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元の翻訳
二つの商品を発注しました。(商品番号321748110393、商品番号321748110392)
一つはまだ発送されてない上、他方は適切な追跡番号ではありません。
発送する気がないのであれば返金していただきたいです。

この商品の追跡番号は誤っているようです。サウスダコタに到着したように表記されています。私はイリノイに住んでいますし、追跡システムはもう到着したというように表記されています。
一体どうなっているのでしょう？
まだ発送していないのであれば、返金してください。

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二つの商品を発注しました。(商品番号321748110393、商品番号321748110392)
一つはまだ発送されてない上、他方は適切な追跡番号ではありません。
発送する気がないのであれば返金していただきたいです。

この商品の追跡番号は誤っているようです。サウスダコタに到着したように表記されています。私はイリノイに住んでいますし、追跡システムはもう到着したというように表記されているにも関わらず、私は商品を受領しておりません。
一体どうなっているのでしょう？
まだ発送していないのであれば、返金してください。

元の翻訳
この商品がこちらで売りに出されているのをたまたま見かけました。非常に魅力的なのですが、先日家のリフォームでお金を使ったので、今お金は準備できそうにないのです。
そこでお願いなのですが、掲載期間が過ぎ後でまたリストに入れて頂けないでしょうか？そうしたらオークション終了期限までに入札が入らないかずっとチェックします。最高なのは装着規格がマイクロでなく、Four Thirdsシステムなところなんです。 私のようなオリンパスE-シリーズに目がない人間にはたまらない仕様です。

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この商品がこちらで売りに出されているのをたまたま見かけました。非常に魅力的なのですが、先日家のリフォームでお金を使ったので、今お金は準備できそうにないのです。
そこでお願いなのですが、掲載期間が過ぎ後でまたリストに入れて頂けないでしょうか？そうしたらオークション終了期限までに入札が入らないかずっとチェックします。最高なのは装着規格がマイクロでなく、Four Thirdsシステムなところなんです。 私のようなオリンパスE-シリーズに目がない人間にはたまらない仕様です。ご教示下さい。

元の翻訳
もしこのテーブルがいらないのであれば、貴方は入札を取り下げる必要があります。　もし、まだいるのであれば、人に頼んでテーブルを解体後、貴方のブラッドフォードの住所にお届けし、ひび割れを200ポンドで修理することができます。　50ポンドは私が負担しますので、実質150ポンドになります。　貴方がこのテーブルを気に入ったことを確認するため、まず見ていただきたく存じます。もし、テーブルがいらないのであれば、もう一度リストに載せる必要があるので早急にご連絡をいただけますか？

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もしこのテーブルがいらないのであれば、貴方は入札を取り下げる必要があります。　もし、まだいるのであれば、人に頼んでテーブルを解体後、貴方のブラッドフォードの住所にお届けし、ひび割れを200ポンドで修理することができます。　50ポンドは私が負担しますので、実質150ポンドになります。　貴方がこのテーブルにご納得頂ける事を確認するため、まず見ていただきたく存じます。もし、テーブルがいらないのであれば、もう一度リストに載せる必要があるので早急にご連絡をいただけますか？

元の翻訳
テーブルがいらないのであれば、入札を取り下げてもらう必要があります。もしまだテーブルを希望するなら、誰かに分解してもらってブラットフォードのあなたの住所まで配達して、ひびも修理して200ポンドです。私は50ポンド負担しますので、実質150ポンドになります。まずはテーブルを見ていただいて、ご満足かどうか確認していただきたいです。
もしいらないならまた出品しなければならないので、早急にお返事くださるようお願いします。

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テーブルがいらないのであれば、入札を取り下げてもらう必要があります。もしまだテーブルを希望するなら、誰かに分解してもらってブラットフォードのあなたの住所まで配達して、ひびも修理して200ポンドです。私は50ポンド負担しますので、あなたの負担は実質150ポンドになります。まずはテーブルを見ていただいて、ご満足かどうか確認していただきたいです。
もしいらないならまた出品しなければならないので、早急にお返事くださるようお願いします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your information.
I appreciate your concern.
If I have a chance again, I sure would like to do business.
I hope you have a nice weekend.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your information.
I appreciate your concern.
If I have the chance again, I sure would like to do business.
I hope you have a nice weekend.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Good day. We heard that the item was damaged when you received it.
We will handle it not by returning the ｉｔｅｍ but by insurance in this case.

