Ilya (ilyatranslation) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Regarding my order, please let me know the delivery date and tracking number.
I would like to received it as soon as possible.
I would appreciate your prompt reply.

修正後
Regarding my order, please let me know the delivery date and tracking number.
I would like to receive it as soon as possible.
I would appreciate your prompt reply.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry, but would it be possible for you to do the cancellation of the order again? Also, according to your wishes, I have made another order for the antique product. If we do not receive your cancellation by mid-Friday, we will make the cancellation here. Please understand.

修正後
We are sorry for the trouble, but would it be possible for you to cancel the order again? At the same time, we hope that you will find other second hand product you wish to buy from us. Please note that if you do not cancel it by Friday, we will cancel it ourselves.

元の翻訳
There's the possibility that the goods I sent you have somehow either been confiscated or disposed of at customs in Brazil.
It appears that you cannot import calendars under Brazilian law.
It is possible that if you send them as "documents" next time that they will be able to pass customs.
Concerning your payment, please pay directly through PayPal. In the case that the goods don't get to you, I will refund your money. My PayPal account is shinjiro@bloomax.co.jp. The cost, including shipping, is $36. Thank you.

修正後
There's the possibility that the goods I sent you have somehow either been confiscated or disposed at customs in Brazil.
It appears that you cannot import calendars under Brazilian law.
It is possible that if I send them as "documents" next time, they may pass through customs.
Concerning your payment, please pay directly through PayPal. In the case that the goods don't get to you, I will refund your money. My PayPal account is shinjiro@bloomax.co.jp. The cost, including shipping, is $36. Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am sorry to have kept you waiting.
However, there was a formal announcement from the Japan Post on a delay with the SAL postage going to France.

To be honest, We hope that you could wait for a little bit more since the product will arrive very soon. But if you say otherwise, we will ship the same product once more.

You can confirm it through the internet since it will be shipped with a tracking number.

Is this arrangement okay with you?

修正後
I am sorry to have kept you waiting.
However, there was a formal announcement from the Japan Post on a delay with the SAL postage going to France.

To be honest, We hope that you could wait for a little bit more since the product will arrive very soon. But if you say otherwise, we will ship the same product once more.

You can confirm it through the internet since it will be shipped with a tracking number.

Is this arrangement okay with you?↵
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お待たせして申し訳ありません。↵
しかし、Japan Postから正式にフランス宛SAL便の遅延が発生しているという知らせがありました。↵
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本音を言えば、もう商品到着まで少し待って頂きたいとことですが、↵
あなたがそこまで言うのでしたら、同じ商品を再度、発送させて頂きます。↵
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追跡番号をつけて発送しますので、↵
インターネットから確認することができます。↵
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これでよろしいですか？

元の翻訳
AAA recommended me to go to your website so I did. I am currently looking for the products below.

If you are selling them, can I buy them? I am looking forward to hearing your good news.
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I am interested in those products down below.
I would love to buy them but I know you don't ship products to Japan. Could you send them to me somehow?

修正後
AAA recommended your website to me to visit.↵
I am currently looking for the products listed below.

If you have some of the items, Id like to buy them. ↵
I am looking forward to hear from you.
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I am interested in the products listed below.
I would love to buy them but I know you don't ship products to Japan. ↵
Could you send them to me somehow?

元の翻訳
1; the customer said he/she bought the jack in bigger size.
2. the customer said he/she asked to change the same jacket in smaller size.
3; the customer claimed to want the same color.
4; maneger told me the smaller size jacket is out of stock.
5; maneger asked him/her if he/she wants the same jacket in navy.
6; maneger told him/her that even the manufacturer doesn't have one in same color.
7; the customer wasn't happy about the taste so he wants to bring the same meal again.
8; the customer asked us for the discount.

修正後
1; the customer said he/she mistakenly bought the jacket in bigger size.
2. the customer asked to swap the jacket for the smaller size.
3; the customer requested for the same color.
4; maneger told me the smaller size jacket in the same color is out of stock.
5; maneger asked the costumer if he/she wants the same jacket in navy.
6; maneger told the costumer that even the manufacturer doesn't have one in same color.
7; the customer wasn't happy about the taste so he wants the same meal to be brought again.
8; the customer asked for a discount.↵
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1,客は昨日間違えて大きいサイズのジャケットを買ったと言った。↵
2,客は同じジャケットの小さいサイズに替えてもらうよう頼んだ。↵
3,客は同じ色が欲しいいと主張した。↵
4,マネージャーは同じ色の小さいジャケットは在庫切れだと言った。↵
5,マネージャーは紺色のサイズと交換するのはどうかと頼んだ。↵
6,マネージャーは同じ色はメーカーにもないと主張した。↵
7,客は味に満足しなかったので、同じ料理をもう一度持ってきてほしいと言った。↵
8,客は会計を安くしてほしいと頼んだ。

元の翻訳
Along with that, in this work,

I want Koganecho to be the goal of work depicted as a "reference point".
For example)) From a house of Koganecho, in the case of a work getting out to a different town, the first is to do the work transmitting things which come from Koganecho, and to be the Koganecho station when you come back home, so trying to make a work which provide indications of things taking place at Koganecho reference point of action and so on ...
It can of course take place only in Koganecho.
I think assuming the work with above-mentioned conditions would be greatly appreciated.
Detailed rules and points below

修正後
Along with that, in this work,

I want you to aim at a piece of work that depicts Koganecho to be the "reference point".
For example)) In a case which a character goes out from a house in Koganecho to another town, try to make a piece that shows the character was in Koganecho at first, or shows that the character comes back to Koganecho station. In such way, you can make a piece that shows the reference point of action is at Koganecho and so on...
Of course, you can just shoot scenes only at Koganecho.
I'd like you to make your piece with above advises.
The followings are detail rules and some points to note.