Jasmine (jasmine_66) — 付けたレビュー

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There are 2 kinds of wireless module zigbee edition and wifi edition
It is said that Gateway is required using zigbee only.
When using wifi edition, Gateway is not necessary, it is connected to the access point directly.
At present condition, It is prerequisite to set up the password and SSID of access point to the software of Module
Therefore, I have taken the method of installing a set of paired wireless router in advanced
I am checking the simpler method than WPS for the next Module.

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There are 2 kinds of wireless module: zigbee edition and wifi edition
It is said that Gateway is required only when you use zigbee.
When you use wifi edition, Gateway is not necessary, it is connected to the access point directly.
At present condition, It is prerequisite to set up the password and SSID of access point to the software of Module
Therefore, I have taken the method of installing a set of paired wireless router in advanced
I am thinking about a better and simpler method than WPS for the next Module.

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Upon mutual consent, I may refund the payment. I don't make partial refund. If you don't need that lens, I will sell it to other people as the lens is in demand.

Please understand that I'm not saying that I don't make refunds by all means.
If you send the lens back to us, I will have a thorough check on it.
I will then refund the cost of the lens and the shipping fee.

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Upon mutual consent, I may refund the payment. I don't make partial refund. If you don't need that lens, I will sell it to other people as the lens is in demand.

Please understand that I'm not saying that I don't make refunds.
If you send the lens back to us, I will have a thorough check on it.
I will then refund the cost of the lens and the shipping fee.

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Good day!
Thank you very much for buying a product from our shop this time.

I will add a little bonus!
This is a tradition in the Japan culture.↵
It is called [Origami].
This origami was created by children with disabilities in Japan.
We are donating $0.3 to the disabled children center for each origami.
A little portion of your purchase was able to help the children in Japan!
Thank you very much!
And we are happy for your patronage!
Thank you!

Shop owner

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Good day!
Thank you very much for buying a product from our shop this time.

I will add a small gift to you!
This is a traditional Japanese culture which is called 'Origami'.
This origami was made by children with disabilities in Japan.
We are donating $0.3 for each origami to the support center for disabled children .
A little portion of your purchase can help the children in Japan!
Thank you very much!
And we are happy for your patronage!
Thank you!

Shop owner

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Hello!
Thank you so much for choosing our shop and ordering!

I'll add a little gift!
This is a Japanese traditional culture.
It's called "Origami"!
This origami was made by Japanese disabled children who work very hard!
We donate $0.3 per one origami as support fund to the disabled children support center.
A part of your purchase helped Japanese children!
Thank you so much!
We'll be happy to serve you again in the future!
Thank you in advance!

Shop owner

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Hello!
Thank you so much for buying products from our shop!

I'll add a little gift!
This is a Japanese traditional culture.
It's called "Origami"!
These origami products were made by disabled children in Japan; these children tried their best to make them.
We donate $0.3 for per origami as support fund to the support center for disabled children.
A part of your purchase helps these children!
Thank you so much!
It would be our pleasure if you would like to purchase in our shop again in the future!
Thank you in advance!

Shop owner

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Hello,
Thank you for purchasing from our store this time.

I will add a bonus to it!
This is a traditional Japanese art called "origami". (Using color papers to fold into various shapes.)
This has been made by the kids with handicap in Japan. I will donate $0.3 per "origami" to the support center for the handicapped children. A part of your payment will help these children.
Thank you very much.
I hope you will purchase from us again soon.
Thank you,

Shop owner

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Hello,
Thank you for purchasing from our store this time.

I will give you some discount!
This is a traditional Japanese art called "origami". (Using color papers to fold into various shapes.)
This has been made by the kids with handicap in Japan. I will donate $0.3 per "origami" to the support center for the handicapped children. A part of your payment will help these children.
Thank you very much.
I hope you will purchase from us again soon.
Thank you,

Shop owner

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Lighting ceremony of tree about as high as 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View observation deck. The tree whicl looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It includes a message to run for future by holding the mind of child and mind of play that we tend to lose when we are grown up secretly. 2 mirrors to take picture by ourselves are set around the tree.

If we take a picture by sitting at the seat of stump, we can take a picture of tree and ourselves neatly.

