Kartika Tri Wahyuni (karu-chan) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We're suspend our account earlier, the (A) item is not display or selling item untill now.
Furthermore, it's already in [Inactive] condition for 5 hours from now.
Does anything wrong with it? Could you please confirm it?
Would you tell me, if there's another problem?

修正後
Our account got suspended, but we have never listed or sold the item (A) untill now.
Furthermore, our account has been inactive for these 5 days.
We are afraid you might be misunderstanding something. Could you please confirm it?
Would you tell me if there's any other problem?

元の翻訳
Our meeting day with you all is 28th, isn't okay?
On that day, I want you all come to Oomiya station before noon.
All the member who will be coming is 5 person, including you, isn't it?
There's an information place after you're out from the centre gate of Oomiya station.
I will be waiting you all there.
Centre gate is placed between "North" and "South", but even if you go out from one of them, it will come to the same place.
If you couldn't find me, please call to my mobile phone.
My number never change, i will write it again.
It's okay to replay in english.

修正後
Our meeting day with you all is the 28th. Isn't it okay [colloquial]?
On that day, I want you to come to Omiya Station before noon.
All the members who will be coming are 5 persons, including you. Am I correct?
There's an information place after you're out from the center gate of Omiya Station.
I will be waiting for you all there.
The center gate has "North" and "South," but even if you go out of one of them, you will come to the same place.
If you couldn't find me, please call to my mobile phone.
My number hasn't changed, but I will write it here again.
You can replay in English.