Susumu Fukuhara (susumu-fukuhara) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
私がちょうどUSPSから戻ったら、彼らは要求により事故報告書を提出できないと私に言いました。
その商品は配送先またはシステム内で保険契約がされていなかったためです。
これで郵便局へ出かけるのは3回目になります(貴方へのメッセージは5回目です）。
すいませんが、この件は受け入れられません。私は善意で、貴方が依頼した全てを行うよう
にしましたが、Oは仕事で時間を割き続けることができませんでした。
私は、破損したの”記録用の秒針？”の写真を添付致しました。
すぐ次のステップに関する貴方からのガイドラインで明確にされない場合、ebay とpaypaに
連絡を取り助言を求めます。

よろしくお願い致します。

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私がちょうどUSPSから戻ったら、彼らは要求により事故報告書を提出できないと私に言いました。
その商品は配送先またはシステム内で保険契約がされていなかったためです。
これで郵便局へ出かけるのは3回目になります(貴方へのメッセージは5回目です）。
すいませんが、この件は受け入れられません。私は善意で、貴方が依頼した全てを行うよう
にしましたが、Oは仕事で時間を割き続けることができませんでした。
私は、破損したの秒針の写真を記録用に添付致しました。
すぐ次のステップに関する貴方からのガイドラインで明確にされない場合、ebay とpaypaに
連絡を取り助言を求めます。

よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt actions!
We would like to begin by press release etc.

I would like to ask a few questions.
Could you tell me your upper limit that can supply use a month at this moment?
I saw from your facebook that there are some products’ cases were made by aluminum. Will you have changes on that?
Congratulations with the release of new color. White color is very suitable.
I think it will become popular if you can offer color in orange and gold in Japan. Please also take this in your consideration.

Also, if you are planned to develop new project such as new colors or new designs, please let me know.

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Thank you for your prompt actions!
We would like to begin by pre-release etc.

I would like to ask a few questions.
Could you tell me your upper limit that can supply use a month at this moment?
I saw from your facebook that there are some products’ cases were made of aluminum. Will you have changes on that?
Congratulations with the release of new color. White color is very suitable.
I think it will become popular if you can offer color in orange and gold in Japan. Please also take this in your consideration.

Also, if you are planned to develop new project such as new colors or new designs, please let me know.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your quick action to send the sample to us.
We will start to do the business with you.
Before we place the order, would you please kindly ask us some questions?
How about the maximum quantity you provide us every month right now?
We saw productions with aluminium outer carton box on the facebook. Is it possible to change the color of the outer carton box?
We appreciate of the release of new colors and white would be better for us.
In Japan, the color of orange and golden will be best seller, so would you please kindly discuss the issue for us?

By the way, if you have any plan to release new color and design, please feel free to contact us.
Thanks!

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Thank you for your quick action to send the sample to us.
We will start to do the business with you by launching the pre-release in full swing.
Before we place the order, would you please kindly ask us some questions?
How about the maximum quantity you provide us every month right now?
We saw productions with aluminium outer carton box on the facebook. Is it possible to change the color of the outer carton box?
We appreciate of the release of new colors and white would be better for us.
In Japan, the color of orange and golden will be best seller, so would you please kindly discuss the issue for us?

By the way, if you have any plan to release new color and design, please feel free to contact us.
Thanks!

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the item so promptly.
Then we can start the press release and other events seriously.

We have several questions.
How many can you provide to us a month at maximum?
On the Facebook, I found an item whose outside was made of aluminium.
Are you goint to change it to that?
You have a new color. Congratulations! The white is good.
In Japan, people love orange and gold, so we ask you to consider them.

We would be glad if you let us know in case where you are going to develop a new stages such as new colors and change of design, etc.

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Thank you for sending the item so promptly.
Then we can launch the pre-release and other events in full scale.

Let me ask you a few questions.
How much quantity can you provide to us in a month at maximum?
On the Facebook, I found an item whose outer box was made of aluminium.
Are you going to change it to that?
You have a new color. Congratulations! The white one is good.
In Japan, people love orange and gold colors, so we ask you to consider them.

We would be glad if you let us know if you are going to proceed to a new stage such as new colors and changes of design, etc.

元の翻訳
I have understood the content of the following.
Today I have requested the delivery agent to arrange delivery by the end of the week.
As the goods this time could not be sold as they were late.
If possible, can I ask for a discount with my next order please?

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I have understood the content of the following.
Could you request the delivery agent to send it air by by the end of the week?
As the goods this time could not be sold as they were late, we suffered loss.
If possible, can I ask for a discount with my next order please?

元の翻訳
We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange a delivery company to send it by air maill on weekend today?
In the accident where it was delayed in delivery this time, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the item.
For this reason, if possible, could you give a discount for the item that we order the next time?

