成瀬　智重美 (pumpkin) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
It looks like the refund hasn't been done yet on the transaction display.
Please contact me if I need to proceed a order cancel on ebay etc.

Please arrange for it as soon as possible.
Thank you.

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It looks like the refund hasn't been done yet (on) (seeing の方がいいのでは。display 上での返金ではないでしょうから）the transaction display.
Please contact me if I need to proceed (a) (anです） order cancel on ebay etc.

Please arrange for it as soon as possible.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
He cooerated well with the parties and did most of the work that was necessary for supporting multi dc.
In Q1's Hack Week, he made an operative application based on his unique idea with the support of several people. As you can see, he has an ability and a passion to implement his original idea.

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He did an excellent job of collaborating with the parties involved and did most of the work that was necessary for supporting multi dc.
Based on his unique idea he managed to build a working application with the support of several people during the Q1 of the HackWeek. ↵
As you can see, he has the ability and the passion to turn his original idea into reality.

元の翻訳
Lots of Japanese people use a cute lunch box, lunch bag and a water bottle for lunch time to enjoy. We are featuring many items relating to lunch time.
Nowadays, there are a lot of recipes for cute hand-made japanese lunch box on the internet. Let's make a lunch box with these items! The T-shirt with a cat that wears big glasses is cute! Not only girls who like Harajyuku fashion but all girls can't miss it if you are interested in Japanese cute fashion.

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Lots of Japanese people use cute lunch boxes, lunch bags and water bottles and enjoy their lunch. We are featuring many items for lunch time.
Nowadays, there are a lot of recipes for cute hand-made Japanese lunch box on the internet. Let's search them and make a lunch box with these items! The cat drawn on the T-shirt with big glasses is cute! Not only girls who like Harajuku fashion but all girls can't miss it if you are interested in Japanese cute fashion.