mayustardust — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
When i choose the books, at first "is it fun or not", and i don't care the messages which are put that authors want to comvey to readers.
In fact, I read the books without knowing, "who please me and who have a few message" and "who please and I feel the author's messages"
It seem that they have a tangle for these two difference factors judging from the author's angle, that i can't imagine like a reader.
So I'm interested increasingly in the author's backgrounds after thinking of these difference factor when I choose the books.

修正後
When i choose the books, at first "is it interesting or not", and I don't care about the messages which are put that authors want to convey to readers.
In fact, I read the books without knowing, "who please me and who have a few message" and "who please and I feel the author's messages"
It seem that they have a tangle for these two difference factors judging from the author's angle, that i can't imagine like a reader.
So I'm interested increasingly in the author's backgrounds after thinking of these difference factor when I choose the books.

元の翻訳
It is good if we we can search the whole YouTube without using API of Lastfm only when we input a keyword and search, (which is similar to the script below).

Under the current situation, we cannot listen to a new song that has been uploaded in the YouTube.

修正後
It would be better if we can search the whole YouTube without using API of Lastfm only when we input a keyword and search, (which is similar to the script below).

Under the current situation, we cannot listen to a new song that has been uploaded on to YouTube.

元の翻訳
3days～5days shown is despatsch deadline but not arrival deadline.
The goods has alredy despatched and is at the
switching center in Japan now.
The follow-up number is RR465914428JP.
Delivery service is very busy because of holiday season. So, it is very difficult to reach before your mother's birthday.
We are sorry for not being able to help you.
We hope that the goods will reach you without further delay.

修正後
3days to 5days was shown as the dispatch deadline but not arrival deadline.
The goods has already dispatched and is at the
switching center in Japan now.
The follow-up number is RR465914428JP.
Delivery service is very busy because of holiday season. So, it is very difficult to reach before your mother's birthday.
We are sorry for not being able to help you.
We hope that the goods will reach you without further delay.

元の翻訳
P.S.
Our shop cannot send to any address other than the ones registered in paypal.

I'm sorry.

The only way to accept the desire from customer is paying $18.00 and sending to Australia by EMS as reported earlier.

Please tell us when you permit that condition so that we may prepare the payment of freight.

It has no longer time to Christmas. So, I will refund the money when we would not receive reply.

Please confirm.

Thank you for your reply,

All right. we will send goods .

Would you please wait awhile until arrival.

修正後
P.S.
Our shop cannot send to any address other than the ones registered in paypal.

I'm sorry.

The only way to accept the desire from customer is paying $18.00 for shipping and sending to Australia by EMS as reported earlier.

Please tell us when you permit that condition so that we may prepare the payment of freight.

It has no longer time to Christmas. So, I will refund the money when we would not receive reply.

Please confirm.

Thank you for your reply,

All right. we will send goods .

Would you please wait awhile until arrival.

元の翻訳
My English is not so good to understood your questions.
When your order has certained,you can't bargan about the price.
When this product has deliveried,it will be take the tariff.
It is normal when the product in to the your country's tariff organization.
It is not the extra fee,so don't be worried.

修正後
My English is not so good to understood your questions.
When your order has certained,you can't bargain about the price.
When this product has delivered,it will be take the tariff.
It is normal when the product in to the your country's tariff organization.
It is not the extra fee,so don't be worried.

元の翻訳
Or Do you think there is a relevance about our sales method? At starting to sell on Amazon US, we are taught the method by a certain person. The person teaches many people in order to do the same, and is that the reason of relevance?

Those two reasons are the all I can think of.
Whatever the case it is, we have not ever sold on Amazon. We are pretty confused by such a sudden notice.

修正後
Or do you think there is a relevance about our sales method? At starting to sell on Amazon US, we are taught the method by a certain person. The person teaches many people in order to do the same, and is that the reason of relevance?

