Daichi (o63odt) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your suggestion.
It is currently built in that way in order to shun the bug in iOS7.
It will remain as it is until the bug in the OS is removed.
If any good solution will be found, it will be revised for sure.

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Thank you for your suggestion.
It is currently built in that way in order to avoid the bug in iOS7.
It will remain as it is, until the bug in the OS is removed.
Until then, if a good solution is found, we would like to revised it.

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For ordering the shoes, I separated the order sheets for campus and leather materials. It is because customs will check the leather items. They are in a different order sheets, but please dispatch them at the same time. This seller below is selling sandals with cheap price. Please tell the seller to raise the price of the products up.

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For ordering the shoes, I separated the order sheets for campus and leather materials. It is because when leather goods go through customs, they will always check the items. They are in a different order sheets, but please dispatch them at the same time. This seller below is selling sandals at an affordable price. Please tell the seller to raise the price of the products.

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We present you with "Loving Nail Winter" . Lovely winter to you... With lots of love from Sha-Nail Pro...

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We present you with "Nail of Love in Winter". A lovely winter to you... With lots of love from Sha-Nail Pro...

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Thank you for your feedback.
I feel so sorry because it was a negative feedback.
It was our fault not to notice that it didn't mention it was a do-it-yourself kid on the product information page.
We sincerely apologize.
However, I would like you to know that it was not me who created the webpage for the products.

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Thank you for your feedback.
It is unfortunate that the feedback was negative.
We were at fault for not realizing that the product information page did not mention that the product was a do-it-yourself kit.
We sincerely apologize.
However, I would like you to know that I was not the one who created the webpage for the products.

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The area around Mount Fuji is famous for textile industry. There has been a very rare and simple style of textile called "Ooishi tsumugi" near Lake Kawaguchi. The program consists of the lecture on the history of "Ooshima tsumugi" and its features. And then we would try making our very own rug by recycling the leftover materials from the textile industries around Mt. Fuji area which are still producing in traditional manners.

Using the"Aota" stone, the material traditionally used for engraving seals, you would be making your original seal. Yamanashi prefecture ranks first in its share of seals. You can enjoy this hands-on style of making seals. You may design and then engrave it to make your own seal.

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The area around Mount Fuji is famous for its textile industry. There has been a very rare and simple style of textile called "Ooishi tsumugi" near Lake Kawaguchi. The program is comprised of listening to the lecture on the history of "Ooshima tsumugi" and its features, and then challenging the traditional manner of rug making, by recycling the leftover materials from the textile industries around Mt. Fuji area.

Make your original seal using the"Aota" stone, the material traditionally used for engraving seals. Yamanashi prefecture ranks first in its share of seals. You can enjoy this hands-on style of making seals. You may design and then engrave it to make your own seal.

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For the products from other companies, the respective manufacturing plants have received certifications from relevant authorities in Japan.

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For the products from other companies, the manufacturing plants have received authorization within Japan.

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The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two ones.
I e-mail you the two invoices of PayPal after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)↵

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The bass in the photograph is the sample.
The bass’ grain and pattern differ one by one, since it is purchased from a wholesaler.
I can divide the invoice into two separate ones.
I will e-mail you the two PayPal invoices after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)

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Kaka Messi was affected by Captain tsubasa how do they feel about Fernando Torres`s Captain tsubasa’s interview (Japanese)
Takahashi×Brazil leader kaka’s interview.

The movie’s advertisement was put movie poster on somewhere like theater and street Corner. The book was major work in 1960-1970years make through over 100 Movie’s poster, seek movie and Graphic connection.

National train series113 Country side type Hanwaline color

Print in Meiji 25 year
It’s amazing nice color woodcut print except just have a little small insect hole , Thumbtack mark on the corner this print have no major damage .
Size■1 about 25.5×37.4↵

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Capturing the thoughts of Kaka, Messi, and Fernando Torres who were influenced by Captain Tsubasa and their feelings toward Captain Tsubasa(Japanese)
Takahashi×Kaka of the Brazil National Team Interview.

For the movie’s advertisement, movie posters were placed in theaters and street corners. The book placed an emphasis on the 100 posters of the works in the 1960-1970's and seeks to find the connection of film and graphism.

National train series113 Country side type Hanwaline color

Printed in Meiji year 25
A little small insect hole and a thumbtack mark on the corner but no other major damage .
It’s an amazing colorful woodblock print↵
Size■1 about 25.5×37.4

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We have additional information regarding a battery charger for the radio control car you purchased. We found out that the 7.2V battery charger does not handle universal voltage power supply. This charger is specially for 100V, and you will need a converter in the U.S. to use it.

We could send you a same-type charger, which handles the voltage in US., for free, although it will be send in a separate package from the radio control car.

Or we could refund $15, which is equivalent to the original charger, and send you the radio control car only.

Please let us know which you would prefer.

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We have additional information regarding the battery charger for the radio control car you purchased. We found out that the 7.2V battery charger does not handle universal voltage power supply. This charger is specified for 100V, and you will need a converter to use it in the U.S.

We could send you a charger of the same type, which handles the voltage in the US, free of charge. It will be sent in a separate package from the radio control car.

Or if you wish, it can be refundable for $15, which is equivalent to the original charger, and we will only send you the radio control car.

Please let us know which you would prefer.

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Limited Edition !!!! Real leather key cases made by Japanese artisans.

Perfect for your luxury car.
Handmade real-leather key cases produced in Japan.

These real leather keycases have been handmade in a small workshop in Japan.

They are very rare products that cannot be found in normal stores as only a limited number of them are made.

The material used for these cases is Hermann Oak Leather (top-quality leather used in the US for horse riding appliances) making these cases very strong and long-lasting.

Being able to also store remote control car keys, it also satisfies the needs of luxury car owners such as those of Mercedes Benz and BMW.

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Limited Edition !!!! Real leather key cases made by Japanese artisans.

Perfect for your luxury car.
Handmade genuine leather key cases produced in Japan.

These genuine leather key cases have been handmade in a small workshop in Japan.

These products are very rare and they cannot be found in normal stores as only a limited number of them are made.

The material used for these cases is Hermann Oak Leather (the top-quality leather used in the US for horse riding appliances) making these cases very strong and wear resistant.

The cases also store remote control car keys, and satisfies the needs of luxury car owners such as those of Mercedes Benz and BMW.