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I want to end our deal since it is taking too much time and effort on my side. I am frustrated and disappointed with how you are dealing this. I will not return the products and will not expect refund from you.

However, if you refunded, I will regard it as a good will and I will give you a good customer review.

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I want to end our deal since it is taking too much time and effort on my side. I am frustrated and disappointed with how you are dealing with this. I will not return the products and will not expect refund from you.

However, if you do refund, I will regard it as good will and I will give you a good customer review.

元の翻訳
You can post 1 photo per day per each lens. Please chose the best shot of the day. Note that you only can chose the photo from pictures taken with R-D1.
All rights of the posted photos reserved to the person posted.

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You can post up to 1 photo per day per lens. Please choose the best shot of the day. Note that you only can chose the photo from pictures taken with R-D1.
All rights of the posted photos reserved to the person posted.

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Hello,

I'm OO who placed order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you accepted my order?
Was my credit card approved?
What date will you send the item?

I look forward for your reply.

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Hello,

I'm OO who placed an order on 20th September.
Order number is 3160152.

Have you received my order?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the item be delivered?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

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Regarding the wheels, I haven't placed wheels on my WEB Shop because I assumed the shipping cost will be higher due to its larger size. If you can let me know the cost of wheels including the shipping costs, I would be able to place them on my WEB Shop and we may receive orders. Can you tell me the total costs of each wheels.

By the way, why the shipping cost of order number TC-1234 is higher than usual?
Usually when there are 12 items, the shipping cost is 30 points.

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Regarding the wheels, I haven't placed wheels on my WEB Shop because I assumed the shipping cost will be higher due to its larger size. If you can let me know the cost of wheels including the shipping cost, I would be able to post them on my WEB Shop and we may receive orders. Could you tell me the total costs of each wheels?

By the way, why the shipping cost of order number TC-1234 is higher than usual?
Usually when there are 12 items, the shipping cost is 30 points.

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Sorry for the late reply.

First, I want to inform you about one thing. I am currently designing a WEB Shop that deals all of your products in your current WEB Shop. It is still an early stage but in the future there will be more purchases of products other than Nisan (SUZUKI, HONDA,Jeep,etc..)

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Sorry for the late reply.

First, I want to inform you about one thing. I am currently designing a web store that deals all of your products in your current web store. It is still an early stage but in the future there will be more purchases of products other than Nisan (SUZUKI, HONDA,Jeep,etc..)

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I didn't know e-mail was received on the 20th because the computer was broken. I am happy that I received e-mail from you.
Here, we are all doing fine.
My mother somehow overcame this year's extremely hot summer. She coughs sometimes but she doesn't have a fever.
I am also watching the Red Sox games, live on TV here.
Uehara was amazing! I am glad the Red Sox won the title.
Maybe we can meet up together with aunt and all of you next year.
I am happy that I can casually meet with my relative; mother's only sister.
Please say hello to aunt Kazuko.
I look forward for your reply.

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I didn't know I received an email from you on the 20th because the computer was broken. I am happy that you gave me an email .
Here we are all doing fine.
My mother somehow overcame this year's extremely hot summer. She coughs sometimes but she doesn't have a fever.
I am also watching the live Red Sox games on TV here.
Uehara was amazing! I am glad the Red Sox won the title.
Maybe we can meet up together with aunt and all of you next year.
I am happy that I can casually see you as you are my mother's only sister or relative.
Please say hello to aunt Kazuko.
I look forward for your reply.

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I received a cancel request from you.
What is the price with the Expedited Shipping Cost in dollars offered by the seller with a cheaper price?
If you tell me the price I will lower the price for you.
Please let me know if still want to cancel.

I will lower the price to $x including the shipping cost. (I will return $xx.)
The product will be send in two to three says.
How do you like this condition?

That price is more than I can offer.
I can offer you $xx.
I will cancel your purchase within 24 hours.

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I received a cancellation request from you.
What is the price including the Expedited Shipping Cost in dollars offered by the seller with a cheaper price?
If you tell me the price I may be able to lower the price for you.
Please let me know if you still want to cancel.

I will lower the price to $x including the shipping cost. (I will return $xx.)
The product will be shipped in two to three says.
What do you think of this condition?

That price is more than what I can possibly offer.
I can offer you $xx.
I will cancel your purchase within 24 hours.