yosuke-oshida (yosuke-oshida) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.

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I will re-announce you what I have constantly wanted, that is, 100% full refund including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want.
All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, I'm certain that my request is rightful.

元の翻訳
It has been repaited.
The top lid and the bottom lit, the film advance lever are repainted.
The black part of the back lid has the original black paint.
The leather covering the exterior is intact and clean.
Moltoprene form of the back lid hinge has been replaced.
The exterior is totally clean.

Shutter: Clicks between 1 second and 1/500 second that should not bring any problems for the practical use.
Viewfinder: Some of the coating on the eye piece have come off, but it does not affect the view. There is no prism corrosion and it is a very clean viewfinder.

There is no problem on the film advance system and the film rewind system.

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It's repainted.
The top and bottom lid, the film advance lever are repainted.
The black part of the back lid remains the original black paint.
The leather covering the exterior is intact and clean.
Moltoprene form of the back lid hinge has been replaced.
The exterior is totally clean.

Shutter: Clicks from 1 second to 1/500 second that should be no problem for the practical use.
Viewfinder: Some of the coating on the eye piece have come off, but it does not affect the view. There is no prism corrosion and it is a very clean viewfinder.

There is no problem on the film advance system and the film rewind system.

元の翻訳
For a while, I made a business trip to Twaiwan and Vietnam for business observation.

As hasty order was in this time, I ordered it to a company who was lower in DHL carriage even if order quantity was the same quentity.
why is a HP corporation higher in DHL carriage beside other companies even if order quantity is the same kg.

If I order ink made by a HP corporation, a HP corporation can send ink within tomorrow? Or if a HP corporation can do it, how much does a HP corporation send ink?
if a HP corporation can send ink within tomorrow, I order ink made by a HP corporation.
I can pay a charge within today.

I am glad that a HP corporation decreases DHL carriage.

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For a while, I have been to Taiwan and Vietnam for business observation.

As hasty order was in this time, I ordered it to a company who was less expensive in DHL carriage even if order quantity was the same quantity.
why is a HP corporation more expensive in DHL carriage compared to companies even if order quantity is the same kg.

If I ordered ink made by a HP corporation, could you send it within tomorrow? If yes, how many inks could you send?
If you could ship the inks, I would like to order only ink made by HP.
I can pay a charge within today.

I would be glad if HP corporation decreases DHL carriage.

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。Team Daiwa bbsをもう一つ購入することを検討しているのですが、既に購入したものとそちらの写真にのっているものと違いがあることに気付きました。私が購入したものはDaiwaジリオン・スプールがついていますが、そちらのものはついていません。私の持っているものと、そちらのもの、どちらが正しい状態のものなのでしょうか？私のリールにはジリオン・スプールはついていないのでしょうか？持っているものが正しく動くのなら問題はありません。ただの少し興味があるだけです。よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは。Team Daiwa bbsをもう一つ購入することを検討しているのですが、既に購入したものとそちらの写真にのっているものと違いがあることに気付きました。私が購入したものはDaiwaジリオン・スプールがついていますが、そちらのものはついていません。私の持っているものと、そちらのもの、どちらが正しい状態のものなのでしょうか？私のリールにはジリオン・スプールはついていないのでしょうか？持っているものが正しく動くのなら問題はありません。ただ少し興味があるだけです。よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Greetings,

It's ○○.
Thank you very much for shopping with me.

I play football and foot sal.
I love football!
So I do the football matches very much!

Please do let me know if any other items would be of your interest.
Your referral to your friends about me would be appreciated.

p.s. If you are looking for any Japanese items other than football related, please feel free to contact me!
I will do my best to support you 100%!
Good Luck!

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Hello

This is ○○.
Thank you very much for purchasing my item.

I play football and futsal.
I love football!
I also like football matches very much!

Please do let me know if you would like to buy any other items.
And your recommendation to your friends about me would be appreciated.

p.s. If you are looking for any Japanese items other than football related, please feel free to contact me!
I will do my best to support you 100%!
Good Luck!

元の翻訳
I'm so sorry about the misunderstanding.
I have checked with the manufacturer of ESP, the guitar you're having is the model 120 without doubt.
Because 110 and 120 have exactly the same spec and size.

Value-added in Japan has changed from 5% to 8% this April. Because of this, the manufacturer of ESP have changed the price of model 110 and sold it as model 120. In other words, even if you change it to model 120, you'll still get the same guitar.
Because 110 and 120 are the same model so there will not be $200 difference in the payment.

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I'm so sorry about the misunderstanding.
I have checked with the manufacturer of ESP, but your guitar is the model 120 without doubt.
Because 110 and 120 have exactly the same spec and size.

Value-added tax in Japan has changed from 5% to 8% from this April. Because of this, the manufacturer of ESP have changed the price of model 110 and sold it as model 120. In other words, even if you change it to model 120, you'll still get the same guitar.
Because 110 and 120 are the same model so there will not be $200 difference in the payment.

元の翻訳
あなたのアプリは、ユーザがアクセス許可リクエストを却下したときに、ユーザを繰り返しログインダイアログボックスに誘導し続けるようです。つまり、誰かがログインダイアログボックスでアクセス許可を受け入れるのでなく「キャンセル」をクリックすると、ログインダイアログボックスが再度自動的に現れて、このループから抜け出すすべがないということです。

これはFacebookのプラットフォームポリシー7.5に違反しています。「もしある人がアクセス許可リクエストを却下したときには、その人がアクセス許可を認める意志を示したときだけアクセス許可リクエストを再度表示することができます。」

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あなたのアプリは、ユーザがアクセス許可リクエストを却下したときに、ユーザを繰り返しログインダイアログボックスに誘導し続けるようです。つまり、ログインダイアログボックスでアクセス許可を受け入れるのでなく「キャンセル」をクリックしても、ログインダイアログボックスが再度自動的に現れて、このループから抜け出すすべがないということです。

これはFacebookのプラットフォームポリシー7.5に違反しています。「もしある人がアクセス許可リクエストを却下したときには、その人がアクセス許可を認める意志を示したときだけアクセス許可リクエストを再度表示することができます。」

元の翻訳
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元の翻訳
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE, First release in U.S.A!
Project "Let's bloom GIRLS' Sunflower together in San Francisco"

As of 2014 July 19, 20.
We are going to take a big step to the world by performing at J-POP Summit Festival in San Francisco, U.S.A.

We want to share something together with you on such a special day.

We want out stage, Union Square, to be filled with "GIRLS' Sunflowers".

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TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE, First release in U.S.A.!
Project "Let's bloom GIRLS' Sunflower together in San Francisco"

As of 2014 July 19-20.
We are going to take a big step to the world by performing at J-POP Summit Festival in San Francisco, U.S.A.

We want to share something together with you on such a special day.

We want our stage, Union Square, to be filled with "GIRLS' Sunflowers".