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元の翻訳
To whom it may concern

（omission)

I would like to ask some questions regarding the entry exam please.

Is it possible to hand in a score of ×× test instead of ○○ test which is not carried out in my country?

What sort of test do you have for music entry? If you have already mentioned it in the website, please tell me URL.
Also, I would like to know if I can apply more than one category like composition and instruments.

I appreciate for your assistance.

Kind Regards,

修正後
To whom it may concern

（omission)

I would like to ask some questions regarding the entry exam please.

Is it possible to hand in the score of ×× test instead of ○○ test which is not carried out in my country?

What sorts of tests do you have for music entry? If you have already mentioned it in the website, please tell me its URL.
Also, I would like to know if I can apply for more than one category like composition and instruments.

I appreciate your assistance.

Kind Regards,

元の翻訳
Hi,
Im Eiji, the owner of AK-TRUST-JAPAN. Thank you for visiting us.

We are providing high quality products such as cameras and lends and shipping to the all over the world promptly with care.

Most products are second hand and all are checked carefully. We are proud of our work but if there is something wrong with your purchased products we will refund when you return the products.

I hope that more people are getting interested in Japan through our shop.

修正後
Hi,
Im Eiji, the owner of AK-TRUST-JAPAN. Thank you for visiting us.

We are providing high quality products such as cameras and lends and shipping to all over the world promptly with care.

Most products are second-hand and all are checked carefully. We are proud of our work but if there is something wrong with your purchased products we will refund if you return the products.

I hope that more people are getting interested in Japan through our shop.

元の翻訳
緑のポンチを買いました。
お願いしたいのですが、メールで商品をしょうかいするとき、お土産のようにできますか？香水みたいにならないでね。

こんにちは、これが実際のHori pad fps plusでしょうか？

こんにちは
配送のトラッキング番号を教えてください。

Sorry for the late reply.
At the moment I am not able to make a refund due to the lack of the stock money in my Paypal.
Please wait for three to seven days for the process.
I will refund as soon as I have enough money in my Paypal.
Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
緑のポンチを買いました。
お願いしたいのですが、メールで商品を紹介するとき、お土産のようにできますか？香水みたいにならないでね。

こんにちは、これが実際のHori pad fps plusでしょうか？

こんにちは
配送のトラッキング番号を教えてください。

Sorry for the late reply.
At the moment I am not able to make a refund due to the lack of the stock money in my Paypal.
Please wait for three to seven days for the process.
I will refund as soon as I have enough money in my Paypal.
Thank you for your understanding.