Celeste Scott (fuyunoriviera) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your inquiry.
We are going to send the item tomorrow.
After sending it, we will let you know the inquiry number.
May we ask you a little patience?

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Thank you for your inquiry.
We are going to send the item tomorrow.
After sending it, we will let you know the inquiry number.
May we ask a little patience?

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Listing this as "in excellent condition" in your description is improper. Instead, it is an extraordinary exaggeration to make people think that that item's condition is in top shape. I believed in your listing of the item as "excellent condition," then bought the item from you. Foolhardily, I ended up buying your extremely over-rated junk items, the cause being that your description is a far cry from the actual condition of the item. That is not the proper way to conduct business. Accordingly, you should respond by accepting a return refunding my money.

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Listing this as "in excellent condition" in your description is improper. Instead, it is an extraordinary exaggeration to make people think that that item's condition is in top shape. I believed in your listing of the item as "excellent condition," then bought the item from you. Foolhardily, I ended up buying your extremely over-rated junk items, the cause being that your description is a far cry from the actual condition of the item. That is not the proper way to conduct business. Accordingly, you should respond by accepting a return and refunding my money.

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FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

March 24（TUE）22:55 - 23:00
FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

※ Comment only appearance.
※ Please kindly note that due to certain circumstances, the broadcast contents are subject to change without prior notice, thanks for the understanding.

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FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

March 24 (TUE) 22:55 - 23:00
FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

※ Comment only appearance.
※ Please kindly note that due to certain circumstances, the broadcast contents are subject to change without prior notice. Thank you for the understanding.

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FM FUKUOKA「Hyper Night Program GOW !!」

FM FUKUOKA「Hyper Night Program GOW !!」
March 19（Thursday）16:00 - 20:00

※ Comment only appearance.
※ Please kindly note that due to certain circumstances, the broadcast contents are subject to change without prior notice, thanks for the understanding.

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FM FUKUOKA "Hyper Night Program GOW !!"

FM FUKUOKA "Hyper Night Program GOW !!"
March 19 (Thursday) 16:00 - 20:00

※ Comment only appearance.
※ Please kindly note that due to certain circumstances, the broadcast contents are subject to change without prior notice. Thank you for the understanding.

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Yes, I would like to order two!
Actually, I have a friend who is asking Judy to make Kana kit. My friend told me, however, that she can't afford to make the kit because her budget is limited.
Therefore, I want to get the kits before it is out of stock.
Again, since her budget is limited, I would like to ask Judy to keep one of the two kits and ask you to send me another kit with a finished doll.
How much it will be if we order two kits? I need to ask my friend before we finally place the order. Thank you.

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Yes, I would like to order two!
Actually, I have a friend who is asking Judy to make a Kana kit. My friend told me, however, that she can't afford to make the kit because her budget is limited.
Therefore, I want to get a kit before it is out of stock.
Again, since her budget is limited, I would like to ask Judy to keep one of the two kits and ask you to send me another kit with a finished doll.
How much will it be if we order two kits? I need to ask my friend before we finally place the order. Thank you.

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I have one request.
Can you kindly request a product return via the return center?

If you request for a product return approval, then I will receive the following email.
[Return authorization request for order # ...] (Product return approval request)

If you do this procedure, then we will be able to omit internal procedures and I will be able to issue you a refund immediately.

Will it be possible for you to do this?

I will appreciate it if you can kindly provide your response.

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I have one request.
Can you please request a product return via the return center?

If you request a product return approval, then I will receive the following email.
[Return authorization request for order # ...] (Product return approval request)

If you do this, then we will be able to omit internal procedures and I will be able to issue you a refund immediately.

Will it be possible for you to do this?

Please kindly provide your response.

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Just as could be expected of a teacher.
Thank you for understanding my weakness. This is very encouraging support to me. I am thankful for you daily. It has only been 3 months since I have come to Singapore. There are still many days spent where I have not gotten used to life here. It is also very difficult because there are not many Japanese speaking staff in my company. I am very thankful that you have given me a trigger to think about things besides work. Recently you seem very happy, and your smile is wonderful. This is also something that makes me happy, as I am thankful for your unexpected support.

