yosuke-oshida (yosuke-oshida) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Theme of investigation
In the last investigation, about the distance and speed, we got to know several usage might be available.
However, in order to examine the concrete usage, we need to find out one answer.
i.e. does iBeacon's radio wave pass through people or buildings?
So the last 4th experiment is about the transparency of iBeacon's radio wave.

Summary of Investigation
We place the barriers of several materials between a Beacon terminal as the transmission and iPhone5S as the reception, find out if the notification is available.

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Theme of investigation
Up to the last investigation, we had worked on the the distance and speed and got to know several usage might be available.
However, in order to examine more concrete usage, we need to find out one answer.
That is "Does iBeacon's radio wave pass through human body or buildings?"
So the last 4th experiment is about the transparency of iBeacon's radio wave.

Summary of Investigation
We place the barriers of several materials between a Beacon terminal as the transmission and iPhone5S as the reception to find out if the notification is available.

元の翻訳
This time we'll have an experimentation if iBeacon can recognize how many km/h.

Summary of Investigation

Prepare two cars, one of them Beacon terminal equipped
Another car equips the reception terminal with demo-app active
Each cars passing by, then measure how many km/h can iPhone recognize
An experiment with so-called relative velocity

This time we set the parameter of radio wave intensity: strong.

修正後
This time we'll have an experiment if iBeacon can recognize how many km/h [awkward].

Summary of Investigation

Prepare two cars, one of them equipped with a Beacon terminal.
Another car equips the reception terminal with demo-app active
Each cars [ungrammatical] passing by, then measure how many km/h can iPhone recognize
An experiment with so-called relative velocity

This time we set the parameter of radio wave intensity: strong [awkward].

元の翻訳
40 km/h: reception impossible
Or no reception impossible at all when moving?

Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news.

Wow, one receiver did receive!
The first success in 30 km/h!
Why the one terminal received, depending on reception terminals?
We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is really surprising and amazing.
If we consider the usage below this velocity, a slow-driving cars, for example advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. may send the signal.

修正後
40 km/h: reception impossible.
Or no reception is possible at all when moving?

Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news.

Wow, one terminal did receive!
The first success in 30 km/h!
Why could just one terminal receive? Is there any dependence on reception terminals?
We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is an important outcome.
If we consider usages below this velocity, slow-driving cars like advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. could send the signal.

元の翻訳
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Best regards

修正後
Hello,

The corresponding item has not been delivered yet, so please let us know about the shipping status.

We appreciate your cooperation.

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- Enter your credit card information.
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- Click Confirm on the bottom right corner, and then finish it!

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$180 plan for nine wires, a wire stripping gauge, a wire stripper and a wooden breadboard.
Choose any plan you want!

- Click Continue to Amazon and make an account of Amazon.com
- Enter your mail address and go to registration screen.
Choose this.
Click this button if the above is completed.
- Make an account of Amazon.com
Mail address for registration
Enter alphanumeric characters shown on Image:

元の翻訳
(GMT +9:00) is at the bottom.
Now the registration to Kickstarter completed!

* How to Support
Next, we'll learn how to support. Amazon.com account is will be required, not Amazon.co.jp.
If you don't have the account, see the following procedures.
- Open the page of project that you want to support
- Click Back This Project on right

修正後
(GMT +9:00) is at the bottom.
Now the registration to Kickstarter completed!

* How to Support
Next, we'll learn how to support. The account for Amazon.com will be required, not Amazon.co.jp.
If you don't have the account, see the following procedures.
- Open the page of the project that you want to support
- Click Back This Project on right

元の翻訳
Thank you!
Contacts about delivery destinations, etc. when the project ends, so please wait a moment.
All successfully finished?
We'll keep on contributing many tools to Kickstarter, we'll be glad if you pay attention to the activities of BreadBoardManiac!

修正後
Thank you!
You will hear about delivery destinations, etc. after the project ends, so please wait a moment.
Did all successfully finished?
We'll keep on contributing many tools to Kickstarter, we'd be glad if you pay attention to the activities of BreadBoardManiac!

元の翻訳
* Choose any plan and click Continue to Next Step

All Gone! means that the number of supporters has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it.
$14 plan only for three wires
$23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge
$51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

修正後
* Choose any plan you like and click Continue to Next Step

All Gone! means that the number of supporters and has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it.
$14 plan only for three wires
$23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge
$51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

元の翻訳
エドヴァルド・ムンク / MOURLOT:
1 エドヴァルド・ムンクのリトグラフ。赤、青インクによる色鮮やかな色彩。1969年フランス・パリのムルロー工房にて印刷、ロサンゼルス郡立美術館にて発刊。縦横 8x6 インチの大きさを誇る上質紙に片面印刷された。ムルロー工房は20世紀を代表するリトグラフ印刷業者で、ピカソ、シャガール、ミロ、ブラック、レジェ、マティスなどといった芸術家のポスターやリトグラフ印刷で有名である。

シャガール:
1 シャガール 35年物の両面印刷によるカラーリトグラフ（発刊時はセンター綴じ）元々の著作権はヴェルヴェに属する。この版は1977年ドイツ発行で状態も良く、無地の背景のマット紙に鮮やかな色彩で描かれ、19x11インチの大きさにわたる。

修正後
エドヴァルド・ムンク / MOURLOT:
1 エドヴァルド・ムンクのリトグラフ。赤、青インクによる色鮮やかな色彩。1969年フランス・パリのムルロー工房にて印刷、ロサンゼルス郡立美術館にて発刊。縦横 8x6 インチの上質紙に大量に片面印刷された。ムルロー工房は20世紀を代表するリトグラフ印刷業者で、ピカソ、シャガール、ミロ、ブラック、レジェ、マティスなどといった芸術家のポスターやリトグラフ印刷で有名である。

シャガール:
1 シャガール 35年物の両面印刷によるカラーリトグラフ（発刊時はセンター綴じ）元々の著作権はヴェルヴェに属する。この版は1977年ドイツ発行で状態も良く、無地の背景のマット紙に鮮やかな色彩で描かれ、19x11インチの大きさにわたる。