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IGI5565
何度もメールをお送りして申し訳ございませんが、まだ前回のメッセージへの返信を受け取っていないのです。私は前回のメールで書いたことをもう一度書きます。「昨日の朝の荷物を受け取りましたが、それは私が注文したものではありませんでした。私は「アメイジングスパイダーマン」ホットトイズというものを注文しています。どうすればいいですか？」

前回にも述べたように、これまでのサービスには非常に失望しているので、私が元々欲しいと思っていたものをちゃんと購入するまでは、どんな手段も講じるつもりです。

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IGI5565
何度もメールをお送りして申し訳ございませんが、まだ前回のメッセージへの返信を受け取っていないのです。私は前回のメールで書いたことをもう一度書きます。「昨日の朝の荷物を受け取りましたが、それは私が注文したものではありませんでした。私は「アメイジングスパイダーマン」ホットトイズというものを注文しています。アイアンマンではありません。どうすればいいですか？」

前回にも述べたように、これまでのサービスには非常に失望しているので、私が元々欲しいと思っていたものは別の場所で購入しようと思っています。

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go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, is one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building are still being reused.

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go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, was one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with a Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building were reused.

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no79001

After you enjoy sightseeing and walking around cities, let's enjoy hot spring!
Here are the top recommended hot springs for each region.

After enjoy walking long way on the concrete road must be tiring.
When you get tired, it's time to go to a hot spring and get relaxed!

After walking in the city in Tokyo...,
Let's enjoy the atmosphere of a big modern city Tokyo and good old days in Edo period.

Take Odakyu line's special express train called "Romance car"...,

Head to Hakone Yumoto hot springs (Hakone-cho, Kanagawa-prefecure)

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no79001

After you enjoy sightseeing and walking around cities, let's relax at hot spring!
Here are the top recommended hot springs in each region.

It's fun to walk around town in urban area but after walking on an asphalt road you get tired.
When you get tired, it's time to go to a hot spring and relax!

After walking in the city in Tokyo (Tokyo Metropolis) ...
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Why don't you enjoy the atmosphere of a metropolitan Tokyo and a mood of good old time in Edo period.

Taking Odakyu line's special express train called "Romance Car"...

To the Hakone Yumoto hot springs (Hakone-cho, Kanagawa-prefecure)

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The Chuugoku Region↵
From its highest and most beautiful mountain, the broad vistas of Tottori and Shimane can be viewed.
Unzen (Kyushu and Nagasaki)
Not only the magnificent Unzen, but the prefectures of Saga, Fukuoka, and to the east, the coast of Kumamoto Prefecture are clearly visible.
We can say without fear of contradiction that the variety of scenes on view from carriage windows are iconic of train travel in Kyushu.
Turning our attention further south to Kagoshima, (or “Sakurajima”, meaning “Cherry Blossom Island”, as it is called), where a particular mountain makes its presence felt.
If your journey takes you to Kagoshima, you can experience the sight of the columns of smoke issuing from the Volcano on the far side of Kumgang Bay. ↵

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This is the highest and most beautiful mountain in the Chugoku Region that can be viewed fron the broad vistas of Tottori and Shimane.
Unzen (Kyushu and Nagasaki)
Not only the magnificent Unzen, but the prefectures of Saga, Fukuoka, and to the east, the coast of Kumamoto Prefecture are clearly visible.
We can say without fear of contradiction that the variety of scenes on view from carriage windows are iconic of train travel in Kyushu.
Turning our attention further south to Kagoshima, everyone recalls the “Sakurajima” (meaning “Cherry Blossom Island”, as it is called, and it is a mountain itself), which makes its presence felt.
If your journey takes you to Kagoshima, you can experience the sight of the columns of smoke issuing from the Volcano on the far side of Kinkou Bay.

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The number of items on the invoice you ordered last time doesn't change.
However we would like you to deliver the products as scheduled on the attached file
and also deliver the products in two times separately from the factory.
Fixed purchase orders will be reported to the factory from sales representative.
Could you please let us cancel the items only on the attached file?
Because the items were confirmed in inventory with wrong number,
Also please see the following size we request for tems.

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The number of items on the invoice you ordered last time doesn't change.
However we would like you to deliver the products as scheduled on the attached file
and also deliver the products in two times separately from the factory.
The fixed purchase orders will be reported to the factory from our sales representative.
Could you please let us cancel only the items on the attached file?
Because the items were confirmed in inventory with wrong number.
Also please see the following regarding the size we request for the items.

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al62506

Choose EMODA to be cool and mode style Gyaru!

The official website of EMODA which belongs to touchMe Collection.
Ena Matsumoto produce.

