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元の翻訳 We are going to sell online this product in Asia, is there any problems for it? It's going to be released on ○ in Japan, we'd like to release it in Asia at the same time. We are planning to use this sales results in Asia as topics because it would be very effective marketing tool in Japan. If the scene with A is used in the TV program, would you send us the recorded data of the scene? We'd like to ask him if it's possible to send us pictures by ○, we can deal with either of them.
修正後 We are planning to sell this product online in Asia, but are there any problems with this? It's going to be released on ○ in Japan, and we'd like to release it in Asia at the same time. We are planning to use these sales results in Asia because it could be used as a topic surrounding our company and therefore a very effective marketing tool in Japan. If the scene with A is used in the TV program, would you send us the recording data of the scene? If you could possibly send it by the ◯th, we would like to ask him to do it, but either way we can work out something.