At first, please carry out the followings.
1. Could you send its picture?
2. Could you report it to the delivery company?

After we draw up the documents and claim an insurance, we will send the item again.
We were worrying as the item arrives so late.
We are sure that we will handle it until it is solved.
Please stop worrying.

S.M A person in charge

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Good day. We heard that the item was damaged when you received it.
We will handle it not by returning the item but by insurance in this case.

At first, please carry out the followings.
1. Could you send its picture?
2. Could you report it to the delivery company?

After we draw up the documents and claim an insurance, we will send the item again.
We were worrying as the item arrives so late.
We are sure that we will handle it until it is solved.
Please stop worrying.

S.M A person in charge

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
お支払いしますので、少々お待ちください。
よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは。
お支払いしますので、少々お待ちください。
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。代金はお支払いしますので暫くお待ちください。
よろしくお願い致します。

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こんにちは。代金はお支払いしますので暫くお待ちください。
よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
こんにちは、しゅうごさん。1ヶ月と17日前に、ポスタラネックス運輸がフェデックス経由で送ったのですが追跡番号がありません。最寄りのFEDEXにて私のレンズを受け取ってください。よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは、しゅうごさん。1ヶ月と17日前に、ポスタルアネックス運輸がフェデックス経由で送ったのですが追跡番号がありません。最寄りのFEDEXにて私のレンズを受け取ってください。よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Chiaki Ito has made the announcement of his talk show on March 15 (Sunday) at Tokyo Toshi Center Hotel!

Chiaki Ito has made the announcement of his talk show March 15 (Sunday) at Tokyo Toshi Center Hotel!

Date: March 15 (Sunday) 2015
Venue: Toshi Center Hotel 3F Cosmos hall, Hirakawa cho 2-4-1, Chiyoda ward, Tokyo,

[Part 1]
Open: 12:30
Talk show: 14:00 - 15:15

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Chiaki Ito has made the announcement of her talk show on March 15 (Sunday) at Tokyo Toshi Center Hotel!

Chiaki Ito has made the announcement of her talk show March 15 (Sunday) at Tokyo Toshi Center Hotel!

Date: March 15 (Sunday) 2015
Venue: Toshi Center Hotel 3F Cosmos hall, Hirakawa cho 2-4-1, Chiyoda ward, Tokyo,

[Part 1]
Open: 12:30
Talk show: 14:00 - 15:15

元の翻訳
Win the offer of BMBER-E "M-Night" held on Feb.8th on Sunday! Coming to the special guests.

Daisuke Miura won the offer of "M-Night" on Feb.8th on Sunday.
We started to offer the audiences at studio on our website.
Waiting for a lot of your replies.

Title: "BOMBERS-E M-Night" we want the special guests of coming to the studio in our live show.
The date; Feb.8th on Sunday. 17:30～ open.
The place; Me- TV B Studio (Nagoya-shi, Aichi)
THe guests; Ueda Marie, Miura Daichi, Yoshizawa Kayoko (Unknown anyone).

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Win the offer of BOMBER-E "M-Night" held on Feb.8th on Sunday! Coming to the special guests.

DAICHI MIURA won the offer of "M-Night" on Feb.8th on Sunday.
We started to offer the audiences at studio on our website.
Waiting for a lot of your replies.

Title: "BOMBERS-E M-Night" we want the special guests of coming to the studio in our live show.
The date; Feb.8th on Sunday. 17:30～ open.
The place; Me- TV B Studio (Nagoya-shi, Aichi)
THe guests; Ueda Marie, Miura Daichi, Yoshizawa Kayoko (Unknown anyone).