The official website of SHIBUYA109.
It will offer you the shops' latest news, recommended items, good-value information, and event information♪
You can also view the shop list, floor guide, and informations.

SHIBUYA109 is Gyaru's holy ground! It is no exaggeration to say that Japanese Gyaru trends start from here.

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al62506

Choose EMODA to be cool and mode style Gyaru!

The official website of EMODA which had made its appearance on touchMe Collection.
Produced by Ena Matsumoto.

This is an official website of SHIBUYA109.
It offers the information of good-values and events, and the latest shop news and item recommendations up-to-date♪
You can also view the shop list, floor guide, and information.

SHIBUYA109 is Gyaru's holy ground! It is no exaggeration to say that Japanese Gyaru trends originate in here.

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al62005

The Punk style of plaid × leopard print !

I like light sneaker type, and always buy it right away when I find pretty platform shoes.

Choose platform sneakers when the style is easy-going.

She wear personalized shocking pink overalls and yellow socks stylishly!

Kary Pamyu Pamyu's existance itself is the Cawaii.

She doesn't cut corners in her fahion even though when it is easy-going style. She is the fashion icon that represent Japan.

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al62005

The Punk style in check × leopard print !

I like a light sneaker type, so I always buy one when I find pretty thick-soled shoes of the type.

Choose thick-soled sneakers with an easy style!

She wear well in a unique color combination of shocking pink overalls and yellow socks!

Kary Pamyu Pamyu's existance itself is the Kawaii.

She, who never cut corners even in an easy style, is the fashion icon representing Japan.

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The combination of pink and light blue look like it is in a fairy tale.

Welcome to Melty Cream Doughnut shop!
Please find your favorite one in those creamy and sweet doughnuts.

You can dress up casual too with the A line doughnut pattern dress designed by angelicpretty♪

Try brown accessories with those everyone’s favorite chocolate designs.

The one-piece will make you as if you are in “Alice in wonderland”.
So, let’s do party♪

In collaboration with sweets and bear will be the best!!↵

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The combination of pink and light blue have a fairy-tale atmosphere.

Welcome to Melty Cream Doughnut shop!
You will find a plenty of tasty doughnuts, they are Creamy and Sweet, in our menu☆

You can wear casual with an A-line angelicpretty with a doughnut pattern♪

Try brown accessories with its popular chocolate pattern♪

The one-piece with an apron will make you feel as if you are “Alice in wonderland."
Let’s go to a party in a mood that you are Alice♪

A collaboration of sweets and bear is the cutest ever!!

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al61601

The Japanese rockstar, who merges manliness and feminity. The graceful, constantly evolving Hyde.

The beauty of the evolving rockstar, Hyde is extraordinary.

The Japanese vocalist. The vocalist of L'Arc~en~Ciel, guitarist of P'UNK~EN~CIEL and the vocalist of his own project, "VAMPS". Until 2006, he also worked solo under the name "HYDE".

Combining feminity and masculinity

His wavy long hair period looked phantasmal.

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al61601

A Japanese rockstar, who merges manliness and feminity. The graceful, constantly evolving Hyde.

The beauty of an evolving rockstar, Hyde is extraordinary.

A Japanese vocalist. A vocalist of L'Arc~en~Ciel, a guitarist of P'UNK~EN~CIEL and a vocalist of his own project, "VAMPS". Until 2006, he also worked solo under the name "HYDE".

Combining feminity and masculinity

His wavy long hair period looked phantasmal.

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I also purchased X their script, but this one is so much better you can't even compare the two.

There's however one thing I just can't wrap my head around, and that's how uploading videos works.

I think there are the following problems.
1. It is not possible to upload both a video and a comment of your own at the same time.
2. I was unable to intuitively guess where to put the URL of the video.

There were also some questions from people who didn't understand how to upload videos on the forums.
It's probably not a good thing if something like that requires extra explanation.

It made me wonder if there is any reason for things to be designed this way.

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I also purchased X their script, and I found this one is incomparably better.

However, there's one thing I just can't wrap my head around, and that's how to upload video works.

I think there are the following problems.
1. It is not possible to upload both a video and a comment of your own at the same time.
2. You are unable to intuitively guess where to put the URL of the video.

There were also some questions from people who didn't understand how to upload videos on this forum.
It's probably not a good thing if something like that requires extra explanation.

There might be any reason for this product to be designed this way, though.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>We group is to create the hiring for the people who are not mercy for having a chance of hiring. And to be a business partner who solve the problem of customer company. Therefore, our goal is to achieve this 2 mission and get better day by day.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>Our S-Pool group is applying ourselves everyday to realize 2 missions: to create employment for the people who does not have enough employment opportunity, and to be a business partner to solve the problem of our customer companies.