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元の翻訳
Regarding the refund, I have already made the refund.
I checked will PayPal, and they say that if you have paid by a credit card, then refund will be made to your credit card.
They say that sometimes the process takes time.
If you made the payment by the remainder in the PayPal account, then the refund will be promptly made.
Is there anything else that I can help you with?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Regarding the refund, I have already made the refund.
I checked with PayPal, and they say that if you have paid by a credit card, then refund will be made to your credit card acconut.
They say that sometimes the process takes time.
If you made the payment from your PayPal account, then the refund will be promptly made.
Is there anything else that I can help you with?
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing from us.
As for your question, this item is an used item which was given to me from a friend.
There will be no additional fees. Regarding the fee, please verify the invoice that I will send to you later on.
It is currently nighttime in Japan, so I will inquire the manufacturer about the compatibility with NTSC, and whether English is accepted or not, by tomorrow morning.
I will contact you again after the inquiry, so I appreciate if you would wait for a while.
Thank you.

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Thank you for purchasing from us. (Thank you for shopping with usでもいいかもしれません）
As for your question, this item is an used item which was given to me from a friend.
There will be no additional fees. Regarding the fee, please verify the invoice that I will send to you later on.
It is currently nighttime in Japan, so I will inquire the manufacturer about the compatibility with NTSC, and whether English is accepted or not, by tomorrow morning.　（ｂｙにすると明日の朝までになります）
I will contact you again after the inquiry, so I appreciate if you would wait for a while.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I'm Japanese, so I can buy it for you at lower price than buying it at eBay. However, the shipping fee will be expensive. If that is OK with you, I will buy it and send it to you. If you feel uneasy about directly paying to PayPal, then you can buy it through eBay, but the price will be higher because handling fee for eBay will be charged. I can put it out of the box, and send only the card. The following will be the price. It is the same as the price bought in Japan.

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I'm Japanese, so I can buy it for you at a lower price than eBay. However, the shipping fee will be expensive. If that is OK with you, I will buy it and send it to you. If you feel uneasy about directly paying to PayPal, then you can pay through eBay, but the price will be higher because a handling fee for eBay will be charged. I can take it out of the box and send you only the card. The following is the price. It is the same as the price you would pay in Japan.

元の翻訳
I'm Japanese, so I can buy it for you at lower price than buying it at eBay. However, the shipping fee will be expensive. If that is OK with you, I will buy it and send it to you. If you feel uneasy about directly paying to PayPal, then you can buy it through eBay, but the price will be higher because handling fee for eBay will be charged. I can put it out of the box, and send only the card. The following will be the price. It is the same as the price bought in Japan.

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I'm Japanese, so I can buy it for you at the lower price than buying it at eBay. However, the shipping fee will be expensive. If that is OK with you, I will buy it and send it to you. If you feel uneasy about directly paying to PayPal, then you can buy it through eBay, but the price will be higher because handling fee for eBay will be charged. I can take it out of the box, and send you only the card. The following is the price. It is the same price as when buying in Japan.

元の翻訳
これは、我々の参加の取り決めに違反しています。送料は固定されていることにご注意ください。取引が終了した後には、売主は追加の送料またはどのような料金も請求できません。商品を発送する際に、十分な送料を支払うことは売主の責任です。今回の状況において、残念ながらこれ以上の情報を提供できません。

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これは、我々の参加の取り決めに違反しています。送料は固定されていることにご注意ください。取引が終了した後には、販売者はいかなる追加の送料またはその他の料金も請求できません。商品を発送する際に、十分な送料を支払うことは販売者の責任です。今回の状況において、残念ながらこれ以上の情報を提供できません。

元の翻訳
イギリスに基盤がある会社として、非EECの国または免税の地域以外には、注文に際しVATを払うように要求されています。

VATが適用されていない場合、オンライン上では売値は同じですが、注文の全額は House of Fraserに支払われ、注文価格において私たちがHMRCへの支払いに用いた部分はありません。