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Just as could be expected of a teacher.
Thank you for understanding my weakness. It is very encouraging support for me. I am thankful for you every day. It has only been 3 months since I have come to Singapore. I am still not very used to life here. It is also very difficult because there are not many Japanese speaking staff at my company. I am very thankful that you have given me an opportunity to think about things besides work. Recently you seem very happy, and your smile is wonderful. This is also something that makes me happy, as I am thankful for your unexpected support.

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Billy Elliot

This was my second time seeing Billy Elliot. The first time my seats were far back so I wanted to see it closer and purchased seats closer to the front. We were appreciative of our seat's location in the middle of the 4th row from the front. This is my favorite movie's musical, the part of young Billy is wonderful. I am not very familiar with musicals, however I laughed and cried. It was a very happy time and at the end everyone enthusiastically applauded and gave a standing ovation. If I get to go to Britain again, this is a musical I would absolutely like to see again.

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Billy Elliot

This was my second time seeing Billy Elliot. The first time my seats were far back so I wanted to go again and sit closer, so I purchased seats closer to the front. I really liked my seat in the middle of the 4th row from the front. This is my favorite movie musical, and Billy's role as a young man is wonderful... I am not a big fan of musicals, but I laughed and cried. I was really happy at the end when everyone enthusiastically applauded and gave a standing ovation. If I get to go to Britain again, this is a musical I would absolutely like to see again.

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Billy’s acting and dancing was astonishing!
Since I prepared by watching the movie “Little Dancer” beforehand, even though it was in English the content was very understandable. Anyway, Billy’s acting was Great! Additionally, the acting by the other performers’ was wonderful as well, and before applying for the tickets, Phantom of the Opera and Lion King was considered, but this musical was really great! (Not able to see them in Japan!)
It’s recommended! ↵

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Billy’s acting and dancing was astonishing!
Since I prepared by watching the movie “Little Dancer” beforehand, I understood the content even thought it was in English. Anyway, Billy’s acting was great! And the acting by the other performers was wonderful as well, and before applying for the tickets, I considered Phantom of the Opera and The Lion King, but this musical was really great! (Not able to see it in Japan!)
I recommended it! The photo is from the pamphlet

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The best experience in London.

During my sightseeing in London I wanted to see the musical that had a good reputation and made a reservation for it, and I think that it was the best experience in 3 days.
This "Phantom of the Opera" production is especially great. The stage devices are wonderfully well-equipped as might be expected of the theater where long run performances have done for many years, that's why the dynamic production that can make is simply a word of masterpiece.
Furthermore, rich colors and the fantastic rendition is beautiful enough to be likely out sigh, and acting of the actors is also wonderfully good, it is finished beautiful one really as "work" comprehensively.

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The best experience in London.

During my sightseeing in London I wanted to see a musical that had a good reputation and so made a reservation for one, and I think that it was the best experience in my 3 days there.
This "Phantom of the Opera" production is especially great. The stage devices are wonderfully well-equipped as might be expected of the theater where long run performances have been done for many years, that's why the dynamic production they can make is simply a work of masterpiece.
Furthermore, rich colors and the fantastic rendition is beautiful enough to sigh, and the acting by the actors is also wonderfully good, it is really one beautiful "work of art" comprehensively.

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It was wonderful.
I wasn't that interested in musicals but I went to see it because my friends who love musical recommended me to go. Nice atmosphere, staging and story were more than expected and I shed tears in the end... I become a musical fan now and want to see it again!!
Next time I go to London, I definitely go to see the musical!

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It was wonderful.
I wasn't that interested in musicals but I went to see it because my friends who love musical recommended me to go. Nice atmosphere, staging and story were more than expected and I shed tears in the end... I become a musical fan now and want to see it again!!
Next time I go to London, I will definitely go to see a musical!

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We transferred from Los Angels International Airport by car and stayed here for one night.
The hosts wee very kind and explained about the use of their space in detail. I used AB for the first time but I was very eased about it. The room was big enough for three people. Also beers and cokes in their fridge were all complementary! The beds and sheets were all clean and we had no issues.
If I ever visit LA again, I would like to stay there again. If you visit LA and need a place to stay, I highly recommend the place.