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We understand the following contents.
Could you arrange delivery to send it by air mail on weekend today?
Due to this delayed delivery, we suffered from the loss
that we could not sell the items.
For this reason, if possible, could you give us some discount for the items that we order the next time?

元の翻訳
Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending mail because it's needed to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm that there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

Login ID:
Store name:
Person name:

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Yesterday I phoned Amazon, but has that information arrived there?
I'm sending this mail because I need to log in soon in any case and I would like to confirm if there will really be reply in 1 or 2 days as I was told yesterday on the phone.

Login ID:
Store name:
Personal name:

元の翻訳
Since the beginning of November, I can't log into my seller's account on Amazon EU.
I changed neither my ID nor my password. Although I acknowledge that my seller's account is suspended, I have to respond to messages from buyers. The fund is been on hold as well.
However, I don't know what is going on as I haven't received any e-mails. I wonder how I can log in.
I contacted them but haven't received any response.

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Since the beginning of November, I can't log into my seller's account on Amazon EU.
I changed neither my ID nor my password. Although I acknowledge that my seller's account is suspended, I have to respond to messages from our buyers. The fund has been on hold as well.
However, I don't know what is going on as I haven't received any e-mails. I wonder how I can log in.
I contacted them once but haven't received any response.

元の翻訳
Since November, I have not been able to log in Amazon EU Seller account.
I don't recall if I changed my ID or password. My seller account has been suspended, but I would still need to take care of the buyers inquiries. My fund has been put on hold, as well.
Nevertheless, I no longer receive a single e-mail and have no idea of the current status at all. How could I be able to log in again?
I sent an e-mail once, but no response.

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Since the beginning of November, I have not been able to log into my Amazon EU Seller account.
I don't recall if I changed my ID or password. My seller account has been suspended, but I would still need to take care of the buyers' inquiries. My fund has been put on hold as well.
Nevertheless, I no longer receive a single e-mail and have no idea of the current status at all. How could I be able to log in again?
I sent an e-mail once, but no response came back from you.

元の翻訳
From the beginning of November, I cannot log in the seller account of Amazon EU.
I have changed neither ID nor PW. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from purchasers. The money has also been on hold.
However, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what is happening. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

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Since the beginning of November, I have not been able to log into my seller account of Amazon EU.
As far as I recall I have changed neither my ID nor password. My seller account has been suspended, but I have to answer the inquiries from our purchasers. The money has also been put on hold.
Furthermore, I have not received the email at all, and I do not know what has been going on. How can I log in?
I sent an email once but I have not heard from you.

元の翻訳
日本からキセルを何度も購入していますが、これまで発送に関するトラブルは経験していません。日本はとても優秀です。

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日本からキセルを多く購入していますが、これまで発送に関するトラブルは経験していません。日本はとても優秀です。

元の翻訳
あなたが郵便局に行って確認しようとしたが、閉まってしまった...本当に我々アメリカ人がそんなに馬鹿だと思ってるのか?(できれば前後の文脈を提供していただければ)

修正後
あなたが郵便局に行って確認しようとしたが、閉まってました。...私たちは本当にアメリカではへまなことをしているのでしょうかねえ。(できれば前後の文脈を提供していただければ)

元の翻訳
Between 1982 and 1997, when the company was F's subsidiary, they were made in F's factory and carved MADE IN JAPAN.

Between 1997 and 2007, when woodworking were done by outside manufactures (both domestic and international) and D musical instruments assembled the parts, the products are carved CRAFTED IN JAPAN.

After 2008, since D musical instruments invested in plants and equipment to do woodworking by itself, the products are completely made by it in Japan, and they are carved MADE IN JAPAN.

Between 97 and 2007, the production places are complicated, and it is said that even if the products are carved CIJ some of them are made outside of Japan.

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Between 1982 and 1997, when the company was F's subsidiary, they had been made in F's factory and engraved MADE IN JAPAN.

Between 1997 and 2007, when woodworking were done by outside manufactures (both domestic and international) and D musical instruments assembled the parts, the products had been engraved CRAFTED IN JAPAN.

After 2008, since D musical instruments invested in plants and equipment to do woodworking on their own, the products have entirely made in Japan, and they are engraved MADE IN JAPAN.

Between 97 and 2007, the production places had been complicated, and it is said that even if the products are engraved CIJ some of them are made outside of Japan.

元の翻訳
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add the website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add the special website by ourselves?

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I am not a native speaker of English, so I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add the websites such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add a specific website by ourselves?

元の翻訳
As I am not a native English speaker, I have difficulties in well unstanding English.
For example, could you tacked on site such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube, iTunes, etc. ?
Or is it too hard for you to tack on specific website by yourself?