不運なことに、現在はVATを請求しませんが、支払われた価格は変わりません。つまり、VATを返金できません。お客様に私どものウェブサイトの諸条件について言及して下さい。

「提示されたすべての価格はVATを含んでおります。EU外に配達された商品についてVATは請求されませんが、私どものウェブサイトでは、それぞれの製品について一つの価格を提示しております」

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イギリスに基盤がある会社として、非EECの国または免税の地域以外には、注文に際しVATを払うように要求されています。

{イギリスに本拠地を置く会社なので、欧州経済共同体(EEC)非加盟国や免税地域以外からの注文に対して、付加価値税(VAT)の支払を要求されています。}↵
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VATが適用されていない場合、オンライン上では売値は同じですが、注文の全額は House of Fraserに支払われ、注文価格において私たちがHMRCへの支払いに用いた部分はありません。

{VATが適用されない場合、オンライン上での販売価格は同じですが、注文処理経費全額は House of Fraser百貨店に支払い、HMRC(英国歳入税関庁：日本の税関に当たる)への支払いには使えません。}↵
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不運なことに、現在はVATを請求しませんが、支払われた価格は変わりません。つまり、VATを返金できません。お客様に私どものウェブサイトの諸条件について言及して下さい。

{残念なことに、現在当社はVATを請求しませんので、(お客様の)支払った価格にVATは含まれていません。つまり、VATを(お客様に)返金できません。お客様には、当社ウェブサイトの売買条件を閲覧するようお伝えください。}↵
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｢提示されたすべての価格はVATを含んでおります。EU外に配達された商品についてVATは請求されませんが、私どものウェブサイトでは、それぞれの製品について一つの価格を提示しております」↵
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{｢出品商品価格全てにはVATが含まれています。欧州連合外に配送される商品についてのVATを請求されませんが、当社ウェブサイトでは、それぞれの製品について(欧州経済共同体加盟国か非加盟国に関らず)単一販売価格としています。」}

元の翻訳
Thank you for telling us the available date for having a meeting.
I will give you an answer at Mar. 10th, after discussing it with Tanaka.
If possible, we would like to have a MTG at Cambridge,
because we would like to see your office and your development eivironment.

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Thank you for telling us the available date for having a meeting.
I will give you an answer on Mar. 10th, after discussing it with Tanaka.
If possible, we would like to have a MTG at Cambridge,
because we would like to see your office and your development eivironment.

元の翻訳
I purchased item A from a shop in US in February.
I live in Phillipines, so I sent item A to Philippines by air.
The amplifier of the item arrived so I used them, but there was an initial failure that the sound crackles even in small volumes.
Therefore, I want it to be repaired using your one-year warranty, but can it be fixed in the distributor in Philippines?
If it can be repaired, what type of documents are needed?
I will be waiting for your reply.

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I purchased item A from a shop in the US in February.
I live in Phillipines, so I had item A sent to the Philippines by air.
The amplifier of the item arrived so I used them, but there was an initial failure that the sound crackles even in small volumes.
Therefore, I want it to be repaired using your one-year warranty, but can it be fixed in the distributor in the Philippines?
If it can be repaired, what type of documents would I need?
I will be waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
Do you know this site?
The Fitbit company officialy announced that your skin might have a rash if you wrap this item around your hand.
This item has initial failure.
Currently, the Fitbit is recalling the items.
The item I purchased is not opened yet.
I will return the item, so please make a prompt refund.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Do you know this website?
Fitbit company officially announced that users' skin might have a rash if you wrap this item around your hand.
This item has initial defect.
Currently,Fitbit is recalling the items.
The item I purchased is unopened and still in the original package .
I will return the item, so please make a prompt refund.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I have contacted you to inform that I shipped the wrong item to you.
We have shipped you a hard case for semiacoustic guitars, and not for SGs, by the mistake by the person in charge of shipping. I am awfully sorry.