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We transferred from Los Angels International Airport by car and stayed here for one night.
The hosts wee very kind and explained the use of their space in detail. It was my first time using AB, but I was very eased about it. The room was big enough for three people. Also the beers and cokes in their fridge were all complementary! The beds and sheets were all clean and we had no issues.
If I ever visit LA again, I would like to stay there again. If you visit LA and need a place to stay, I highly recommend this place.

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I was able to spend quality time in the palace since I went to the concert on different day. I had a lot of time to enjoy myself in the luxurious palace.
The concert in the chapel where I saw in the upper level was very impressive. I had such a great experience of all. The restaurant that we went for dinner was quite famous and I read its article in the magazine before. Very relaxed and fun atmosphere. I was also able to taste many varieties of beer.

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I was able to spend quality time in the palace since I went to the concert on different day. I had a lot of time to enjoy myself in the luxurious palace.
The concert in the chapel I saw from the upper level was very impressive. Everything was such a great experience. The restaurant we went to for dinner was quite famous and I read an article about it in a magazine before. Very relaxed and fun atmosphere. I was also able to taste many varieties of beer.

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Convenient tour.
It was more like a tour rather than just transportation, and it was nice that I could visit many paces faster. The time allocation was adequate as well. English of the tour guide was strange a little bit, but the guide was very kind and made an effort to explain for us when I asked questions. The conversation between the guide is also my good memory. Thank you very much.

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Convenient tour.
It was more like a tour rather than just transportation, and it was nice that I could visit many places faster. The time allocation was adequate as well. The tour guide's English was a little bit strange, but the guide was very kind and made an effort to explain things for us when we asked questions. Conversations with the guide are also good memories of mine. Thank you very much.

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Highly recommend it. The tour has a free-to-ride ticket and covers main sightseeing spots. It was so satisfying because the train/bus stopped briefly or run slowly for making the time to take pictures for us even at the place where we were just supposed to pass. It was the comfortable train/bus to ride and scenery was beautiful. Plus, we could listen to guidance through the headphones. Thanks to these things, we enjoyed ourselves much more.

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Highly recommend it. The tour includes a free-to-ride ticket and covers the main sightseeing spots. It was so satisfying because the train/bus stopped briefly or ran slowly to make sure we had time to take pictures, even at places we were just supposed to pass. It was a comfortable train/bus ride and the scenery was beautiful. Plus, we could listen to guidance through the headphones. Thanks to these things, we enjoyed ourselves a lot more.

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the Tower of Pisa
The tour guide explained very effectively, and it was helpful. We traveled around effectively. The Tower of Pisa itself was also great.↵

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Tower of Pisa Tour
The tour guide explained everything very effectively, which was helpful. We traveled around efficiently. The Tower of Pisa itself was also great.

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A Tour to the Leaning Tower of Pisa
The tour guide helped me much by introducing the places well. I was able to go sightseeing very efficiently. The Leaning Tower of Pisa was great too!↵

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A Tour to the Leaning Tower of Pisa
The tour guide helped me a lot by explaining the places well. I was able to go sightseeing very efficiently. The Leaning Tower of Pisa was great too!

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Unfortunately, we are Native Instruments company's translators, we can not accept other company's transaction.

We hope that you can understand.

Sincerely yours.

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Unfortunately, we are Native Instruments company's translators and cannot accept another company's translation work.

We hope that you can understand.

Sincerely yours.

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I had done a cancellation request, but I refused to receive it as it was sent to Japan.
Does it reach there?

If you could confirm its arrival, would you please process a cancellation?
Thank you very much for your help.↵
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I requested a cancellation and refused to receive it as it was sent to Japan.
Has it arrived there?

If you could confirm its arrival, would you please process the cancellation?
Thank you very much for your help.