It is set from Novemer 29 to December 25. The business hour is postponed to 22:00.

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A lighting ceremony of tree about 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree which looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It conveys a message for people to move forward to the future with a childlike and creative mindset that we tend to lose when we grow up. There are 2 mirrors set around the tree for people to take pictures of themselves.

If we take a picture by sitting at stump, we can take a picture of ourselves with the tree in our back neatly.

The ceremony is from 29th of November to 25th of December. The business hour is extended to 22:00.

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There was a lighting ceremony held for 5m high Christmas tree at the Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree looks like a melting ice which represents "the instant glow of short-lived objects." It also sends us the message that we shouldn't forget the playful mind we once had as a child and we should move on with it. There are two stations with mirrors around the tree for self-photographs. If you sit on a stump of the tree, you'll have an excellent picture of yourself with the tree in the back. You may enjoy this setup from Nov 29 until Dec 25. They have extended the closing hour till 10pm.

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There was a lighting ceremony held for 5m high Christmas tree at the Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree looks like a melting ice which represents "the instant glow of short-lived objects." It also sends us the message that we shouldn't forget the playful mind we once had as a child and we should move on with it. There are two stations with mirrors around the tree for self-photographs. If you sit on a stump of the tree, you'll have an excellent picture of yourself with the tree in the back. You may enjoy this setup from Nov 29 until Dec 25. They have extended the opening hours to 10pm.

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There is a change in color at the top part of the boots.
There is also scratch across the board. So I would like to return the product.
Because this is your responsibility, I would like you to refund not only for the money, but also the costs for shipping, import duties. returned item to me.
I would appreciate your prompt reply.

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There is a color change at the top part of the boots.
There is also scratches all over the boots. So I would like to return it and get refund.
Because this is your responsibility, I would like you to refund everything including the money for the boots, the cost for shipping, import duties and the cost for returning the boots.
I would appreciate your prompt reply.

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Good afternoon
I saw your profile and seem you had a lot of experiences to translate, so would you please do a job for me?
The job is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links. And the links are to show the results of each one translator's translations between English-Russian language. Please see the translation results and evaluate those with 1-6 stages. You do not have to adjust those.
Due to the translators, there are many translations, therefore it would be OK to just confirm the translations of 2,3.
if you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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Good afternoon
I saw your profile and it seems you had a lot of experiences of translating, I would like to have you work with me.
The job I want to assign to you is very simple.
I would give you 20-30 links which show the results of each translator's translations from English to Russian. Please look through the translation results and evaluate their translations with 1-6 stages. You do not have to correct those.
Though there are lots of translators, and each of them might have lots of translations to be checked, you do not have to look through all of them; just 2 or 3 translations would be fine.
if you would like to take this job, please contact me.

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A in Portuguese means a crazy boy and a girl. Crazy originally means strange or weird but here it signifies "a person who has chosen a challenging path and thus possesses unique senses"
A creates the world of attractions where a crazy boy and a girl encounter some exciting challenges in life. It may be filled with adventures full of challenges on pirate ships or it could be a dreadful haunted house that stimulates your curiosities.

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A in Portuguese means a crazy boy and girl. Crazy originally means strange or weird but here it means "a person who has chosen a challenging path and thus possesses unique senses"
A creates the world of attractions where a crazy boy and girl encounter some exciting challenges in life. It may be filled with adventures full of challenges on pirate ships or it could be a dreadful haunted house that stimulates your curiosities.

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A means creazy boys and girls in Portuguese. Crazy origginally means peculiar or strange, but here crazy means "the one who chose to challenge something has different sense from others." In the world A creates, there are various attractions in wonderlands where such crazy boys and girls come across in lives. Sometimes it's adventurous although is endangered like a pirate ship or dreadful yet makes you curious like a ghost house. Therefore..

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A means creazy boys and girls in Portuguese. Crazy originally means peculiar or strange, but here crazy means "the one who chose to challenge something has different sense from others." In the world A creates, there are various attractions in wonderlands where such crazy boys and girls come across in lives. Although you might be endangered or dreadful as there's a pirate ship yet it is adventurous. Also the ghost house makes you curious. Therefore..