元の翻訳
TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE's TV drama starring with 5 was decided to be broadcasted by BS Japan on March in 2015! Drama's last scene is LIVE! A project that the LIVE is really held at a church has started!

On March in 2015 when faced on best album and single release for TOKYO
GIRL'S STYLE, TV drama that 5 girls starred a part of themselves was decided to be broadcasted! It will be a unique drama never before united drama and music scenes!

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TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE's TV drama starring with 5 was decided to be broadcasted by BS Japan in March 2015! Drama's last scene is LIVE! A project that the LIVE is really held at a church has started!

In March 2015 when faced on best album and single release for TOKYO
GIRL'S STYLE, TV drama that 5 girls starred a part of themselves was decided to be broadcasted! It will be a unique drama never before united drama and music scenes!

元の翻訳
Date: February 22 (Sunday) 2015
Time: open 16:00, start 17:00
Venue: Zepp blue theater Roppongi
Performer: Tokyo Joshi Ryuu/ Dorothy Little Happy / GALETTe
Ticket: all fixed seats ¥4000 (including tax)
Host: J-Girl POP WAVE
Support: Avex Music Creative
Cooperators: Aru Aru City Entertainment
Production: Odyssey
Contact: Odyssey 03-5444-6966 (ordinarily days 11:00 - 18:00)

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Date: February 22 (Sunday) 2015
Time: open 16:00, start 17:00
Venue: Zepp blue theater Roppongi
Performer: TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE/ Dorothy Little Happy / GALETTe
Ticket: all fixed seats ¥4000 (including tax)
Host: J-Girl POP WAVE
Support: Avex Music Creative
Cooperators: Aru Aru City Entertainment
Production: Odyssey
Contact: Odyssey 03-5444-6966 (weekdays 11:00 - 18:00)

元の翻訳
Contents:
SUEYOSHI SHUTA provides pictures with theme of red, blue, yellow and black in his first photo collection.
He tried what he had always wanted to do in this book.
Feel inside of his mind with colorful 96 page which will change the image you had for him.

The location and the time for the book release commemorating hand shake event have been decided.

Booking procedure differs from each book store so please confirm from the URL below.

Special URL
http://www.shufu.co.jp/topics/

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Contents:
SUEYOSHI SHUTA provides pictures with theme of red, blue, yellow and black in his first photo collection.
He tried what he had always wanted to do in this book.
Feel inside of his mind with colorful 96 page which will change the image you had for him!

The location and the time for the book release commemorating hand shake event have been decided!

Booking procedure differs from each book store so please confirm from the URL below.

Special URL
http://www.shufu.co.jp/topics/

元の翻訳
In addition, when I look at the size number of this price list, I have one question.
Why there is only option M1?
I think the configuration method of this product is to weld the thread of option M2 into the pipe and then screw the joint of option M1. If there is only option M1, this product cannot be set up.

I wonder if it is normal practice for customers to prepare the thread or this product can be set up only by the joint.
Please tell me the instructions if possible.

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In addition, when I look at the size number of this price list, I have one question.
Why is there only option M1?
I think the configuration method of this product is to weld the thread of option M2 into the pipe and then screw the joint of option M1. If there is only option M1, this product cannot be set up.

I wonder if it is normal practice for customers to prepare the thread or this product can be set up only by the joint.
Please tell me the instructions if possible.

元の翻訳
We can load the following page only by the small screen such as note personal computer.
It must be due to a bug caused by Java script.
We wish that it could be compatible to Multilanguage.
I tried it in Chinese, but there appeared an error.

What is a difference between PRO user and PLUS user?
Is the reason that we cannot see the following page after we log in
the specification?

We would be glad if we can line the songs, reproduce the loop (go back to the first song after the end of the song) and obtain the cover pictures automatically (thumbnail at the first song).

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We can load the following page only by the small screen such as a laptop computer.
It must be due to a bug caused by Java script.
We wish that it could be compatible to Multilanguage.
I tried it in Chinese, but there appeared an error.

What is a difference between PRO user and PLUS user?
Is the reason that we cannot see the following page after we log in
the specification?