Those two reasons are all I can think of.
Whatever the case it is, we have not ever sold on Amazon. We are pretty confused by such a sudden notice.

元の翻訳
I have enough volume of razor blade collected for 5 years.
But the further times goes, the more difficult to purchase old blades, meanwhile the scarcity value can arise.

All wares that I am coping with are genuine. And there are various types of Iwasaki’s blazes.
If you have some concerns on it, I recommend you to cancel your order.
Other products will be released soon, which can be the best time to purchase.

You can find some rust on blaze, however it doesn’t mean unavailable.
Please refer to the attached images.

修正後
I have enough volume of German razor blades collected for 5 years.
But the further times goes, the more difficult to purchase old blades, meanwhile the scarcity value can arise.

All wares that I am coping with are genuine. And there are various types of Iwasaki’s blazes.
If you have some concerns on it, I recommend you to cancel your order.
Other products will be released soon, which can be the best time to purchase.

You can find some rust on blade, however it doesn’t mean unavailable.
Please refer to the attached images.

元の翻訳
I have stock because I've been collecting German razors from all over Japan for last 5 years.
However, as it will be difficult to supply old models in a few years, I think they have value as a rarity.
-
The razors I sell are all genuine. There are many different types of Iwasaki razor.
If you are worried about the product, I suggest you cancel your order.
I'll list another product soon, so it might be better for you to wait until then.
-
As we didn’t find any marks of rust on the razor’s edge, it won’t be a problem to use it.
Please refer to the picture I sent you.

修正後
I have stock because I've been collecting German razors from all over Japan for the last 5 years.
However, as it will be difficult to supply old models in a few years, I think they have value as a rarity.
-
The razors I sell are all genuine. There are many different types of Iwasaki razor.
If you are worried about the product, I suggest you cancel your order.
I'll list another product soon, so it might be better for you to wait until then.
-
As we didn't find any marks of rust on the razor’s edge, it won’t be a problem to use it.
Please refer to the picture I sent you.

元の翻訳
I'm here in 5 years, we have stock of Germany razor from all over Japan.
But, in the next few years there will be difficult to sell the old razor, it will be scarcity value.

All razors that we sell is original. Iwasaki's razor and also various type of razor.
If you worried about the product, I recommend you to cancel.
We will display the product in the near future, it's better for you to wait.

Because there's no rust murks on the razor edge, I think there will be no problem when you use it.
Because I send the image, please make it as reference.

修正後
I'm here in 5 years, we have stock of Germany razor from all over Japan.
But, in the next few years there will be difficult to buy the old razor, it will be scarcity value.

All razors that we sell are original. Iwasaki's razor and also various type of razor.
If you worried about the product, I recommend you to cancel.
We will display the product in the near future, it's better for you to wait.

Because there's no rust marks on the razor edge, I think there will be no problem when you use it.
Because I send the image, please make it as reference.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for the delay in my response.
To be honestly, I can not offer the $300 discount because the shipping fee is free this time.
At most, I can offer you the price $2150.

I relisted with this price, so please deal with me if you would like to do.
Please take note that there is an option. If you complete to pay by paypal, you bid it at the same time.
(You can not bid it unless you pay for it)

修正後
I am sorry for the delay in my response.
To be honest, I can not offer the $300 discount because the shipping fee is free this time.
At most, I can offer you the price $2150.

I relisted with this price, so please deal with me if you would like to do.
Please take note that there is an option. If you complete to pay by paypal, you bid it at the same time.
(You can not bid unless you pay for it)

元の翻訳
I would like to buy your products.

( Including the shipment to JP)

Could you deliver them from Japan?

We are going to develop Japan market and would like to use your product in Japan.
Since the products are very popular between Japanese customers and it is necessary.

Could you give me a wholesale price?

修正後
I would like to buy your products.

( Including the shipment to JP)

Could you deliver them to Japan?

We are going to develop Japan market and would like to use your product in Japan.
Since the products are very popular between Japanese customers and it is necessary.