The item is currently passing the customs, and the request for the returning of the item is underway.
However, if by any chance the item arrived to you, I would like you to return the item without receiving (signing) the item.
If you one received it, the return and the exchange becomes quite complicated,

Of course, we will arrange for the correct item immediately.

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I have contacted you to inform that I shipped the wrong item to you.
We have shipped you a hard case for semiacoustic guitars, not for SGs, by mistake caused by the person in charge of shipping. I am awfully sorry.

The item is currently passing the customs, and the request for the returning of the item is under way.
However, if by any chance the item arrived to you, I would like you to return the item without receiving (signing) the item.
If you one received it, the return and the exchange becomes quite complicated,

Of course, we will arrange for the correct item immediately.

元の翻訳
あなたから支払いを受けていない商品の、購入費付けと商品ＩＤを連絡して下さい。

さてケンイチさん、現在あなたの商品をお届け中です！商品が到着したら、eBayのメッセージシステムを通してご連絡頂くか、もし十分にご満足いただけた場合は、とても良いフィードバックを頂ければと思います。もし最大の評価を下すことはできないと判断された場合には、それは私どもが自身の仕事をきちんと行わなかったということであります。フィードバックを残す前に、生じた問題を解決するチャンスを頂きたいと思います。それは、私たちが解決しなくてはいけないからではなく、私たちが解決したいからです。

いつもながら、あなたに幸せが多く訪れることを祈っております。また会えることを楽しみにしております。

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あなたから支払いを受けていない商品の、購入費付け日と商品ＩＤを連絡して下さい。

さてケンイチさん、現在あなたの商品をお届け中です！商品が到着したら、eBayのメッセージシステムを通してご連絡頂くか、もし十分にご満足いただけた場合は、とても良いフィードバックを頂ければと思います。もし最大の評価を下すことはできないと判断された場合には、それは私どもが自身の仕事をきちんと行わなかったということであります。フィードバックを残す前に、生じた問題を解決するチャンスを頂きたいと思います。それは、私たちが解決しなくてはいけないからではなく、私たちが解決したいからです。

いつもながら、あなたに幸せが多く訪れることを祈っております。また会えることを楽しみにしております。

元の翻訳
It was my preasure to introduce myself to you the other day at the a networking event taken place at Mandarine Oriental. Thank you very much.

I am Takana from B company. I had the honor of being introduced to you previously by Mr.A.

Some items we handle can be seen from here.

We would like to introduce Japanese items to small trading companies, retailers, or retail chains in Saudi Arabia.

Therefore, is it possible for you to introduce local companies or business managers to us?

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It was my preasure to introduce myself to you the other day at the a networking event taken place at Mandarine Oriental. Thank you very much.

I am Takana from B company. I had the honor of being introduced to you previously by Mr. A.

Some items we handle can be seen from here.

We would like to introduce Japanese items to small trading companies, retailers, and retail chains in Saudi Arabia.

Therefore, is it possible for you to introduce local companies or business managers to us?

元の翻訳
I shipped the item.
It is now at the post office.
I tried to verify the tracking number, but it is not updated yet.
We will be soon be able to track the situation of our item, after a little while.

Also, you are demanding the paypal to make the refund.
Please withdraw the complaint.
If you don't, the complaint on the paypal will remain, although I shipped you a new item.

Please cancel the complaint submitted to paypal.

If by any chance the delivered phone cannot be used, I will definitely make a refund to you at any price.
I believed you, and shipped the new item to you.
I want you to make sure that you return the item to me .

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I shipped the item.
It is now at the post office.
I tried to verify the tracking number, but it is not updated yet.
We will be able to track the situation of our item, after a little while.

Also, you are demanding the paypal to make the refund.
Please withdraw the complaint.
If you don't, the complaint on the paypal will remain, although I shipped you a new item.

Please cancel the complaint submitted to paypal.

If by any chance the delivered phone cannot be used, I will definitely make a refund to you at any price.
I believed you, and shipped the new item to you.
I want you to make sure that you return the item to me .

