Oo Theong Siang (ots90) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I have asked Mr./Ms. () to refund $100 to you for me.
Please kindly receive.

In the meanwhile, I will submitted a request of changing evaluation.

Sorry to trouble you, but please kindly change the evaluation.

修正後
I have asked Mr./Ms. () to refund $100 to you for me.
Please kindly accept it.

In the meanwhile, I submit a request of changing evaluation.

Sorry to trouble you, but please kindly change the evaluation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your massage.
I sent the article, but it returned in mid course because it was larger than that of stipulated size to France.
I approgize it and I will cancel it and refund you.

修正後
Thank you for your message.
I shipped the article, but it was returned to me in the middle of the shipment due to exceeding the maximum allowed size for shipping to France.
I apologize for it but I will cancel your order and issue you a full refund.

元の翻訳
Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have could you please provide the inquiry number please.

I am now considering an additional order, I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

If the goods have not shipped as yet, they are now too late, I request a full refund
and please understand that we will have no future dealings with you in business.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.

修正後
Have the goods been shipped as yet?
If they have, could you please provide me with the inquiry number?

I am now considering an additional order, so I ask that you contact us as soon as possible.

In the case that the goods have not been shipped as yet, the response is too late so I will request a full refund
and please understand that we will have no future dealings with you in business.

** I will be reporting this to PayPal if I have not heard from you by the 1st of September, 23:59 Japan time.