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If 1,600 US dollars is calculated as the amount to be filed at the customs, it might be a mistake made by the office at the customs when they checked or calculated. We attach the filing form of the customs and the invoice for reference.
The same documents must have been printed out and attached at the item.
Would you please check them?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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If 1,600 US dollars is calculated as the amount to be filed at customs, it might be a mistake made by the office at customs when they checked or calculated. We have attached the customs filing form and the invoice for reference.
The same documents should have been printed out and attached to the item.
Would you please check them?
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you for shopping in our store.
We contacted you that the item had not been shipped yet,↵
but we have already sent it to you.
We apologize to have given you the wrong information.
May we ask you a little patience?
It takes from 2 weeks to 1 month to deliver the items by international mail.
However, as it is a holiday season now, you will receive it behind schedule.
We hope that you understand it.↵
We appreciate your cooperation.↵

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Good day!
Thank you for shopping from our store.
We contacted you just before saying that the item had not been shipped yet, but we have already sent it to you.
We apologize for giving you the wrong information.
We ask for your patience until your product arrives.
It takes from 2 weeks to 1 month to deliver items by international mail.
However, as it is a holiday season now, you will receive it behind schedule.
We ask for your understanding with this matter and appreciate your cooperation.

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I intend to make improvements on these three areas: to increase the quality of feedback from customers, to not send goods belatedly and to include a tracing number for every order that has been shipped. In regards to the low level of affirmation from customers, I intend to send a follow-up email to customers after every transaction to request for feedback. As for the elimination of late delivery, I will ship the goods speedily after receiving the orders and further increase the lead time. Currently, tracing numbers are not used to record down the shipping orders. Hence, I will attach tracing numbers to the order so that I can inform our customers of these numbers. I have already attached tracing numbers to the 5 order that I shipped out recently.

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I intend to make improvements on these three areas: to increase the quality of feedback from customers, to not send goods belatedly and to include a tracking number for every order that has been shipped. In regards to the low level of feedback from customers, I intend to send a follow-up email to customers after every transaction to request for feedback. As for the elimination of late delivery, I will ship goods quickly after receiving orders and further increase the lead time. We currently ship items without a tracking number, however I intend to change this and use a delivery option that provides a tracking number so that I can inform our customers of such numbers. I have already attached tracking numbers to the 5 orders that I shipped out recently.

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Thank you for your enquiries.
I'm very sorry but↵
we do not sell this product in sets here in Japan.
The photo, which you viewed earlier, indicates one product.
This product is usually sold in sets in Israel.
Moving forward, I think it is possible for you to purchase this product from other shops,↵
but I would suggest that you confirm the details beforehand with these shops.
For our shop, when we sell products as one set, or even as two or three sets, we will definitely indicate them with labels.
I'm deeply sorry that I cannot satisfy your requirements adequately this time round.
If there's a chance in future, please patronize my shop.
I'm grateful to have met you.↵
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Thank you for your enquiries.
I'm very sorry, but we do not sell this product in sets here in Japan.
The photo, which you viewed earlier, indicates one product.
We realise that this product is usually sold in sets in Israel.
I believe it is possible for you to purchase this product from other shops, but I would suggest that you confirm details with those shops beforehand.
When we sell products as a set, or even as two or three sets, we indicate them with labels.
I'm deeply sorry that I cannot satisfy your requirements adequately this time round.
Please use my shop again if you get the chance.
I'm grateful to have met you.

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We think it is best to have trading companies handle our product.
Compared to us, they are more familiar with the sales outlets for products like ours as well as factories and power plants etc.

The reason why we are claiming that we would like a price list is because we were told by a trading company that is interested in your products at at our business meeting that we will not be able to sell to customers without a price list.
In Japan, it is the standard way that you show the price first and then start discussing the business.
Please understand the difference between your culture and ours.
If we don't have the price list, the trading company will never want to deal in our product.↵

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We think it is best to have trading companies handle the products.
Compared to us, they are more familiar with the sales outlets for products like these, as well as places like factories and power plants.

The reason I strongly stated that I would like a price list is because I was told by a trading company that is interested in your products at a business meeting last month that we will not be able to sell to customers without a price list.
In Japan, it is the standard procedure to show the price first and then start discussing business.
Please understand the difference between your culture and ours.
If we don't have the price list, the trading company will not want to deal with our products.