haze yao (ecnuly_3134) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
虽然小西彩乃退出了，
但是前段时间，我们四人制作的专辑已经发卖
从今以后也再接再厉，向再次登上日本武道馆的舞台的目标迈进。
希望我们继续的，请给予我们支持，我们也将继续好好工作。
今天也请多多支持东京女子流

东京女子流工作人员全体

致一直支持我们的大家（小西彩乃的发言）
http://tokyogirlsstyle.jp/news/detail.php?id=1030561

修正後
小西彩乃即将退出离开了，
不过前段时间，我们四人制作的专辑已经发卖
今后大家也会再接再厉，向再次登上日本武道馆舞台的目标迈进。
希望大家继续支持东京女子流的其他成员，我们也将继续好好工作。
今后也请多多支持东京女子流。

东京女子流工作人员全体

致一直支持我们的大家（小西彩乃的发言）
http://tokyogirlsstyle.jp/news/detail.php?id=1030561

元の翻訳
【提供參加握手會機會的特別商品】
「SUPER☆GiRLS　11th單曲「ahaha！～超絶爆笑音樂領頭者～」發行紀念原畫/SUPER☆GiRLS 商品（T恤・蒲扇・圍巾・相框・檯燈）
購入金額達到1,000円將得到握手券1張(可以任意參加三場中的一場）

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【團體握手會參加者商品】
「SUPER☆GiRLS　11th單曲「阿哈哈！～超絶爆笑舞曲～」發行紀念原版官方照片/SUPER☆GiRLS 商品（T恤・圓扇・長版毛巾・相框・螢光棒）
購入金額每滿1,000円將得到握手券1張(可以參加三列中的其中一列）

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元の翻訳
关于5月（第36期以后）solidemo live购票手册

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关于5月（第36期以后）SOLIDEMO LIVE购票方法的更新

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contacting.
Please return my $150 to my PAYPAL account before this Friday.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I see, it is all right for me on this coming Friday. Please refund $150 through my PAYPAL account.

元の翻訳
用电子邮件登陆的客人均会获得价值500日元的优惠劵
这次登陆的客人之中还有数名会被抽选出来，我们将赠送限定新奇小礼物
具体详情将于日后发送至您的email

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用电子邮件登陆的客人均会获得价值500日元的优惠劵
这次登陆的客人之中还有数名会被抽选出来，我们将赠送限定新奇小礼物（本次注册的客户将有机会获得我们赠送的限定新奇小礼物。）
具体详情将于日后发送至您的email

元の翻訳
Get a 500yen coupon just by assigning with us by email.
A limited specail present for the lucky ones who has assigned this time.
More details will be send to your assigned email address later

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※For anybody who registered an email address, we will present a coupon worth equivalent to JPY500.
※Some of them among registered an email address this time, we will present limited version novelty.
※We will inform you details to an email address registered in later date.

元の翻訳
我希望在中国b地区发卖产品。有以下疑问，盼请慎答。

1 如在中国居住，是否可以以个人，而非法人名义买卖商品？

2 如果一定要为法人形式，是否必是中国国内法人？

3 美国的银行账户或者欧元的账户可以和贵公司交易吗？

4 和贵公司的业务往来，是否可以用英语交流？

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我希望在中国B地区展出产品。有以下疑问，盼请慎答。

1 只要居住在中国，即便是个人也能出展吗？还是必须以法人的身份？

2 如果一定要为法人形式，是否必是中国国内法人？

3 银行账户如果是美国或欧洲户头，也能收到贵公司的营业额的汇款吗？

4 贵公司的客服团队是否支持英语交流？

元の翻訳
The tracking number has been confirmed.
It seems like the products have been stopped due to the tariff trouble again.

i would like to refund everything, in case it would bring you more trouble.
I have no access to cancle it ,so please go to b to cancle it.

HOW TO CANCLE
1 go to account page-----long in----click the Kontaktieren Sie un button on the right bottom
2 put a NO to the order list which means you would like to cancle the order

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The tracking number has been confirmed.
It seems the products is still at the customhouse.

I would like to refund everything, in case it would bring you more trouble.
I have no access to cancel it ,so please go to b to cancel it.

HOW TO CANCEL
1 go to account page-----log in----click the Kontaktieren Sie un button on the right bottom
2 put a NO to the order list and apply to cancel the order

元の翻訳
i have send you an list about the products which have been uploaded.

i will pay 20 dollars because the job description is a little different from what we had said. ↵
i appreciate if you can search and upload the products for a while.

there is a mistake : the products you have uploaded according to my list have been uploaded twice.

i will still pay for this part but i hope you can input the products on my sheet .

thank you for your cooperation . i hope i can get the result asap↵

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The items listed in the sheet I sent you had already been listed.

Your job description at the beginning when I have hired you was only to list the items, but I would like to request you to do the item research together with the item listing for a while

The items you have listed had been listed already, so those were listed double now.

However, I will still compensate what you have done, but I would be grateful if you could fill researched items in the sheet I am going to send you again and send it back to me.

I could contact you very easily and look very hard worker, so I would be able to expect your good job.

元の翻訳
i have send you an list about the products which have been uploaded.

i will pay 20 dollars because the job description is a little different from what we had said.
i appreciate if you can search and upload the products for a while.

there is a mistake : the products you have uploaded according to my list have been uploaded twice.

i will still pay for this part but i hope you can input the products on my sheet .

thank you for your cooperation . i hope i can get the result asap↵

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I have sent you a list about the products which have been uploaded.

i will pay 20 dollars because the job description is a little different from what we had said.
i appreciate if you can search and upload the products for a while.

There is a mistake: the products you have uploaded according to my list have been uploaded twice.

i will still pay for this part but i hope you can input the products on my sheet.

Thank you for your cooperation. i hope i can get the result ASAP.