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可笑しいと思うかもしれないのですけど、私の母がリクエストしたいそうです...

母はワサビが大好きで、品物代金と送料を支払うので、少し送って貰うことはできないかと言っています。ワサビは日本のが一番だろうと考えているようです。私達のところのワサビは、それ程良くない―母の目にはそう映るらしいのです。

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可笑しいと思うかもしれないのですけど、私の母がリクエストしたいそうです...

母はワサビが大好きで、品物代金と送料を支払うので、少し送って貰うことはできないかと言っています。ワサビは日本のが一番だろうと考えているようです。こちらののワサビは、それ程良くない―母の目にはそう映るらしいのです。

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レンズを中国へ郵送するにはどの業者を使いますか、何日で届くでしょうか？あと、消費税は私から支払う必要がありますか？

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レンズを中国へ出荷するにはどの業者を使い、何日で届くか、あと、関税を私が支払う必要があるかどうか教えてください。

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If you cannot reply straight away to the mail I sent you, I will pay as I have been until now so please send me the prepared form.
I will send the payment as soon as next week.
Can you send the product soon?

I apologize for the trouble,
Best regards.

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If you cannot reply straight away to the mail I sent you, I will pay with the method as is so please issue and send me the pro forma invoice.
I will settle the payment immediately next week.
Can you ship the merchandise soon?

I apologize for the trouble, but your support is appreciated.
Best regards.

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If you won't be able to immediate respond to the email I've sent, then I will be paying using the current method so please create the profomer and send it to me.
I will immediately proceed with the payment by next week.
Can you ship the product immediately?

Sorry for the trouble, but I ask for your support.

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If you won't be able to immediately respond to the email I've sent, then I will be paying using the current method so please create the pro foma and send it to me.
I will immediately proceed with the payment by next week.
Can you ship the product immediately?

Sorry for the trouble, but I ask for your support.

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With regard to the rose bouquet, the growing speed to roses are delayed due to the weather condition now.
We are afraid to inform you that we would like to request you to wait for around two weeks to be grown up the roses.
We will get back to you when we can determine the expected date of delivery. So, please have patience.

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With regard to the rose bouquet, the growing speed to roses are delayed due to the weather condition now.
We are afraid to inform you that we would like you to wait for about two weeks till they grow.
We will get back to you once the expected date of delivery is fixed. We appreciate your patience.

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As　for 50 bundles of rose, the growth of the rose has been delayed due to influence of the weather.

We hate to say, but we need 2 weeks until they are grown.

When we find the day to send them to you, we will let you know.
We appreciate your understanding.

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As for a bunch of 50 roses, the growth of the roses has been delayed due to the weather.

We are sorry, but please give us about 2 weeks until they are grown.

When we find out the shipping schedule, we will get back to you again.
We appreciate your understanding.

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With regard to the bouquet of roses (50 roses), currently, the growth of roses has been delayed due to the weather.
I am sorry, but I have to ask you to wait two weeks until the roses growth.
We will contact you when we have an estimated shipping date, until then I kindly ask for your understanding.

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With regard to the bouquet of roses (50 roses), currently, the growth of roses has been delayed due to the weather.
I am sorry, but I have to ask you to wait for two weeks until the roses grow.
We will contact you again when we have the estimated shipping date, thank you for your patience and kind understanding.

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1. I am very sorry, but the product you contacted me about has been sold out. I will look forward to serve you in another time.

2. If you had any trouble, please let us know before you rate. We will do our best to solve the problem.

3. The service is provided only in Japanese.

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1. I am very sorry, but the product you contacted me about has been sold out. I will look forward to serve you in another time.

2. If you had any trouble, please let us know before you rate. We will do our best to solve the problem.

3. The service is available only in Japanese.

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1. ○○について言えば、どんなアメリカのキャンディにも興味あり、あなたならそこまで行きますか？

2. 彼は、優柔不断です。

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1. そういえば○○さん、そちらで入手が困難なアメリカのキャンディでなにかご興味のあるものはございますか？

2. 彼は、センチメンタルです。

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We have received a request for one accompany employee, but will there are not accompany employees from Japan. As the trip is only for the Finalist, I wonder if you could assign one employee there to take care of them? I think that other countries are also asigning one employee, so it would be better if there are not differences between them.
By detecting a person's face from the image captured by the camera and analyzing the face portion of the image, we estimate the person attributes (gender, age) and emotions (smile level). The attributes of the customers are converted to data to establish a predictive analysis model.

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We have received the instruction from you that one employee to attend as a mandatory, however we will send none to accompany from Japan. As the trip will take place by the finalists alone, I was wondering if you could assign one local employee to take care of them? I am afraid that other countries also assign one employee, so I would like to avoid differentials.
By detecting a person's face from the image captured by the camera and analyzing the facial parts of the image, we will estimate the personal attributes (gender/age group) and emotions (degree of smile). The customer's attributes output from the sensor are converted to data for structuring a predictive analysis model.

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Hello

My name is *** living in Japan.

This item is so cool and popular here in Japan.
I was wondering if you could sell me 10 these items at 360 pounds at the same time including shipping fee?
I look forward to doing business with you again.

Best regards,

shipping address

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Hello,

My name is *** living in Japan.

This item is so wonderful and popular here in Japan.
I was wondering if you could sell me 10 of these items at 360 pounds including the shipping fee?
I look forward to continuing our business with you in the future, too.

Best regards,

Shipping address

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Thank you very much for your order.

This is an authentic product manufactured by Casio Japan.
The product will be shipped today via Japan Post EMS.
The tracking number is ........
It will take about 4 days to arrive to your address.

We did not find any issue of the product when we checked before the shipping.
We would appreciate if you could contact us in case you find a problem.

Please contact us in case you have any trouble of the product.

