Mnmie (mnme1019) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
それらのものが送られた住所はこちらです。
Dynamic CorporatinoHB308, 777-2 Shimotaga, Atami, 4130 102, Japan
近隣の方や荷物が安全に保管できる場所に放置されていないか、または郵便局に保管されてないかなど、荷物の行方について情報を集めることは可能でしょうか？
もしそれでも見つからなければ再度ご連絡をいただければこちらで対処致します。

修正後
それらのものが送られた住所はこちらです。
Dynamic CorporatinoHB308, 777-2 Shimotaga, Atami, 4130 102, Japan
近隣の方や荷物が安全に保管できる場所に放置されていないか、または郵便局に保管されてないかなど、荷物の行方について情報を集めて頂くことは可能でしょうか？
もしそれでも見つからなければ再度ご連絡をいただければこちらで対処致します。

元の翻訳
Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have gave you already but I though you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Is there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!

修正後
Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have given you already but I thought you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Are there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!

元の翻訳
Since I had time before the dinner, I visited observation room on the 38th floor of JR tower which is connected to Sapporo station.
I was fascinated by the view that was like thousands of jewelry scattered around myself in the dim but high-grade room.
This JR Tower observation room is designed to show the night view more outstanding in the low light of the room and each chairs at the window side is perfect for some who would like to enjoy the view alone. Of course, viewing night view here for couples, friends and families would be great too.

修正後
Since I had time before the dinner, I visited observation room on the 38th floor of JR tower which is connected to Sapporo station.
I was fascinated by the view that was like thousands of jewelry scattered around myself in the dim but high-grade room.
This JR Tower observation room is designed to show the night view more outstanding in the low light of the room and each chair at the window side is perfect for some who would like to enjoy the view alone. Of course, viewing night view here for couples, friends and families would be great too.