元の翻訳 al62603Setting hair in places such as Shibuya and Shinjuku.Hair Make Studio Dears is hair set, cut and makeup studio in Kabukicho Shinjuku.The number of girls who want to be cute even if it is not the special day is increasing dramatically.Girls want to be outstanding and cute on the day of music live.Fashionable girls do not cut corners on their hair styles.
修正後 al62603Setting hair in places such as Shibuya and Shinjuku.[Get your hair set in Shibuya and Shinjuku.]↵[Fam (ファム) | Hair and makeup salon in Kabukicho, Shinjuku]↵↵Hair Make Studio Dears is [a] hair and makeup studio [with outlets in Ikebukuro and Shibuya].The number of girls who want to be cute even if it [it's not a special occasion] is increasing dramatically.↵Girls want to be outstanding and cute on the day of music live.[When it's time to go live, every girl wants their cuteness to stand out --]↵Fashionable girls do not cut corners on their hair styles.↵[when it comes to fashion, you can't afford to neglect your hairstyle!]