We would be glad if we can line the songs, reproduce the loop (go back to the first song after the end of the song) and obtain the cover pictures automatically (thumbnail at the first song).

元の翻訳
The item that has been stored for a long time
Tape has been attached at the box and
the box has not been opened.

The number of the piece is about xx (it might be different more or less)
The content of the box has not been checked.
Some cards might be folded.

A purchaser contacted regarding returning of the item,
but the tracking number that was registered at the item is not effective.
It means that there is no evidence that the purchaser has not sent the item.
If the item does not arrive, I might not be able to refund.
Is the purchaser going to rate me low by this fact?
I can neither refund as the item has not been returned nor am convinced
that I might be rated low.
I do not know how I should handle it.

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The item that has been stored for a long time
Tape has been attached at the box and
the box has not been opened.

The number of the piece is about xx (it might be different more or less)
The content of the box has not been checked.
Some cards might be folded.

A purchaser contacted regarding returning of the item,
but the tracking number that was registered at the item is not effective.
It means that there is no evidence that the purchaser has sent the item.
If the item does not arrive, I might not be able to refund.
Is the purchaser going to rate me low by this fact?
I can neither refund as the item has not been returned nor am convinced
that I might be rated low.
I do not know how I should handle it.

元の翻訳
First of all, At the beginning I tried three times to reply to your email. However, the messages I sent was rejected, so it did not reach you. (The first image is proof that I sent the messages)
Please understand that this is an issue that I cannot do anything about. Below is the message I am resending, so please confirm it. The second image is from when I sent that message.
I will wait for you to contact me.

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First of all, at the beginning I tried three times to reply to your email. However, the messages I sent were rejected, so it did not reach you. (The first image is proof that I sent the messages)
Please understand that this is an issue that I cannot do anything about. Below is the message I am resending, so please confirm it. The second image is from when I sent that message.
I will wait for you to contact me.

元の翻訳
1. You are required to check and confirm the damage of the parcel in the presentation of the post office or the delivery company of your own country.
2. You are to send me the damage report (confirmation of the damage) established by the delivery company of your own country.
3. I will submit the claim based on the damage report to Japanese Postal (Post Bureau).

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1. You are required to check and confirm the damage of the parcel in the presence of the post office or the delivery company of your own country.
2. You are to send me the damage report (confirmation of the damage) established by the delivery company of your own country.
3. I will submit the claim based on the damage report to Japanese Postal (Post Bureau).

元の翻訳
Regardless of your cite survey, I am confusing your not opening the information.
I have to confirm the information to make estimate about it.
Otherwise you should be in charge of this events.
Tomorrow will be the due of this thing. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Regardless of your site survey, I am concerned you're not opening the information.
I have to confirm the information to make estimate about it.
Otherwise you should be in charge of this events.
Tomorrow will be the due of this thing. Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Although h you surveyed the website, I am concerned
that the information might not be developed.
I have to check the information to create the estimate.
If I do not do so, you have to work on it.
The deadline of the estimate is tomorrow. Thank you.

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Although you surveyed the website, I am concerned
that the information might not be developed.
I have to check the information to create the estimate.
If I do not do so, you have to work on it.
The deadline of the estimate is tomorrow. Thank you.

元の翻訳
I got a good seat again.
I purchased Broadway ticket from West End and the seat was really good so I decided to purchase the ticket from West End again.
It's really reassuring to be able to make a reservation in Japan and the seat this time was around the center of row M which you can just see the whole stage without trying. I'm not sure how they get the seat but I am now certain that you can get the ticket from West End and you won't regret it.
It was really a nice trip. Thank you very much.

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I got a good seat again.
I purchased Broadway ticket from West End last year and the seat was really good so I decided to purchase the ticket from West End again.
It's really reassuring to be able to make a reservation in Japan and the seat this time was around the center of row M which you can just see the whole stage without trying. I'm not sure how they get the seat but I am now certain that you can get the ticket from West End and you won't regret it.
It was really a nice trip. Thank you very much.