Mami S (mechamami) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I have a question about ordering, do you have any of defctive merchandise exept A, and sould I pay estimating price you give me before which except A, or better to do all together when I know whole prices?

thank you.

修正後
I have a question about the order. Do you have any other stockout items aside from A? And should I pay the total amount of the items excluding A, which you estimated for me before? Or is better to pay all together once the price of A is decided?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
About the order, is there anything defective except A?
And about payment, is it better to pay the amount of the products but or to pay the amount of the products, A included, after A's price is decided?

修正後
As for the order, is there any stockout items aside from A?
And as for the payment, is it better to pay the total amount of the products excluding A or to pay the total amount of the products including A after A's price is decided?

元の翻訳
Unlike Japan's main island, it was difficult to pass the winter in Hokkaido without using stove because of the climate. People started using wood fuel stove since around 1876 in Sapporo and coal fuel stove came out in 1890's. The price of firewood rose since the early 1920's due to the shortage of firewood after further development of land. Then the usage of coal increased rapidly after convenient coal stock stove became domestically-produced. Survey in 1937 showed the ratio of household using coal fuel took up 70% in cities and 33% in countryside. Even in Fukuoka prefecture, where climate is mild, many households used coal fuel. This is because Fukuoka prefecture is one of the coal producing areas.

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Unlike Japan's main island, it was difficult to pass the winter in Hokkaido without using stoves because of the climate. People started using wood fuel stoves since around 1876 in Sapporo, and coal fuel stoves came out in 1890's. The price of firewood rose in the early 1920's due to the shortage of firewood after further development of the land. Then the usage of coal increased rapidly after convenient coal stoves became domestically-produced. A survey in 1937 showed the ratio of household using coal fuel took up 70% in cities and 33% in countryside. Even in Fukuoka prefecture, where the climate is mild, many households used coal fuel. Yet, this was because Fukuoka prefecture was one of the coal producing areas.

元の翻訳
How to return goods and payback

Please log-in B.
And choose the cancel. return goods from order history.
It will issue the label of address we have to send back.
And it is all thing you need to do.

Please show me the trucking number and delivery cost because I owe your delivery cost.
Iwill peyback the product charge, postage after checking.

I have responsibility to correspondence.
I hope i can help you in the future.
Have a good day.

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How to return goods and refund

Please log-in to B.
And choose order history, return goods, then cancel.
It will issue the label of address where you have to send back to.
And that is the all things you need to do.

Could you please tell me the trucking number and delivery cost? I'd like to pay it for you.
After confirming it, I will refund you the total amount of the product price and the delivery charges.

I have responsibility to correspondence.
I hope I can help you in the future, too.
Have a good day.

元の翻訳
「私達はオープンソース技術を使い、コーディングを手伝ってくれる高校生を見つけました、」彼は言う。
「それがこんなに大きくなるとは思いませんでした。」

2003年、Furukawa氏は一般人向けに構築されたフォーラムShitaraba BBSを立ち上げた。 2004年、Furukawa氏は就職面接で当時インターネットの巨人だったライブドア最高経営責任者（CEO）のTakafumi Horie氏と会い、Horie氏がShitarabaBBSにより関心を持っていることが判明した。Furukawa氏はこのウェブサイトを約100万米ドルで売却し、Shitaraba BBSの管理を継続する仕事を引き受けた。

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「私達はオープンソース技術を使い、プログラミングを手伝ってくれる高校生を見つけました。」彼は言う。
「それがこんなに大きくなるとは思いませんでした。」

2003年、Furukawa氏は一般人向けに構築されたフォーラムShitaraba BBSを立ち上げた。 2004年、Furukawa氏は就職面接で当時インターネットの巨人だったライブドア最高経営責任者（CEO）のTakafumi Horie氏と会い、Horie氏がShitarabaBBSにより関心を持っていることが判明した。Furukawa氏はこのウェブサイトを約100万米ドルで売却し、Shitaraba BBSの管理を継続する仕事を引き受けた。

元の翻訳
A new exhibition hall, Kaohsiung Exhibition Center : KEC, opened on April 14th in Kaohsiung City of Southwest Taiwan.