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1)无需用户注册和选定对方地址
　灵活使用位置信息，无需进行麻烦的用户注册和选定对方地址，就可以收发照片。

2)可以下载原始数据文件
　SNS的照片共享，自动缩小功能样样不少，“Kiss”可以接受原始的数据。

3)操作简单，易上手
　画面は「一覧」と「写真」の２つ、ボタンは「Upload」と「Catch」の２つのみで、ワ↵
　ンタッチで送受信ができます。画面分为“一览”和“照片”两部分，按钮只有“Upload"和“Catch"两种，轻松一点即可实现收发信件。

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1)无需用户注册和选定对方地址
　灵活使用位置信息，无需进行麻烦的用户注册和选定对方地址，就可以收发照片。

2)可以下载原始数据文件
　SNS的照片共享，自动缩小功能样样不少，“Kiss”可以接受原始的数据。

3)操作简单，易上手
画面分为“预览”和“照片”两部分，按钮只有“Upload"和“Catch"两种，轻松一点即可实现收发信件。

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特长

1）无须进行用户登陆或发送对象的选定
有效应用地理位置情报，无须进行麻烦的用户登陆或发送对象的选定就可以直接接送照片。

2）可下载原文件
大多数SNS照片共享会自动压缩照片， 但『Kiss』可下载原文件。

3）操作界面间简洁，贴合广大用户
画面只有“一览”和“照片”两种、按键只有”Upload“和“Catch”两种，可实现单点击接送。

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特点

1）无须进行用户登陆或发送对象的选定
有效应用地理位置情报，无须进行麻烦的用户登陆或发送对象的选定就可以直接传收照片。

2）可下载原文件
大多数SNS照片共享会自动压缩照片， 但『Kiss』可下载原文件。

3）操作界面间简洁，适合广大用户
画面只有“预览”和“照片”两种、按键只有”Upload“和“Catch”两种，可实现单点击接送。

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I checked it.
For the product#1, I saw its colour on the web. May I buy it but coloured in ＊＊?↵
If I may, I would like to purchase 1 pc of this product.
Regarding the products#2 and #3, I actually wanted to buy 1 pc, of which the hardware's colour is ＊＊and cartridge colour is ＊＊. May I still make a change?
Besides that, I realized that the amount on the invoice is different from the amount said on the website as I checked by logging in. Which is true actually?
I would like to complete the payment as soon as I can.
Best regards↵

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Thank you for sending me the invoice.
I have checked it.
As for the product#1, I saw the product with ＊＊color on the website.↵
If it is alright, I would like to purchase 1 pc of this product.
Regarding the products#2 and #3, though I wanted to buy each pc of these two products with the ＊＊colored hardware and ＊＊colored cartridge, may I still make a change of my purchase?
Besides that, after I logged in the website, I found that the amount of the products on the invoice is different from the one shown on the website. Would you tell me which one is correct?
I would like to complete the payment as soon as possible.
Best regards

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However, since I am making a shipment today, the delivery date will likely be sometime during x/x ~ x/x at the fastest.
If you could kindly accept the delivery date, I will send the item immediately.

Since it has already been quite a while since you had placed the order, I will be willing to offer you a refund. In that case, I will add extra $x to the refund as a compensation.

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However, I would like to make a shipment today and the delivery date will be sometime during x/x ~ x/x the earliest.
If you could kindly accept the delivery date, I will send the item immediately.

It has already been quite a while since you placed the order, I will be willing to offer you a refund. In that case, I will add extra $x to the refund as a compensation.

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Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there was no detailes indicated on the invoice from the seller for the package #***.

So, I have attahced a document that shows that shows the e-mails that I and the seller exchanged.

In the document, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would very much appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

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Hello,

I am +++ who have just called you.

I know we have been in contact for a while, but again there were no detailes indicated on the invoice of the package from the seller #***.

So, I have attahced a document that shows the e-mails in which all conversations with the seller are included.

In the image, you will find the package #, the numbers of items, the price, and the UPS tracking number.

I would appreciate a quick shipment of the package to Japan.

Thank you.

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Hello.

My name is +++, who called you from Japan not long ago.

