and run into the station soba noodle shop with your team mates. Get the table and shout "Kake Soba!"

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Coming late to work for Japanese business workers means death.
Coming to work without breakfast means the same.

There are good news and bad news for you.
The bad news is you came to work without breakfast and even worse, all your team members can't eat hot food.
The good news is that the train you have to take is leaving in 45 seconds after the limited express train past, which is just announced.

Here we go, our fight begins!

Take your own chopsticks from your chopsticks holder and run into the station soba noodle shop with your team mates. Get the table and shout "Kake Soba!"

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My favourite alcohol is wine but I didn't know well about Spanish ones. This is our family trip and we came all the way to Spain for something so my father and I decided to join the tour as my father is also a big fan of alcohol.
It was really fantastic! We watched VTR to learn the products first and then the tour and tasting. There were so many kinds of Freixenet Cavas and the stories of each products.
Sitges was a pretty much a resort town. I wanted to stay much longer at the exotic mediterranean beach which is different from the one in Japan.

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My favourite alcohol is wine but I didn't know well about Spanish ones. This is our family trip and we came all the way to Spain for something so my father and I decided to join the tour as my father is also a big fan of alcohol.
It was really fantastic! We watched VTR to learn the products first and then the tour and tasting! There were so many kinds of Freixenet Cavas and the stories of each products to know interesting about.
Sitges was pretty much a resort town. I wanted to stay much longer at the exotic mediterranean beach which is different from the one in Japan.