翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 2 Reviews / 2013/09/26 09:56:44

oier9
oier9 52 より分かりやすい翻訳を目指しています。よろしくお願いします。
日本語

写真のベースはサンプルになります。
問屋からの仕入れになりますので木目や模様は一点一点、異なります。

請求書を二つに分けることは可能です。
ご購入後にPayPalの請求を2通、メールしますのでそちらでお支払を
お願いいたします。

請求1
$600

請求2
$534.99

合計$1134.99(商品代金$999.99+送料$135)

英語

The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two ones.
I e-mail you the two invoices of PayPal after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)

レビュー ( 2 )

o63odt 61 Extensive experience in providing hig...
o63odtはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/26 12:26:01

元の翻訳
The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two ones.
I e-mail you the two invoices of PayPal after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)

修正後
The bass in the photograph is the sample.
The bass’ grain and pattern differ one by one, since it is purchased from a wholesaler.
I can divide the invoice into two separate ones.
I will e-mail you the two PayPal invoices after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)

この文章のベースはbass guitarのことです。

このレビューを50%の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

oier9 oier9 2013/09/26 16:01:43

ご指摘ありがとうございます。細かところもチェックしていただいて助かります。

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russ87 68
russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/26 14:11:42

元の翻訳
The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two ones.
I e-mail you the two invoices of PayPal after the purchase. So please make payments with them.

Invoice 1
$ 600
Invoice 2
$ 534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $ 999.99 + shipping fee $ 135)

修正後
The base in the photograph is sample.
The bases’ grain and pattern differ each because we purchase them from the wholesaler.
I can divide this invoice into two.
I will e-mail you the two invoices through PayPal after your purchase, so please use these to make the payments.

Invoice 1
$600
Invoice 2
$534.99
Total price $ 1134.99 (product price $999.99 + shipping fee $135)

Pretty good translation, two very basic grammatical errors unfortunately.

このレビューを100%の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

oier9 oier9 2013/09/26 16:04:26

Thank you so much for reviewing. I'll practice more and more.

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