It was the grand opening and the opening of a new theater exhibition and the opening ceremony of the Taiwan International Fastener Show was held in the main square front of the entrance.
Vice president Wu Den-Yih, who also worked as the former Kaohsiung mayor was there with Kaohsiung's mayor Chen-Chu and a number of related parties at the opening ceremonies and provide words of hope and celebration.
There was a gathering of 120 people from the media and 600 participants in the ceremony.

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A new exhibition hall, Kaohsiung Exhibition Center : KEC, was opened on April 14th in Kaohsiung City of Southwest Taiwan.

It was the grand opening on the day, so a new theater exhibition for the opening and the opening ceremony of the Taiwan International Fastener Show were held in the main square space in front of the entrance.
Vice president Wu Den-Yih, who also worked as the former Kaohsiung mayor, was at the opening ceremony with Kaohsiung's mayor Chen-Chu and a number of related parties. They all provide words of hope and celebration.
120 people from the media and 600 were also gathered as participants for the ceremony.

元の翻訳
Asian languages (e.g. Chinese, Japanese), and probably Russian, cannot be used for search. (non-alphabetic characters)
In Script of XYZ, non-alphabetic characters can be used for search.

I have a question about Script of XYZ.
When I import data as CSV, is the information of the latitude and longitude always necessary?
*I have the information of the address

If the information of latitude and longitude is necessary, is there any tools to calculate it from the date of address?
Please inform me if you know.

修正後
Asian languages (e.g. Chinese, Japanese), and probably Russian, cannot be used for search. (non-alphabetic characters)
In Script of XYZ, non-alphabetic characters can be used for search.

I have a question about Script of XYZ.
When I import data as CSV, is the information of the latitude and longitude always necessary? (I'ld like to show the detail on Google street view.)
*I have the information of the address

If the information of latitude and longitude is necessary, is there any tools to calculate it from the date of address?
Please inform me if you know.

元の翻訳
Thankful to them, I walked into the site.

How solemn the site looked!

The four girls were also all kind and stylish.

They all helped me here and there as I had no experience.

Thanks to them "C's " booth was completed. That was the first substantial shop for the virtual store.

I regret I did not shoot it.

Right after the booth was ready, the VIP clients came in.

The clients were all so pretty that I was looking at them adoring while I was preparing for the show.

The model girls were prettier than I expected, and I was so excited even before they get dressed with our costumes.

They screamed "kawaii!" at the video I showed them for the coordinates. For me, they that screamed "kawaii" were "kawaii"!

修正後
As being amazed, I walked into the site.

How solemn the site looked!

The four girls, who came to the booth as volunteers, were also all kind and stylish.

They all helped me here and there since I had no experience.

Thanks to them "C's " booth was completed. That was the first substantial shop for the virtual store.

I regret I did not shoot any photos of it.

Right after the booth was ready, the VIP clients came in.

They were all so pretty that I couldn't take my eyes off while I was preparing for the show.

The model girls were prettier than I expected, so I was so excited even before they put our costumes on.

They squealed "kawaii(cute)!" at the pictures of the coordinates that I showed them. To me, THEY saying "kawaii" were "kawaii"!

元の翻訳
I visited London to participate in the event "B" hosted by "A".

On the day before the show, I shoot pictures around the decorations and settings at the site in the hotel for our final confirmation.

The Japan team discussed to finally determine what we were going to show, in view of the total balance instead of focusing on just single style.

On the day of the show:

The last thing you would expect to happen when you carry everything on you did happen. The road in the neighbor of the venue was under construction, and I was dropped from the taxi just a few meters away from the entrance.

I had luggages far more than my both hand could handle just when a few pretty girls who were concerned with the event walked by and helped me out.

You girls were so sweet.↵

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I visited London to participate in the event "B" hosted by "A".

On the day before the show, I shot many pictures of dresses coordinated for the show at the hotel for our final confirmation.

We discussed with a team in Japan to finally determine what we were going to put on models for the show, in view of the total balance instead of focusing on just single style.

On the day of the show:

The last thing you would expect to happen as you carry everything by yourself actually did happen. The road nearby the venue was under construction, and I was dropped from the taxi just a few meters away from the entrance.

