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The customers who use pre-IE8　version should use the following PDF version.

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Customers who use IE8 and earlier versions should use the following PDF version.

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Saitama Super Arena ※There is a possibility that the concert is recorded.

Kyodo Tokyo
0570-550-799

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Saitama Super Arena ※There is a possibility that the concert will be recorded.

Kyodo Tokyo
0570-550-799

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I　placed two orders from PayPal and webstore.
As soon as the items are ready, please ship them on your business day.

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I placed two orders through PayPal and the online store.
As soon as the items are ready, please ship them on your next business day.

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"moe's up!!"

Tomokazu Miura will appear on the program of bayfm's Moe Oshikiri.

Date : 12/27(Sat.)
Time : From 10:00a.m. to 11:00a.m.

http://bayfm78.com/moe/moetop.htm"

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"moe's up!!"

Daichi Miura will appear on Moe Oshikiri's bayfm program.

Date : 12/27(Sat.)
Time : From 10:00a.m. to 11:00a.m.

http://bayfm78.com/moe/moetop.htm"

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The item A and B were shipped separately because they were kept in different warehouses.

So you will receive two parcels.

These parcels may not arrive at the same time.↵
Please wait until the both arrive.

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Items A and B were shipped separately because they were stored in different warehouses.

So you will receive two parcels.

These parcels may not arrive at the same time, so please wait until they both arrive.

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Can I order this item with rim width 23mm or 25mm?

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Can I order this item with a rim width of 23mm or 25mm?

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"Inquiry"
Avex Music Creative Inc.
0570-064-414 (Only weekdays 11:00-18:00)

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"For Inquiries"
Avex Music Creative Inc.
0570-064-414 (Weekdays only 11:00-18:00)