transcontinents — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thanks for your purchase.
Sorry for not being able to reply to your email.

Actually, there is a customer whom I have been talking to previously, and that person bought it in Japan first.
I apologize for the delay in update on eBay.

修正後
Thank you for your purchase.
I am sorry I did not reply to your email earlier.

Actually, there is a customer with whom I have discussed business deals, and he bought the item in Japan first.
I apologize for the delay in update on eBay.

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply.

I checked bank account, but there was no payment. Probably there was a problem at this account, so money was returned to your account. Please kindly check it.

I arranged another account. After you confirm money is refunded, please send money to the following account again. I will send it out upon receipt of money. By the way, the guitar is made in Indonesia.

修正後
Sorry for my late reply.

I checked my bank account, but there was no payment. Probably there was a problem at this account, so the money was returned to yours. Please kindly check it.

I arranged another account. After you confirm the money is refunded, please transfer the money to the following account again. I will send it out upon receipt of money. By the way, the guitar is made in Indonesia.

元の翻訳
Hello, my name is ○○, I live in Japan.
I'm excited to reserve item I really wanted this time.
I'll be looking forward to its release in December.

I have some questions to you.
My brother and friend are eager to buy this item, too.
Is it not possible for me to reserve multiple units at once?
Of course, I will promise I will not cancel them.
Also, if different persons order with same address, is it possible to send them together?

I'm afraid to take your time, but I appreciate your kind consideration.
Thank you in advance for your kind reply.

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Hello, my name is ○○, I live in Japan.
I'm excited to reserve item I really wanted this time.
I'll be looking forward to its release in December.

I have some questions to you.
My brother and friend are eager to buy this item, too.
Is it not possible for me to reserve multiple units at once?
Of course, I will promise I will not cancel them.
Also, if different people order with the same address, is it possible to send them together?

I'm sorry to bother you with my request, but I appreciate your kind consideration.
Thank you in advance for your kind reply.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your generous message.
Again, I'd like to apologize for causing you an inconvenience because item you ordered had been lost.
So, I will check more whether I will be able to get supply of the item you ordered this time.
If I find it, I will let you know immediately so please kindly wait a while.
Also, if I cannot find it before October 3rd which is shipping deadline, I'm very sorry but please note that the order will be canceled in Amazon system.
I'm afraid to take your time, and I appreciate your kind cooperation.

修正後
Thanks for your generous message.
Again, I'd like to apologize for causing you an inconvenience because the item you ordered had been missing.
So, I will check more whether I will be able to get supply of the item you ordered this time.
If I find it, I will let you know immediately so please kindly wait a while.
Also, if I cannot find it before October 3rd which is shipping deadline, I'm very sorry but please note that the order will be canceled in Amazon system.
I'm afraid to take your time, and I appreciate your kind cooperation.