Matt (mattp) — 付けたレビュー

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I understood it. Since I want our business to be as long as it could be, though I set the price near the cost, what about a special price at 2990 pound?
What I ask for is your treat when I go to British next time. It is my dream to be there.
If you would purchase this item, I would cancel the offer since the request would be numerous.
As for the image, since I would place the guitar in the stock, Can you wait for one day please?
I'm looking forward to your answer.

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I understand. Since I want to build a long lasting business relationship with you, I will set the price at almost cost price, how about a special price of 2990 pounds?
Just buy me a drink in return next time I visit the UK. ↵
It's my dream to visit the UK!
If you do purchase this item, I would cancel the offer since there would be numerous enquiries.
As for the image, since I have the guitar in stock, Can you wait for one day please?
I'm looking forward to your answer.

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SCREAM
[First Limited Editioin]

[First Limited Edition Extras]
DVD includes Off-shot Movie
Cover-size Card (1 random version in 6 versions)

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SCREAM
[First Limited Edition]

[First Limited Edition Extras]
DVD includes Off-shot Movie
Cover-size Card (1 of 6 designs included at random)

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ery Merry Xmas

[First Limited Edition Extras]
Cover-size card (1 random version in total of 6 versions)↵
gorgeous 12 page booklet in it.

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Very Merry Xmas

[First Limited Edition Extras]
Cover-size card (1 of 6 designs enclosed at random)↵
Includes gorgeous 12 page booklet.

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"EVENT JAPAN 2014" was took place in Tokyo Big Sight on both 28th and 29th in Jan. It successfully drew in 75 exhibitors and 7137 visitors.

This consutituted display booth showing goods helping to attract guests and promote. And It also supplied the special seminar held in 6F meeting space in this place.

The course "How to promote the universal event with new law and 2020 -the essential skill for both event staff and volunteer" was so popular that there were many standees. This shows that a lot of people took an interest in universal events.

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"EVENT JAPAN 2014" took place at Tokyo Big Sight over 2 days on January 28th and 29th. It successfully drew in 75 exhibitors and 7137 visitors.

As well as display booths showing goods helping to attract guests and promote sales, a special seminar was held in the 6F meeting room at the same venue.

The course "How to promote universal events in accordance with new laws and 2020 - the essential skills for both event staff and volunteers" was so popular that many people watched while standing. This shows that a lot of people took an interest in universal events.

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I though he was your boyfriend.
I’m sorry I might hurt you because of my misunderstanding.↵
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And, I saw his activities on his homepage and Yutube.
He must be well known in America.
Your family looks great in picture together with wonderful person.
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I wish you and him are going to be happy from now on and will be getting married.

My husband has been putting his best taking care of a 10 month old baby, when I was down with illness and two elder sisters and until now he has been supporting me with his flooded gentleness while taking care of three children.↵

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I though he was your boyfriend.
I’m sorry if my misunderstanding hurt your feelings.


I hope that you and him are going to be happy from now on and that you will get married.

When I was down with illness, my husband did his best to help take care of our 10 month old baby and our two elder daughters.