Donican Lam (illusion85) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Warranty by manufacturer and original hard case is included. DVD, fan club stuff, and Christmas card is not included.

Because of "Fourth of July Sale", I can give you A dollar discount today.
How about B dollar including shipping fee?

修正後
Warranty by manufacturer and original hard case is included. DVD, fan club stuff, and Christmas card is not included.

Because of the "Fourth of July Sale", I can give you A dollars discount today.
How about B dollars including shipping fee?

元の翻訳
Good day!
Regarding the item I sent a few days ago, I arranged for returning it at the Japanese customs.
You can see the following website for reference.
https://trackings.post.japanpost.jp/services/srv/search/?locale=en
Tracking number : AAA
The staff at the customs might have misunderstood it as a real gun at the inspection by using X ray.

When it is returned to me, I will send it again.
Then I will let you know the tracking number.
If I cannot send it to your country (prohibited item), I will issue you a refund in full amount. I hope that you understand it.
I appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
Good day!
Regarding the item I sent a few days ago, I have made arrangements at the Japanese Customs for it to be returned to me.
You can refer to following website:
https://trackings.post.japanpost.jp/services/srv/search/?locale=en
Tracking number : AAA
The staff at Customs probably mistook it for a real gun during the X-ray screening.

When it is returned to me, I will send it again.
Then I will let you know the tracking number.
If I cannot send it to your country (prohibited item), I will issue you a refund in full. I ask for your understanding.
I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Your cancel request is well received. As the product status is being before delivery, we can simply cancel your order instead of resell. Full refund will be ready for you immediately.

Thank you for your attention.

修正後
Your cancel request has been received. As the product has not been shipped yet, we will simply cancel your order instead of reselling the item. You can receive a full refund.

Thank you.