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I don't know the reason but somehow an error occurs in the page of payment and I can't proceed payment.
I'm waiting for your reply.

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I don't know the reason but somehow an error occurs in the payment page therefore I can't proceed with the payment.
I'm waiting for your reply.

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We make a part of this article by referring to an information of "A".

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A part of this article is drawn up based on the information of "A."

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Since it's awaited, I share about greeting in Japan.

We use the phrase "Hajimemashite" to those who we meet for the first time. This corresponds to "Nice to meet you" in English.

Generally greetings change in morning, daytime, and night.
In morning, we say "Ohayo(write Ohayou)" which corresponds Good morning, in daytime we say "Konnichiwa (write Konnichiha)", and in night "Konbanwa (write Konbanha)".
Regarding to "Ohayo", when we use the word to superiors, it changes to "Ohayou gozaimasu".

When you see Japanese people, please talk to them with these phrases. They'll be glad to hear that.

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Since it's awaited, I share about greeting in Japan.

We use the phrase "Hajimemashite" to those who we meet for the first time. This corresponds to "Nice to meet you" in English.

Generally greetings change in the morning, in the afternoon and at night.
In morning, we say "Ohayo(write Ohayou)" which corresponds Good morning, in daytime we say "Konnichiwa (write Konnichiha)", and in night "Konbanwa (write Konbanha)".
Regarding to "Ohayo", when we use the word to superiors, it changes to "Ohayou gozaimasu".

When you see Japanese people, please talk to them with these phrases. They'll be glad to hear that.

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Biei Hill ( in Hokkaido )

Biei town is famous for representative touristic spots in Hokkaido together with neighboring Furano city. The landscape of its hill and flowers is very popular and lots of migrants from other prefectures come to the city.
Biei Hill has many touristic points which look like pictures, and those beautiful landscapes were used in TV commercial and drama.

Biei Hill looks like full-scale flower garden in the park, but most of the area are estates belonging to local farmers. To protect this agricultural landscape for long, please keep out from stepping into those farm and enjoy walking and taking photographs of these beautiful landscapes from paved roads.

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Biei Hill ( in Hokkaido )

Biei town is famous for representative touristic spots in Hokkaido together with neighboring Furano city. The landscape of its hill and flowers is very popular and lots of migrants from other prefectures come to the city.
Biei Hill has many touristic points which look like pictures, and those beautiful landscapes were used in TV commercials and dramas.

Biei Hill looks like full-scale flower garden in the park, but most of the area are estates belonging to local farmers. To protect this agricultural landscape for long, please keep out from stepping into those farm and enjoy walking and taking photographs of these beautiful landscapes from paved roads.

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When the independence of Scotland would be accepted, including the case of Spain which was held up after the world war the second, it might give some impact on several areas of western Europe to go to independent movements.

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If the independence of Scotland would be accepted, including the case of Spain which was held up after the Second World War, it might give some impact to independent movements in several areas of western Europe.

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Thank you for your reply first of all.
As long as we checked, the number of merchandises which is not suitable for sale is only one.
Though the white thing which can be seen in the photo looks harmless fungi, we refrain from selling to be safe.

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Thank you for your reply.
We checked and the number of products that are not suitable for sale is only one.
Though the white thing that appears in the photo looks like harmless fungi, we will refrain from selling it for safety reasons.

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According to Japan Post, it might take more than 3 weeks depending on the region which might be delivered. ( * if it takes more than a month, that might be a shipping trouble.)

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It takes around 3 weeks until Japan Post would get the international tracking result.

Could you ask the call center if the merchandise already arrives at the adrress?


Here the office number:
111111111

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According to Japan Post, it might take more than three weeks depending on destinations. ( * if it takes more than a month, that might be a shipping trouble.)

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It takes around three weeks until Japan Post would get the international tracking result.

Could you ask the call center if the merchandise already arrives at the shipping address?


The dedicated phone number for international mail
111111111

元の翻訳
According to Japan Post, it might take more than 3 weeks depending on the region which might be delivered. ( * if it takes more than a month, that might be a shipping trouble.)

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It takes around 3 weeks until Japan Post would get the international tracking result.

Could you ask the call center if the merchandise already arrives at the adrress?


Here the office number:
111111111

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According to Japan Post, it might take more than 3 weeks depending on the region to which the product is delivered. ( * if it takes more than a month, it might be because of a shipping trouble.)

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It takes around 3 weeks until Japan Post would get the international tracking result.

Could you ask the call center if the merchandise already arrived at the address?


Here the office number:
111111111

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I have a request. "h" is a doll of baby which I'll give to my friend for gift. My friend asks that the weight of the doll should be 6.7 pond. One more thing, please send me a photo of the doll in the angle which makes the face look symmetrically after you finished making the hair. According to my friend, the mouth of the doll looks distorted on the photo you gave me before. Though I told my friend it's symmetry so please feel at ease, my friend wasn't convinced. I'm so sorry for making troubles and bothering you though you're busy. Yet I'm waiting for your reply.

Regards,

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I have a request. "H" is a baby doll which I'll give to my friend as a gift. My friend asks that the doll should weigh 6.7 pond [spelling]. One more thing, please send me a photo of the doll in the angle which makes the face look symmetrically after you finish making the hair. According to my friend, the mouth of the doll looks distorted in the photo you gave me before. Though I told my friend it's symmetry so please feel at ease [direct vs. indirect], my friend wasn't convinced. I'm so sorry for bothering you though you're busy. I'm waiting for your reply.

Regards,

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Thank you for checking the quantity of storage.
Please ship those 5 merchandises to Yamato Transport co., ltd together with the goods I'll order tomorrow.

Thank you for sending me an invoice.
I already paid for July already.
For August payment, I'll pay at the end of this month as scheduled.

And more, the catalogue hasn't been sent yet.
Please send it together with the next shipment.

About "Light green", could you ship those following ordered?
Or coudn't you ship all those too?
Please check the condition and give me a response.

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Thank you for checking the quantity of storage.
Please ship those 5 merchandises to Yamato Transport co., ltd together with the goods I'll order tomorrow.

Thank you for sending me an invoice.
I already paid for July.
For August payment, I'll pay at the end of this month as scheduled.

And more, the catalogue hasn't been sent yet.
Please send it together with the next shipment.

About "Light green", could you ship those following ordered?
Or coudn't you ship all those too?
Please check the condition and give me a response.