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元の翻訳
★Name
Watanabe Asami
★Height
156.5cm
★Birthdate
1994/9/27
★Hometown
Tochigi prefecture
★Nickname
Asamin
★血液型Blood type
O type
★Hobbies
People watching, shopping
★Special skill
Dancing
★Favorite Artist・Entertainer
Momoiro Clover Z, Shiritsu Ebisu Chugaku, and Maekawa Hiroki

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★Name
Asami Watanabe
★Height
156.5cm
★Birthdate
1994/9/27
★Hometown
Tochigi prefecture
★Nickname
Asamin
★Blood type
O type
★Hobbies
Watching People, shopping
★Special skill
Dancing
★Favorite Artist・Entertainer
Momoiro Clover Z, Shiritsu Ebisu Chugaku, and Maekawa Hiroki

元の翻訳
All of the razors are high quality, differences in the way they shave depend on the quality of the whetstone.

I recommend the following URL for razors.

I will give you a $500 discount including the honing fee.

Currently I am preparing a collection website about razors gathering from around the world.

I will need a bit more time to research the history of razors.

I hold the opinion of a collector such as yourself in high regard.

I do have one question. I believe there are sites that have researched the names of Razor brands from around the world, do you know of any URLs?

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All of the razors are high quality, differences in the way they shave depend on the quality of the whetstone.

I recommend the following URL for razors.

I will give you a $500 discount including the honing fee.

Currently I am preparing a collection website about razors gathered from around the world.

I will need a bit more time to research the history of razors.

I hold the opinion of a collector such as yourself in high regard.

I do have one question. I believe there are sites that have researched the names of razor brands from around the world. Do you know of any URLs?

元の翻訳
The other day I went to the Shirahone hot spring in Nagano.

Nagano has majestic scenery and the traditional Japanese inn had delicious food with excellent hospitality, not to mention the wonderful cloudy hot spring bath. I was really able to relax.

Now its time to get back to working hard :)

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The other day I went to Shirahone Onsen (hot springs) in Nagano prefecture.

Nagano has magnificent scenery and the traditional Japanese inn had delicious food with excellent hospitality, not to mention the wonderful cloudy hot spring bath. I was really able to refresh myself.

Now it's time to get back to working hard. :)

元の翻訳
Regarding the trouble this time, wherever I inquired I was not able to find a solution.

I am really not satisfied, but I leave it at that.

During the next order period, please make sure close the caps securely.

In the near future, I plan on ordering ○○.

Changing the subject, can you tell me how to use ○○?

There are two bags with pink parts in them, can they be used up?
Rubber gloves are included so does that mean its dangerous to handle them by bare hand?

Please tell me the detail on how to use them.

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Regarding the trouble this time, I was not able to find a solution wherever I inquired.

I am really not satisfied, but I give up.

For the next order, please make sure the caps are closed securely.

In the near future, I plan on ordering ○○, please take care of it.

Changing the subject, can you tell me how to use ○○?

There are two bags with pink parts in them, can they be used up?
Rubber gloves are included, does that mean it is dangerous to handle by bare hands?

Please tell me how to use them in details.

元の翻訳
One unit was quickly defective, thus I am requesting reimbursement.
↵
The following two points occurred.

・I could not turn the electricity on the unit off or on
・I could not hear the voice guidance

There has already been a product shipment to the customer, ↵
however if those units are also found to be defective early on will you be able to handle reimbursement for them?
I await your reply.

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One unit was dead on arrival, so I am requesting reimbursement.
The following two problems occurred.

・I could not turn the electricity on the unit off or on
・I could not hear the voice guidance

Some products have already been shipped to the customer, but if those units are also found to be dead on arrival on will you be able reimburse me for them?
I await your reply.

元の翻訳
One unit was quickly defective, thus I am requesting reimbursement.

The following two points occurred.

・I could not turn the electricity on the unit off or on
・I could not hear the voice guidance

There has already been a product shipment to the customer,
however if those units are also found to be defective early on will you be able to handle reimbursement for them?
I await your reply.

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One unit became defective quickly, thus I am requesting a refund.

The following two points occurred.

・The on/off switch doesn't work.
・I could not hear the voice guidance.

There has already been a product shipment to the customer,
If those units are also found to be defective at an early stage, is it possible to refund those as well?
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If you receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

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I understood. Please send me a refund.

If I receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

元の翻訳
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If you receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

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I understand. Please send me a refund.

If I receive the product I purchased, I will pay for it again then.

元の翻訳
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If you receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

修正後
I understood. Please send me a refund.

If I receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

元の翻訳
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If you receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

修正後
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If I receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

元の翻訳
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If you receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

修正後
I understand. Please send me a refund.

If I receive the product I purchased from you, I will pay for it again then.

元の翻訳
A few days ago Shunsuke contacted, saying please send the the undelivered product soon.
Otherwise, please contact soon about the estimated shipping date.

Also, there are a few questions about the products purchased a few days ago listed below.

1. Serenity Pillow case
A pillow case with a photo design attached.
The Serenity Pillow case is just a product with a pattern on it, correct?
Did you send the wrong product?

2. The brunch comforter cover, double size
The six inside chords are attached to the outside not the inside.
Is this a faulty product?

Please send my new versions of these products ASAP.

Thank you

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Please send the undelivered product soon that Shunsuke contacted you about a few days ago.
Otherwise, please contact me soon about the estimated shipping date.

Also, there are a few questions about the products purchased a few days ago listed below.

1. Serenity Pillow case
A pillow case with a photo design attached.
The Serenity Pillow case is just a product with a pattern on it, correct?
Did you send the wrong product?

2. The brunch comforter cover, double size
The six inside chords are attached to the outside, not the inside.
Is this a faulty product?

Please send new versions of these products ASAP.

Thank you