russ87 — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
It is a hard to see it from the picture, therefore I will ask you.
Please tell me about condition of this doll.
Does a doll have cracks or chip or restration history?

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It is a hard to see from the picture, so I will just ask you.
Please tell me about the condition of this doll.
Does the doll have any cracks or chips, or restoration history?

元の翻訳
Something is wrong with the microphone gain.
The microphone picks up distant sound.
Consequently, it generates noise.

修正後
Something is wrong with the microphone gain.
Even at the lowest volume level, the microphone picks up distant sound.
Consequently, it generates noise.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the excellent rating you gave to me.
I work as an exporter in Japan.
Japanese products are top quality products.
I want these great products to reach the people around world.
If you need any other products, please don't hesitate to request from me.
I will do all my best to find it for you.
Also, if there's something you want to know about Japan, please ask me anything.
I want to know many things about your country too.
I sincerely hope for our continued successful relations.
Once again, thank you very much!

修正後
Thank you for the excellent rating you gave to me.
I work as an exporter in Japan.
Japanese products are top quality products.
I want these great products to reach people around the world.
If you need any other products, please don't hesitate to request them from me.
I will do my best to find them for you.
Also, if there's something you want to know about Japan, please ask me anything.
I want to know many things about your country too.
I sincerely hope for our continued business relationship.
Once again, thank you very much!

元の翻訳
I purchased a pair of shoes from you the other day. I love the design of it. But this one is too large for me, so could you replace it?
I bought a size US 10 of it, please replace it with US 9.

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I purchased a pair of shoes from you the other day. I love the design of it. But this pair is too large for me, so could I exchange it?
I bought a size US 10, so please exchange it with US 9.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the contact. I came able to set up SMS with my mobile phone. Can I ask one more question, how do I charge my card by a credit card ? Can you guide me what I need to do for it ?

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Thanks for contact me. I was able to set up SMS with my mobile phone. Just one more question, how do I charge my card by credit card ? Can you tell me what I need to do for it ?