Could you give me a wholesale price?

元の翻訳
こんにちは。二日以内に支払いしますがよろしいですか。貴方でちょうど50.00ドルの額を申告していますが、ここブラジルでは盗難のリスク
でかなり割高の関税が請求されます.その時送付しますがよろしいですか。また他のwand (ペン型スキャナ)を販売して頂けますか。
当方ではそれがほしいのですが、購入は翌月になります。
商品や支払いについて伺えれば幸いです。。私は韓国人ですが日本に住んでいます。受け入れて頂ける他の支払い方法はありますか。
私はお金を貴方の日本の口座に振り込むことができます。
また、いくつかのパーツで、めっきが剥がれているものがあるとの貴方の説明があります。
これはどういう意味ですか。なぜかというと写真では銀のめっきもピンクのめっきも剥がれているようには見えません。
それは、ほんとうにほぼ新品同様に見えます。
最後にプルート リップロッドの値下げをする予定はありますか。もしそうなら、すぐに購入します。

修正後
こんにちは。二日後に支払いしますがよろしいですか。貴方でちょうど50.00ドルの額を申告していますが、ここブラジルでは盗難のリスク
でかなり割高の関税が請求されます。その時送付しますがよろしいですか。また他のwand (ペン型スキャナ)を販売して頂けますか。
当方ではそれがほしいのですが、購入は翌月になります。
商品や支払いについて伺えれば幸いです。。私は韓国人ですが日本に住んでいます。受け入れて頂ける他の支払い方法はありますか。
私はお金を貴方の日本の口座に振り込むことができます。
また、いくつかのパーツで、めっきが剥がれているものがあるとの貴方の説明があります。
これはどういう意味ですか。なぜかというと写真では銀のめっきもピンクのめっきも剥がれているようには見えません。
それは、ほんとうにほぼ新品同様に見えます。
最後にプルート リップロッドの値下げをする予定はありますか。もしそうなら、すぐに購入します。

元の翻訳
Asakusa, SKYTREE, or Tokyo Tower are popular tourist spots in general, however, I consider that there are more enjoyable places in Tokyo. First of all, I would like to explain a transportation in Tokyo. That system is very big feature because of satisfying. You can understand by this route map, you can see a lot of lines extended which take you everywhere soon. Shinjuku Station I express now is a big station, and the number of the user is 3,260,000 a day on average and it listed in the Guinness Book of World Records.

修正後
Asakusa, SKYTREE, or Tokyo Tower are popular tourist spots in general, however, I consider that there are more enjoyable places in Tokyo. First of all, I would like to explain the transportation system in Tokyo. That system is very big feature because of satisfying. You can understand by this route map, you can see a lot of lines extended which take you everywhere soon. Shinjuku Station I explain now is a big station, and the number of the user is 3,260,000 a day on average and it listed in the Guinness Book of World Records.

元の翻訳
I want to inform you below items about my purchase which will be sent today.
If the delivery driver need to make a call before he delivery the goods, please tell him to call the below phone number instead of the one I wrote in the order. Thank you.
I will be able to receive the delivery from 9am to 5am in weekdays. If the delivery time is within that time period, a phone call before is considered unnecessary.
Thank you for the arrangement.

修正後
I want to inform you below items about my purchase which will be sent today.
If the delivery driver need to make a call before he delivers the goods, please tell him to call the below phone number instead of the one I wrote in the order. Thank you.
I will be able to receive the delivery from 9am to 5am on weekdays. If the delivery time is within that time period, a phone call before is considered unnecessary.
Thank you for the arrangement.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your help.

I thank you for helping me change my address.

I understand matters concering the rice of CRC16-1.
I believe that when prices have changed, the coresponding prices shown at B2B shop should be corrected accordingly.

I have just made my payment. Please confirm it and prepare for its shipment.

Best regards

修正後
Thanks for your help.

I thank you for helping me change my address.