Invoice from the buyer is not described in the luggage of which package code is ***.
↵
For that reason, I'm sending you the picture which shows you how we had a business talk with the buyer.
Be sure to refer to the quantity, price and shipment number of package code-*** product in it.

And then, send products to Japan immediately.
I'm looking forward to receive them.

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Hello.

My name is +++, who called you from Japan a few minutes ago.

As for the product with a package number***, there is no details written on the invoice from the seller.
Therefore, I'm sending you the picture which shows you how we had a business talk with the seller.
Please have a look on the photo which shows you the volume, price and USP shipment number of the product with a package number***.

And please send products to Japan ASAP.
I'm looking forward to receiving them.

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please fill 80 letters up fot the title if possible.

After you told me your intention to quit your job because of the illness, I have made a contract with several people. Now I don't have enough time to check your questions or the results of your work. I'm thinking about the work for you to do. But I can only pay for you $5 a week. Can you wait for that?

I want you to put up toys mainly. And tell me categories that you wish to work.

because multiple exhibits can be avoided by doing this.

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please fill 80 letters up for the title if possible.

After you told me your intention to quit your job because of the illness, I have made a contract with several people. Now I don't have enough time to check your questions or the results of your work. I'm thinking about the work for you to do. But I can only pay for you $5 a week. Can you wait for that?

I want you to take charge in selling toys mainly. And tell me another category that you wish to work on.

because duplicate exhibits can be avoided by doing this.

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Title must be up to 80 characters.

Since you want to quit your job because of the disease that was transmitted, I hired a few new people. There is no much time to check this request of yours or the results of your work. I think the work can be passed to you. However, payment will be 5$ a week. Can you wait 2 weeks for that?

I guess I wanted to exhibit your toys at the center. After that, please choose one more category for the exhibition.

I think that this way we will be able to prevent duplicated exhibits.

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Title must be up to 80 characters.

Since you want to quit your job because of the disease that was transmitted, I hired a few new people. There is no much time to check this request of yours or the results of your work. I think the work can be passed to you. However, payment will be 5$ a week. Can you wait 2 weeks for that?

I think I would like to have you take charge in selling toys mainly. After that, please choose one more category for the exhibition.

I think that this way we will be able to prevent duplicated exhibits.

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Thanks for the reply.
In current situation, it seems that we are unable to send you the invoice.
Although it is inconvenient, is it possible for you to bid and pay with $120?
The auction will end immediately after your bid and $44 + extra shipping charges will be refunded after payment.
Please consider it. Thanks.

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Thank you for the reply.
In the current situation, it seems that we are unable to send you the invoice.
Although it is inconvenient, is it possible for you to bid and pay $120 first?
The auction will end immediately after your bid and $44 as well as the extra shipping charges will be refunded after your payment.
Please consider it. Thank you.

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Thank you very much for your reply.

As for the current situation, your invoice could not be sent. Although it might be a bit troublesome, would you bid and pay at $120 first? This way, the auction will be ended earlier as soon as you placed your bid. I'll be returning you $44 and additional shipping fee that is required immediately. Please consider this option. Thank you.

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Thank you very much for your reply.

As for the current situation, your invoice could not be sent. Although it might be a bit troublesome, would you bid at $120 and make a payment first? In this way, the auction will be ended earlier as soon as you place your bid. I'll return your $44 and also the additional shipping fee that is required immediately. Please consider this option. Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply.
Now, it seems that that the invoice can't be sent at the present circumstances.
We hate to trouble you, but is it possible for you to bid at $120 and pay for it?
In that case, we will finish the auction when you bid and we will proceed to arrange the refund of $44 plus extra charge for shipment.
Please consider the above. Thank you for your understanding in advance.

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Thank you for your reply.
It seems that the invoice can't be sent under the current circumstances.
We are sorry for causing you any inconvenience but is it possible for you to bid at $120 and make a payment first?
In that case, we will finish the auction when you bid and we will proceed to arrange the refund of $44 plus extra charge for shipment.
Please consider it. Thank you for your understanding in advance.

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When making a delivery be sure to get a signature.

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Please make sure to get a signature of the client/customer to complete the delivery.