Best regards,

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Thank you very much for your order.

This is an authentic product manufactured by Casio Japan.
The product will be shipped today via Japan Post EMS.
The tracking number is ........
It will take about 4 days to arrive to your address.

We did not find any issue of the product when we checked before the shipping.
But we would appreciate if you could contact us in case you find a problem.

Please contact us in case you have any trouble of the product.

Best regards,

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Thank you very much for placing your order.

This is the authentic item manufactured by Casio in Japan.

We have shipped the item today by EMS of Japan Post with the tracking number ●●●.

We expect that it will be delivered to your address in four days as a guide

Our pre-shipping inspection finds no particular problem, but we will be grateful if you can contact us when you will find any malfunction.

In addition, if you also find any defect, please feel free to contact us.

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Thank you very much for placing your order.

This is the authentic item manufactured by Casio in Japan.

We will shipped the item today by EMS of Japan Post with the tracking number ●●●.

We expect that it will be delivered to your address in four days or so.

Our pre-shipping inspection finds no particular problem, but we would be grateful if you could contact us when you find any malfunction.

In addition, if you also find any defect, please feel free to contact us.

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As for GTX7803GB for MAC PRO, when I install OS10.9.5+ latest driver and run CUDA-Z application, "There is no CUDA" message is displayed. It is completely different from the description of specification. I did not think that it was such an incomplete product. Please issue a full refund including the shipping fee.

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As for GTX7803GB for MAC PRO, when I install OS10.9.5+ the latest driver and run CUDA-Z application, "There is no CUDA" message is displayed. This is completely different from the description of specification. I did not think it was such an incomplete product. Please issue me a full refund including the shipping fee.

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With regard to GTX7803GB for MAC PRO I purchased from you, When I run an application after installing the OS 10.9.5 and the latest drivers, it shows "No CUDA". This is totally different from the statement in the specification. I did not expect it was such incomplete software. You must issue a full refund for me including the shipping charge.

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With regard to GTX7803GB for MAC PRO I purchased from you, when I run CUDA-Z application after installing the OS 10.9.5 and the latest drivers, it shows "No CUDA". This is totally different from the statement in the specification. I did not expect it was such an incomplete software. You must issue a full refund to me including the shipping charge.

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As the grill was not what I expected and I would like to return it, please let me know the procedure.

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As the grill was not what I had expected so, please let me know the return procedure.

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The grill I bought is little different from what I expected, could you let me know how to return it ?

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The grill I bought was a little different from what I had expected, so please advise the return procedure ?

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Thank you for contacting me.
What is the scheduled date for the two goods to arrive at my place ?

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Thank you for contacting me.
When would be the approximate delivery date for the two goods to my address?

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それが何か明らかにして頂けますか？
あなたは説明でおっしゃっていますが、
（プラスティックケースが付随しています。（かなり毀損している。））
これは、プラスティックのべっ甲（それか貝）が、かなり毀損しているのか、あるいは、ロケットが毀損しているのですか？
もしもロケットに傷があるとするならば、どのような状態でしょうか？

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確認させて頂いてもよろしいでしょうか？
御社の説明では、
（プラスティックケースが付随しています。（かなり毀損している。））
これは、プラスティックの殻が、かなり破損しているのか、あるいは、ロケットが破損しているのですか？
もしもロケットに傷があるとするならば、どのような状態なのでしょうか？

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ちょっとはっきりさせたいことがあるのですがよろしいですか？
あなたが言うには、(それはプラスチックケースに入ってきます（それはひどく損傷しています）
それはつまりプラスチックケースが損傷しているのですか?もしくはそのロケット自体が損傷しているのでしょうか？
もしロケットが損傷しているのであれば、それはどのようにでしょうか？

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確認させて頂きたいことがあるのですがよろしいですか？
御社の記述では、(それはプラスチックケースに入っています（それはひどく破損しています）。
それはつまりプラスチックケースが破損しているのですか?もしくはそのロケット自体が破損しているのでしょうか？
もしロケットが破損しているのであれば、それはどのような状態なのでしょうか？

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330rd line in the file below is a part about the copyright. It should be edited.

I would be glad if I can use an affiliate of iTunes.
Recently not many people purchase CD, so it does not sell well via Amazon.

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Around the 330th line in the file below is the part about the copyright. It should be edited.

I would be glad if I can use an affiliate of iTunes.
Recently not many people purchase CDs, so it does not appear to sell well via Amazon.

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「HELLO WORLD」Live performance！

【Airtime】10pm - 12pm

http://www.j-wave.co.jp/original/helloworld/

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”HELLO WORLD" Live performance!

[Airtime]10pm - 12pm

http://www.j-wave.co.jp/original/helloworld/

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私の名前はジョセフです。ペイパルによると，私のアカウントには問題があり，あなたのレンを支払うためには使えないそうです。そこで銀行のカードを用意しましたが，そのカードも使えないとのことでした。そういうわけで，私はどうしたらよいかわかりません。ペイパルに電話し，なぜどちらの支払い方法も使えないのか調べてみます。明日までには，また状況をお伝えします。

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私の名前はジョセフです。ペイパルによると、私のアカウントには問題があり、あなたのレンを支払うためには使えないそうです。そこで銀行のカード情報を提示しましたが、そのカードも使えないとのことでした。そういうわけで私はどうしたらよいかわかりません。ペイパルに電話し、なぜどちらの決済方法も使えないのか調べてみます。明日までにはまた状況をお伝えします。

元の翻訳
ノーノーを受け取って24時間充電しました。

電源が入らず、プラグを入れて電源ボタンを押すと青いライトがつくだけです。

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ノーノーを受け取って24時間充電しました。

電源が入らず、プラグを入れて電源ボタンを押すと青いライトが点滅するだけです。