I understand matters concerning the price of CRC16-1.
I believe that when prices have changed, the coresponding prices shown at B2B shop should be corrected accordingly.

I have just made my payment. Please confirm it and prepare for its shipment.

Best regards

元の翻訳
#myus

I have a question about True Price. The total height of True Price is up to 108 inch verticaly and horizontaly is only one box, the postage is calculated by real weight, could you please recognate it?

From the 2nd box, it's not covered by True Price, until now it is 25% up calculated, could you please recognate it?

For example, all product is shipped in one time, there is any possiblity of multiple boxes, in order to be able to send True Price there, could you send it one by one?

修正後
#myus

I have a question about True Price. The total height of True Price is up to 108 inch vertically and horizontally is only one box, the postage is calculated by real weight. Can you confirm this understanding is correct?

From the 2nd box, it's not covered by True Price, until now it is 25% up calculated. Can you confirm this understanding is correct?

For example, all product is shipped in one time, there is any possibility of multiple boxes, in order to be able to send True Price there, could you send it one by one?

元の翻訳
The internet program 「Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!」that NAOYA URATA（AAA） acts as MC is going to start soon!

The internet program 「Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!」that NAOYA URATA （AAA） acts as MC is going to start soon!

修正後
The internet program "Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!"that NAOYA URATA（AAA） acts as MC is going to start soon!

The internet program "Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!" that NAOYA URATA （AAA） acts as MC is going to start soon!

元の翻訳
Good afternoon, I have only seen maldives on television, but it is a really popular place for Japanese people.
I'll deliver the item as soon as I can. The item is properly packaged, so don't worry too much about it.

The electricity source is made in Japan, so you will need a transformer (which we are also selling). If you're interested, we'll provide a discounted transformer with your purchased item.

修正後
Good afternoon, I have only seen Maldives on television, but it is a really popular place for Japanese people.
I'll deliver the item as soon as I can. The item is properly packaged, so don't worry too much about it.

The electricity source is made in Japan, so you will need a transformer (which we are also selling). If you're interested, we'll provide a discounted transformer with your purchased item.

元の翻訳
I heard that the item was sent just now.
I requested the cancellation of the order for ○and ○ twice.
Please check them.
Would you please stop sending the items to Japan for this order?
If I eceive it in Japan, I have to pay for the high shupping charge to return it to you.

If it comes to me in Japan, I will reject to receive it by "Return to sender".
The tracking number is ○　and ○.

Under this situation, I request that you process it not to be delivered to Japan.
I ask you to work on it by paying attention to it.

修正後
I heard that the item was sent just now.
I requested the cancellation of the order for ○and ○ twice.
Please check them.
Would you please stop sending the items to Japan for this order?
If I ｒeceive it in Japan, I have to pay for the high shipping charge to return it to you.

If it comes to me in Japan, I will reject to receive it by "Return to sender".
The tracking number is ○　and ○.

Under this situation, I request that you process it not to be delivered to Japan.
I ask you to work on it by paying attention to it.

元の翻訳
I'm pleasure that my goods satisfied you.
I don't ｃｌａｉｍ additional cost for this our service.
Also somehow i want to see the knife made by you.
So if it is ｆｉｎｉｓｈｅd, I wish you would send me the picture and making story.

The trade with you will be canceled automatically one week after.
I confirmed the delivery status for post office. according from that.
The goods delayed will arrive you soon.
Please wait 4,5days after.

I know that the custom check in your country is not easy.
So i wrote to present $10 for you in delivery voucher.

修正後
I'm pleased that my goods satisfied you.
I don't claim additional cost for this our service.
Also somehow I want to see the knife made by you.
So if it is finished, I wish you would send me the picture and making story.

The trade with you will be canceled automatically one week after.
I confirmed the delivery status for post office. according from that.
The goods delayed will arrive you soon.
Please wait 4,5days after.

I know that the custom check in your country is not easy.
So I wrote to present $10 for you in delivery voucher.