和田 峻弥 (shun26) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Today, I went to postal office in Japan.
I talked about long delay of your cargo with postal chief.
I have always handed in document of traking survey.
I wait for the result of it from postal office in USA.
Usually, they answer the inquiry in two or three weeks after handing in documents.
I am very sorry about that.
Please wait for it in end of this month.
I promise you that I reimbuse you all if your cargo lost.
And also, you will get free postage from next dealings for my apology.
Please accept this matter.

修正後
Today, I went to postal office in Japan.
I talked about long delay of your cargo with postal chief.
I have always handed in document for traking survey.
I wait for the result of it from postal office in USA.
Usually, they give answer to the inquiry two or three weeks after documents are handed in.
I am very sorry about that.
Please wait for it until the end of this month.
I promise you that I reimbuse you all if your cargo is lost.
And also, you will get free postage from next dealings as my apology.
Please accept this matter.

元の翻訳
Today, I went to postal office in Japan.
I talked about long delay of your cargo with postal chief.
I have always handed in document of traking survey.
I wait for the result of it from postal office in USA.
Usually, they answer the inquiry in two or three weeks after handing in documents.
I am very sorry about that.
Please wait for it in end of this month.
I promise you that I reimbuse you all if your cargo lost.
And also, you will get free postage from next dealings for my apology.
Please accept this matter.

修正後
Today, I went to a postal office in Japan.
I talked about the long delay of your package with a postal chief.
I have always handed in a document of tracking investigation.
I wait for the result of it from a postal office in USA.
Usually, they answer to the inquiry takes two to three weeks after handing in the documents.
I am very sorry about that.
Please wait for it by the end of this month.
I promise you that I refund you all if your package is lost.
And also, you will get free postage for your next dealing as my apology.
Please accept this matter.

元の翻訳
Dear ◯◯◯◯
Thank you for your help always.

I filled in to reissue paper of PIN number and sent you it long before.
Would you receive the letter？

When would you send me new PIN number by post ?
Please cope with it immediately.

修正後
Dear ◯◯◯◯
Thank you for your help always.

I filled in a reissue document of PIN number and sent you it long time ago.
Did you receive the letter？

When would you send me the new PIN number by post ?
Please cope with it immediately.