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2. cheap
In addition to a plate of 6 piece of grilled dumplings, you can eat almost all of dishes for 500 yen or less. You can choose a set menu by paying more 100-200 yen. So in case you order a glass of beer, you can also be full for around 1,000 yen.

3. Localized menu
Ohsho localizes taste of regular menu. We do our best to make local customers happy in each area.

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2. cheap
In addition to a plate of 6 pieces of grilled dumplings for 220 yen, you can eat almost all of dishes for 500 yen or less. You can choose a set menu by paying another 100-200 yen. So in case you order a glass of beer, you can also be full for around 1,000 yen.

3. Localized menu
Ohsho localizes taste of regular menu. We do our best to make local customers happy in each area.

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The waterfalls are slowly emerging!

What beautiful waterfalls! It's definitely worth the forty-minute walk.
Mino-o Falls are the only waterfalls in Osaka which made the list of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls".

Mino-o Falls are the only waterfall in Osaka prefecture chosen as one of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls". Mino-o Falls were even visited by the famous samurai-lord, Nobunaga Oda, during the Sengoku period.

During the summertime, the falls are illuminated sometimes for the local festivities (the illumination does not take place during autumn foliage).

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The waterfalls are slowly emerging!

What beautiful waterfalls! It's definitely worth the forty-minute walk.
Mino-o Falls are the only waterfalls in Osaka that were in the list of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls".

Mino-o great Falls are the only waterfall in Osaka prefecture chosen as one of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls". It is believed that Mino-o Falls were even visited by the famous samurai-lord, Nobunaga Oda, during the Sengoku period.

During the summertime, the falls are illuminated sometimes for the local festivities (the illumination does not take place during autumn foliage).

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Talking of spring in Japan, cherry tree (sakura in Japanese) is the most famous, as you know.

Japanese Starbucks sales the "SAKURA" series after them every year.

ーWhat's the "SAKURA" series?
Based on a motto of Starbucks that "cherish local culture", honoring Japanese culture in our way, we sale every spring as the original item in Japan.

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Talking of spring in Japan, cherry tree (sakura in Japanese) is the most famous, as you know.

Japanese Starbucks sales the "SAKURA" series after them every year.

ーWhat's the "SAKURA" series?
Based on a motto of Starbucks that "cherish local culture", honoring Japanese culture in our way, we sell them as the original items in Japan only every spring.

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That tells how delicious the foods are. What's more, they are all cheap!! The one you especially cannot miss is....takoyaki!

What's takoyaki?

Takoyaki is a snack made of wheat flour, egg, and Japanese soup stock. It is cooked in a special iron plate, on which Takoyaki is rolled to be ball-shaped. It contains minced octopus.

Takoyaki Kitty

Kitty in an octopus costume is sitting on takoyaki.

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That tells how delicious the foods are. What's more, they are all cheap!! The one you especially cannot miss is....takoyaki!

What's takoyaki?

Takoyaki is a dumpling made of wheat flour, egg, and Japanese soup stock. It is cooked in a special hot iron plate, on which Takoyaki is rolled to be ball-shaped. It contains minced octopus.

Takoyaki Kitty

Kitty in an octopus costume is sitting on takoyaki.

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私は1〜3日間を選んだ到着予定するのに、なぜ5〜11日の発送になり、1月17日〜23到着した日の推定になりますか？私はそれが1〜3日の出荷として同じ金額を支払うことは合理的だとは思わないです。

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私は1〜3日間で到着する発送方法を選んだのに、なぜ到着予定が1月17日〜23日の所要時間5～11日間になるのでしょうか？私はこれで所要1〜3日の発送方法と同じ金額を請求されることは不公正だと思います。

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I like this condominium's look.

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I like the appearance of this condominium.

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In fact, the person with a disability employment is so,too. Our shipment representation service pursue these two effects at the same time.

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Our shipment representation service, in fact, employment for the person with a disability is the same, pursues these two effects at the same time.

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if the shift set is a complicated industry, human repeated troubles is serious.

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If the work type has a complicated shift setting, assigning labor is the serious problem.

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言語的な問題は、英語をほとんど話せない移民が多くいた英国での生活にどうやって適応していくかということだった。
英国が昔よりはるかに自由で寛容な生き生きとした社会であることは多くの人が同意している。また多くは今の社会は個人主義で、権力に対する敬意が不足しすぎていると感じている。これからどう進歩していくのかが楽しみだ。

茶が英国での非公式な国民的飲み物であることはよく知られている。
しかし茶の歴史は、国の慣習がどのように変わり得るかということを気づかせてくれる。
イングランドは1000年以上も国として成り立っているが、茶は18世紀半ばまで有名になることはなかった。

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言語的な問題は、さまざまな国からやってきた、英語をほとんど話せない多くの移民が英国での生活にどうやって適応していくかということだった。
英国が昔よりはるかに自由で寛容な生き生きとした社会であることは多くの人が同意している。また多くは今の社会は個人主義で、権力に対する敬意が不足しすぎていると感じている。これからどう進歩していくのかが楽しみだ。

茶が英国での非公式な国民的飲み物であることはよく知られている。
しかし茶の歴史は、国の慣習がどのように変わり得るかということを気づかせてくれる。
イングランドは1000年以上も国として成り立っているが、茶は18世紀半ばまで人気になることはなかった。

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Thank you very much for your reply. My current location is Florida State, so I need to know if the quoted price is inclusive of State Tax? If it is inclusive of State Tax, I would like to place the order, please advise me of the purchase procedure for your company.

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Thank you for your reply. My shipping address is Florida but can I understand that the price is including the State tax? If it is so, I would like to purchase, please let me know how we should proceed with the transaction.↵