I had luggages far more than my both hands could handle and was wondering what to do. Then, a few pretty girls related to the event just walked by and helped me out.

I thought they were so sweet.

元の翻訳
- Thank you very much for waiting until Friday.
It is disappointing, but I also do not know when it will arrive.
So will it be alright if I will refund the money in case there are still no progress until Friday?
I am very sorry to have cause you any inconvenience despite going to much trouble on making the purchase.

- I found out that there was 1 defective sheet among the 3.
I am very sorry, but I cannot ship out this 1 sheet.
So is it okay?
I am very sorry to have cause you any inconvenience!

修正後
- Thank you very much for waiting until Friday.
It is disappointing, but I also do not know when it will arrive.
So will it be alright for me to refund the money if there are still no progress on Friday?
I am very sorry for the inconvenience that may have caused to you. I feel bad for you that you have to g through this much trouble on making the purchase of our product.

- I found out that there was 1 defective sheet among the 3.
I am very sorry, but I cannot ship out this 1 sheet.
Do you mind?
I am very sorry for the inconvenience that may have caused to you.

元の翻訳
Sub-Leader

Date of Birth: July 19, 1988
Height: 181 cm
Blood type: O
Hometown: Fukuoka Prefecture


Sub-Leader of SOLIDEMO.
He enrolled as a regular student in Avex Artist Academy, and started his music lessons.
His singing skills were highly appreciated, and he became a member of the male cappella group "abs school" which appeared in the popular part "Hamonepu" of the show called "Gogogo with all the streight!" (Fuji TV) in 2009.
He was experience as a solo musician in TAKE, and as an actor in stage dramas.

His favorite word is "unflagging"

修正後
Sub-Leader

Date of Birth: July 19, 1988
Height: 181 cm
Blood type: O
Hometown: Fukuoka Prefecture


Sub-Leader of SOLIDEMO.
He enrolled as a regular student in Avex Artist Academy, and started his music lessons.
His singing skills were highly appreciated, and he became a member of the male a cappella group "abs school" which appeared in the popular part "Hamonepu" of the show called "Gogogo with all the streight!" (Fuji TV) in 2009.
He was experience as a solo musician in TAKE, and as an actor in stage plays and TV dramas.

His favorite word is "unflagging"

元の翻訳
しかしながら、Valleyの比較優位はイノベーションを行うという点にある。むしろ、それはイテレーションの過程を通じて、企業に製品と技術の商品化を行わせるのに必要な、環境的・文化的なインセンティブを与えるものである。

修正後
しかしながら、Valleyの比較優位はイノベーションを行うという点にあるのではない。むしろ、それは企業が繰り返しの過程を通じて製品や技術の商品化を行うために必要な、環境的・文化的なインセンティブを与えるものである。

元の翻訳
このような会社間の才能の相互交流は、シリコンバレーの持つ自己再帰性の重要な源となっており、少なくとも部分的にはVCファンドによるネットワーク構築の役割に起因する。
最近、Bill Gates氏の言動がRolling Stone に引用された：
カリフォルニアにおけるイノベーションは、現在明らかな絶頂期にあります。もちろん、会社の半数はおかしく、3分の2は破産しそうなのはご存知の通りですが、そこから発生するであろう十数個のアイディアは、本当に重要なものになるでしょう・・・イノベーションが、成長の真の推進力なのです。

修正後
このような会社間の才能の相互交流は、シリコンバレーの持つ自己再帰性の重要な源となっており、少なくとも部分的にはVCファンドによるネットワーク構築の役割にも起因する。
最近、Bill Gates氏の言動がRolling Stone に引用された：
カリフォルニアにおけるイノベーションは、現在明らかな絶頂期にあります。もちろん、会社の半数はおかしく、3分の2は破産しそうなのはご存知の通りですが、そこから派生するであろう多くのアイディアは、本当に重要なものになるでしょう・・・イノベーションが、成長の真の推進力なのです。

元の翻訳
この、企業にある才能の異花受粉ともいえる現象は、自己再帰的クオリティーの重要な原動力であり、また、少なくとも部分的にはベンチャーキャピタルファンドのネットワーキングという役割だと言える。

