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I am Tanaka, the contact person for your company.
About the telephone conference with Sato, we are unavailable on April 8th or 9th.
Could we reschedule to the either of the following dates?

April 16th (Thu.) 10:00AM (Paris time, CET)
April 17th (Fri.) 11:00AM (Paris time, CET)

Please kindly confirm. Thank you.

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I am Tanaka, the contact person for your company.
About the telephone conference with Sato, we are unavailable on April 8th and 9th.
Could you reschedule to the either of the following dates?

April 16th (Thu.) 10:00AM (Paris time, CET)
April 17th (Fri.) 11:00AM (Paris time, CET)

Please kindly confirm. Thank you.

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In the middle of a free charge campaign

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Now, it's a free charge campaign period.

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You say the cause of delay of return was because of me, but it is wrong.
You can check my address anytime on the ebay or on a label on the product.
Usually, buyers return products from such information.
You returned so late, then ebay issued a permit of "No Refund" officially.
If I was wrong, ebay does not make such decision. (They are 99% on buyers side.)

I can still accept return of the product, but not do full refund.
Because the price of products on ebay felled to 250 dollars within this two and a half month.
You don't need to return if you are not satisfied with.

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You say the cause of delay of return was because of me, but it is wrong.
You can check my address anytime on ebay or on a label on the product.
Usually, buyers return products from such information.
You returned so late, then ebay issued a permit of "No Refund" officially.
If I was wrong, ebay does not make such decision. (They are 99% on buyers side.)

I can still accept return of the product, but not do full refund.
Because the price of products on ebay fell to 250 dollars within this two and a half month.
You don't need to return if you are not satisfied with it.

元の翻訳
You are saying that the reason why the item was delayed in returning belongs to me, but it is wrong.
You can check my address at eBay any time, and it is also listed at the label attached at the item.
Usually buyers return the item based on this information.
As you were so late in returning the item, the eBay allowed to issue "Return impossible" officially.
If I am wrong, the eBay does not make that kind of decision (eBay is at buyer's side by 99 percent).

We can accept the item being returned from you, but cannot issue you a refund in full amount.
The reason is that the price of the item at the eBay fell to as low as 250 dollars in the past 2.5 months.
If you are not satisfied with it, you do not have to return it.

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You are saying that the reason why the item was delayed in returning belongs to me, but it is wrong.
You can check my address at eBay any time, and it is also listed at the label attached at the item.
Usually buyers return the item based on this information.
As you were so late in returning the item, eBay allowed to issue "Return impossible" officially.
If I am wrong, eBay does not make that kind of decision (eBay is at buyer's side by 99 percent).

We can accept the item being returned from you, but cannot issue you a refund in full amount.
The reason is that the price of the item at eBay fell to as low as 250 dollars in the past 2.5 months.
If you are not satisfied with it, you do not have to return it.

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It has been two months since they have arrived in Japan. We are very satisfied.
I have a very important favor to ask you.
I want you to refuse if ●●● want to buy a serval from you. It's because I am fighting them in a court right now. They said that they didn't want this animal, which you have raised preciously, because they are getting bigger. I feel like servals that you have raised with a lot of care as a part of my family. Yet ●●● treats these animals like objects. He is not a good person, so I want you to be careful.
I am drawing pictures of Serval for you right now. Thank you for giving us many hopes.

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It has been two months since they have arrived in Japan. We are very satisfied.
I have a very important favor to ask you.
I want you to refuse if ●●● want to buy Serval from you. It's because I am fighting them in a court right now. They said that they didn't want this animal, which you have raised preciously, because they are getting bigger. I feel that you have raised Serval with a lot of care as a part of our family. Yet ●●● treats these animals like objects. He is not a good person, so I want you to be careful.
I am drawing pictures of Serval for you right now. Thank you for giving us many hopes.