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As I am not a native speaker of English, I have difficulties in understanding English well.
For example, could you tack on sites such as Google, Yahoo, YouTube, iTunes, etc. ?
Or is it too hard for you to tack on specific website by yourself?

元の翻訳
I have received the description in detail, and I'm thinking of delivering the satisfactory goods to tou.
Recently, I displayed product on ebay separately, it is 4 Tamahagane (knife).
Because there is the link of photo below, please tell me the Tamahagane you want.
And inside, the high quality is number 3.
Last time, because the tracking number was not attached on the Tamahagane, please return it by general air mail.
Since I want to have a good deal in the future, I will pay the round-trip shipping.
About the difference of change of goods, I will inform you again about the calculation.

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I have received the description in detail, and I'm thinking of delivering the satisfactory goods to tou.
Recently, I displayed product on ebay separately, it is 4 Tamahagane (knife).
Because there is the link of photo below, please tell me the Tamahagane you want.
And among them, number 3 is of high quality.
Because the tracking number was not attached on the Tamahagane I sent you last time, please return it by general air mail.
Since I want to have a good deal in the future, I will pay the round-trip shipping.
About the difference of change of goods, I will inform you again about the calculation.

元の翻訳
With the detail explanation from you, I'd like to deliver the products satisfying you .

Currently, besides the tamahagane I exhibit at eBay, I have four other.

Please let me know what you want from the pictures below.

Of the three, No.3 is the top quality.

Please send me back the tamahagane I send earlier by general air mail without putting the trucking number.

Because I wish to deal with you friendly in the future, I will pay all postage for sending and receiving.

I let you know the balance of the exchanged products later.

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With the detailed explanation from you, I'd like to deliver the products satisfying you .

Currently, besides the tamahagane I exhibit at eBay, I have four other.

Please let me know what you want from the pictures below.

Of the three, No.3 is of top quality.

Please send me back the tamahagane I send earlier by general air mail without putting the tracking number.

Because I wish to deal with you friendly in the future, I will pay all postage for sending and receiving.

I let you know the balance of the exchanged products later.

元の翻訳
Thank you for offering me the K10U!
It will be useful this time.
But we haven't received the K10U yet.
I'm also responsible in the NIJ of Product Specialist, because I'm waiting for the support for the artist who didn't bring the K10U, I'm so happy if you could reply as soon as possible.
Then I need an offering of KKS49, can we make a request here?
KKS49 is only for me.

It's possible to complete the work during Wednesday.

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Thank you for offering me the K10U!
It will be useful for us in future.
But we haven't received the K10U yet.
I'm also responsible for the NIJ of Product Specialist, because I'm waiting for the support for the artist who didn't bring the K10U, I'm so happy if you could reply us as soon as possible.
Then I need an offering of KKS49, can we make a request here?
KKS49 is only for me.

It's possible to complete the work during Wednesday.

元の翻訳
Thank you for providing K10U.
I will use it for the reference in the future.
However, I have not received K10U yet.
I am in charge of product specialist of NIJ.
As I do not have the K10U and I am waiting for a request of support from artists, I would be glad if you
work on it as promptly as possible.
As I have been asking that you provide KKS49, have you received my message?
As for the KKS49, only the amount necessary for me is enough.

I can complete the work on Wednesday.

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Thank you for providing K10U.
I will use it for the reference in the future.
However, I have not received K10U yet.
I am also in charge of product specialist of NIJ.
As I do not have the K10U I am waiting for a request of support from artists, I would be glad if you
work on it as promptly as possible.
Also I have been asking that you provide KKS49, have you received my message?
As for the KKS49, only the amount necessary for me is enough.

I should be able to complete the work on Wednesday.

元の翻訳
Thank you for offering K10U!
I will make the most of it for future opportunities.
I, however, have not received K10U as of yet.
I am in charge of NIJ's Product Specialist, but since I do not have K10U, as the current status I have been asking artists to wait for sending me their support requests. Therefore your prompt arrangement on this is appreciated.
Also, I have been requesting for the provision of KKS49, and I was wondering if this request has reached to you already?
It would be okay if you could arrange KKS49 only for me.

I should be able to complete my job by the end of Wednesday.

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Thank you for offering K10U!
I will make the most of it for future opportunities.
I, however, have not received K10U as of yet.
I am also in charge of NIJ's Product Specialist, but since I do not have K10U, as the current status I have been asking artists to wait for sending me their support requests. Therefore your prompt arrangement on this is appreciated.
Also, I have been requesting for the provision of KKS49, and I was wondering if this request has reached to you already?
It would be okay if you could arrange KKS49 only for me.

I should be able to complete my job by the end of Wednesday.