最近、Bill Gates氏の発言がRolling Stoneで取り上げられた：

「もちろん、企業の半分は経営が上手くいかず、さらにその内の3分の2は潰れる。しかし、その中から生まれるアイディアというのが本当に重要になるんだ。イノベーションこそが進歩の原動力なんだ。」

修正後
この、企業間における才能の異花受粉ともいえる現象は、自己再帰的クオリティーの重要な原動力であり、また、少なくとも部分的にはベンチャーキャピタルファンドのネットワーキングという役割を担うとも言える。

最近、Bill Gates氏の発言がRolling Stoneで取り上げられた。：

「もちろん、企業の半分は経営が上手くいかず、さらにその内の3分の2は潰れそうになっています。しかし、その中から生まれるアイディアというのが本当に重要になるんです。イノベーションこそが進歩の原動力なんです。」

元の翻訳
Facebookが立ち上がると、Zuckerberg氏はその活動をSilicon Valleyへと移したが、このことにより、優秀なプログラマーはもとより、開発資金を活用することが可能となった。Silicon Valleyに集中するベンチャーキャピタル会社は資金の確保を容易にするのみならず、「8人の反逆者」と呼ばれる先駆者の例のように先端技術のスピルオーバーと反復生産開発を容易に行えるネットワークを提供している。Facebookはその草創期の資金提供者としてPeter Thiel氏を選択したが, Thiel氏のもつ影響力と知名度はFacebookの可能性を広げ、資金の獲得がますます容易となった。もうひとりのFacebookの初期の資金提供者のAccel VenturesはFacebookのCOO（最高執行責任者）のSheryl Sandberg氏を雇うのに大きな役割を果たした。

修正後
Facebookが立ち上がると、Zuckerberg氏はその活動をSilicon Valleyへと移したが、このことにより、優秀なプログラマーはもとより、開発資金を活用することが可能となった。Silicon Valleyに集中するベンチャーキャピタル会社は資金の確保を容易にするのみならず、「8人の反逆者」と呼ばれる先駆者の例のように先端技術のスピルオーバーと反復生産開発を容易に行えるネットワークを提供している。Facebookはその草創期の資金提供者としてPeter Thiel氏を選択したが, Thiel氏のもつ影響力と知名度はFacebookの可能性を広げ、資金の獲得がますます容易となった。もうひとりのFacebookの初期の資金提供者のAccel Ventures氏はFacebookのCOO（最高執行責任者）のSheryl Sandberg氏を雇うのに大きな役割を果たした。

元の翻訳
Facebookが活動を開始すると、Zuckerbergは優秀なプログラマーや、そしておそらくさらに重要なことは、資本を手に入れるために活動をSilicon Valleyへ移した。
Silicon Valleyにベンチャー企業が集中していることにより、資本が容易に入手できるだけでなく、「8人の反逆者」のような先人たちの場合のように　技術の溢出を促進するビジネスネットワークと繰り返し行われる製品開発も容易に入手できる。
FacebookはPeter Thielの初期の投資家を集めた。彼の影響と評判によりFacebookの可能性が確認され、さらに資本を入手できた。もう一人のFacebookの発明者であるAccel VenturesはFacebook COO のSheryl Sandbergを獲得する重要な役割を果たした。

修正後
Facebookが活動を開始すると、Zuckerberg氏は優秀なプログラマーを手に入れるため、また、おそらくさらに重要なことは、資本を手に入れるために活動をSilicon Valleyへ移した。
Silicon Valleyにベンチャー企業が集中していることにより、資本が容易に入手できるだけでなく、「8人の反逆者」のような先人たちの場合のように　技術の溢出を促進するビジネスネットワークと繰り返し行われる製品開発も容易に入手できる。
FacebookはPeter Thiel氏から、初期の投資家を得た。そして、彼の影響と評判によりFacebookの可能性が確認され、さらに資本を入手できた。もう一人のFacebookの発明者であるAccel Ventures氏はFacebook COO のSheryl Sandberg氏を獲得する重要な役割を果たした。