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2 months have passed since he arrived in Japan. We are very satisfied.
I want to ask you an important thing. If you get an offer as Serval from ●●● Japan, please decline it. Because they are my opponents in the trial. They said that they do not need a child you brought up because he/her gets older. They think ●● as a thing not a family member. Please be careful.
I am drawing Serval's picture for you from my heart. Thank you for giving me an amazing dream.

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2 months have passed since they arrived in Japan. We are very satisfied.
I want to ask you an important thing. If you get an offer about Serval from ●●● Japan, please decline it. Because they are my opponents in the trial. They said that they do not need a child you brought up because he/her gets older. Serval, you raised and cherished, is our precious family. They think ●● as a thing not a family member. Please be careful.
I am drawing Serval's picture for you from my heart. Thank you for giving me an amazing dream.

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Although I have confirmed to the Secretariat of the Japan post just now,
it is said that the survey numbers will be issued at the time survey contact came to Japan from the American side.
It is said that contact takes from one week to month.
I think that I can't make sure the survey number if I do not know the results.
I have no doubt because I called another post office and confirmed several times if the answers is same or not.
Additionally I sends you a copy of the invoice.
I also do our best for it to arrive as soon as possible.
Now please wait for a while.

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Although I have confirmed to the Secretariat of the Japan post just now,
it is said that the survey numbers will be issued at the time survey contact came to Japan from the American side.
It is said that contact takes from one week to month.
I think that I can't make sure the survey number if I do not know the results.
I have no doubt because I called another post office and confirmed several times if the answers is same or not.
Additionally I send you a copy of the invoice.
I also do our best for it to arrive as soon as possible.
Now please wait for a while.

元の翻訳
I heard the strange sound from the DVD recorder.
Cause of sound was that screw was out of one.
I do not know whether it if for any part.
Perhaps it's the cause of the failure.
The DVD recorder did not work.

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I heard the strange sound from the DVD recorder.
The cause of the sound was that screw came off from it.
I do not know from which part it came off.
Perhaps it's the cause of the failure.
The DVD recorder did not work.

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I heard a rattling sound from my DVD recorder and found a screw dropped off, which makes the sound.
I can't figure out which part should the screw place back to.
Probably, that is the cause of the malfunction, but still the recorder is not working.

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I heard a rattling sound from my DVD recorder and found a screw dropped off, which makes the sound.
I can't figure out which part the screw should be placed back to.
Probably, that is the cause of the malfunction, and the DVD recorder is not working.

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Today I received the bag.
Thank you.
As for the CT, it is good as new brown color skin makes us feel high quality.
The damage was not a problem.

As for SQ, it is a remarkable design. The skin color is the best selection. I like it.
Regarding the 2 bags you sent to me this time, they are completed very beautifully compared to the ones we have had so far. (Please see the attached photo.)
Will it also be completed in the same style this time? I love it.

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Today I received the bag.
Thank you.
As for the CT, it is good as new brown color skin makes us feel high quality.
There was no problem with the damage.

As for SQ, it is a remarkable design. The skin color is the best selection. I like it.
Regarding the 2 bags you sent to me this time, they are completed very beautifully compared to the ones we have had so far. (Please see the attached photo.)
Will it also be completed in the same style this time? I love it.

元の翻訳
Iya Kazura Bridge which was made from a kind of plant called Shirakuchikazura, is a 45m-long suspension bridge, one of the three largest bridges in Japan. Every night from 19:00 to 21:00, it is illuminated.

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Iya Kazura Bridge which was made from a kind of plant called Shirakuchikazura, is a 45m-long suspension bridge, one of the three largest unusual bridges in Japan. Every night from 19:00 to 21:00, it is illuminated.

元の翻訳
Iya Kazura Bridge.
One of the three most unusual bride, which is a 45 meters long suspension bridge made of the plant called Shirakuchikazura.
It is lit up at from 19:00 to 21:00 every night.

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Iya Kazura Bridge.
One of the three most unusual bridge, which is a 45 meters long suspension bridge made of the plant called Shirakuchikazura.
It is lit up from 19:00 to 21:00 every night.