元の翻訳
I shipped the item.
It is now at the post office.
I tried to verify the tracking number, but it is not updated yet.
We will be soon be able to track the situation of our item, after a little while.

Also, you are demanding the paypal to make the refund.
Please withdraw the complaint.
If you don't, the complaint on the paypal will remain, although I shipped you a new item.

Please cancel the complaint submitted to paypal.

If by any chance the delivered phone cannot be used, I will definitely make a refund to you at any price.
I believed you, and shipped the new item to you.
I want you to make sure that you return the item to me .

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I shipped the item.
It is now at the post office.
I tried to verify the tracking number, but it has not been updated yet.
We will soon be able to track the status of our item, after a little while.

Also, you are requesting a refund from PayPal.
Please withdraw the claim.
If you don't, the claim to PayPal will remain, although I shipped a new item to you.

Please cancel the claim submitted to paypal.

If by any chance the delivered phone cannot be used, I will definitely make a refund to you.
I'm trusting you, so shipped the new item to you.
I want you to make sure to return the item to me .

元の翻訳
I verified the content of the package I recieved from you, and found that several items that I didn't order were included, and the amount of the item was also incorrect.
I received 19 units of type5A (horse) which is 1 unit short, 5 units of type A6 (cat) which is 15 units short, and 7 units of A9 (coffee cup) which is 3 units short.

Other that these, the variations of the illustration that I didn't order were included, 1-2 units each.
I don't want to pay for these items, because all I can do is to dispose them, for these are not sellable and thus not needed.

I want you to ship the 19 units which were insufficient, or make a discount for the 19 units, but is it possible?

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I verified the content of the package I recieved from you, and found that several items that I didn't order were included, and the quantities of the items were also incorrect.
I received 19 units of type5A (horse) which is 1 unit short, 5 units of type A6 (cat) which is 15 units short, and 7 units of A9 (coffee cup) which is 3 units short.

Other than these, the variations of the illustration that I didn't order were included, 1-2 units each.
I don't want to pay for these items, because all I can do is to dispose of them, for these are not sellable and thus not needed.

I want you to ship the missing 19 units, or deduct the amount of the 19 units, but is it possible?

元の翻訳
タイのチェンマイに住むフランス人であるMatthieu Aussaguel氏によって起業されたFliplingoは、ツイッター上の翻訳サービスである。実在の人間が文脈を訳すると言う点では、 LinqappやGengoに似ている。しかし、Fliplingoはチームで翻訳するため、LinqappやGengoのようにクラウドソーシングを利用しない。

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タイのチェンマイ在住のフランス人、Matthieu Aussaguel氏によって起業されたFliplingoは、ツイッター上の翻訳サービスである。実在の人間が文脈を訳すると言う点では、 LinqappやGengoに似ている。しかし、Fliplingoはチームで翻訳するため、LinqappやGengoのようにクラウドソーシングを利用しない。

元の翻訳
Fliplingoは1ツイートごとに世界中を翻訳

現在、ツイッター上では61ヶ国語が使用されている。驚くべきことに、上位10カ国のうち、3カ国がアジアからのツイートである－タイ、日本、そしてインドネシアから、である。ツイッター上の主要な言語はいまだに英語であるが、韓国語、マレー語、そして日本語のような他の言語も著しく突出している。ツイッター上で言語がとても重要であることに気付いていたタイに拠点を置く新興企業は、Fliplingoというサービスをローンチした。

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Fliplingoは1ツイートごとに世界中を翻訳

現在、ツイッター上では61ヶ国語が使用されている。驚くべきことに、ツイート数上位10カ国のうち、3カ国－タイ、日本、そしてインドネシアといったアジアの国である。ツイッター上の主要な言語はいまだに英語であるが、韓国語、マレー語、そして日本語のような他の言語も著しく突出している。ツイッター上で言語がとても重要であることに気付いていたタイに拠点を置く新興企業は、Fliplingoというサービスをローンチした。