Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

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■mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/aaa_apf/

AAA [GAME OVER?]
・CD including LIVE ticket
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/1501aaa10th_page/

・Normal CD
http://avex.jp/aaa/discography/

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■mu-mo
http://q.mu-mo.net/aaa_apf/

AAA [GAME OVER?]
・CD with a LIVE ticket
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/1501aaa10th_page/

・Regular CD
http://avex.jp/aaa/discography/

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Did you receive a mail about CONFIRMATION deadline of APC on April 16?
I am wondering to rush you, but if you have received please contact us until this week until Tuesday.

I wish your kind help.

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Did you receive our Email from April 16th regarding the delivery date of APC?
Sorry to rush you, but if you have, please contact us by this Tuesday.

I wish your kind help.

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Have you received an e-mail about confirming the delivery day of APC that we had sent on April 16th?
We hate to prompt you, but if you have received it, would you contact us until Tuesday the next week?

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Have you received the e-mail about the delivery date of APC that we had sent on April 16th?
We hate to prompt you, but if you have received it, could you contact us by this Tuesday?

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hello, I have made a mistake in the answer to the last case.

It was about the goods sent in March, wasn't it?
You are saying that the parcel sent on March 30 has not arrived yet? I understand now.

I am going to refund you now, please, confirm the receipt of the money.

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Hello, I have made a mistake in my last reply regarding the case.

It was about the goods sent in March, wasn't it?
You are saying that the parcel sent on March 30 has not arrived yet? I understand now.

I am going to refund you now, please confirm the receipt of the money.

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Hello. I made a mistake in reply to the previous case.
It was for March?
The one sent on March 30 has not arrived? I noted.

I will make refund now. Please kindly check it.

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Hello. I made a mistake in the previous reply regarding the case.
It was for March, wasn't it?
The one sent on March 30 has not arrived right? I noted.

I will arrange a refund now. Please kindly check it.

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Thank you for inquiry.
Please, send us following info: company profile, line up of goods with photos, specifications of goods, monthly value of your export, address of plant, prices of goods.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
Please send us the following info: company profile, line up of goods with photos, specifications of goods, monthly export volume, address of plant, prices of goods.

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”Tsuginaru TV"

"AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-" will be on aired from 26:25 to 26:55 in a Kanto local area network.

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”Tsuginaru TV"

"AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-" will be aired from 26:25 to 26:55 on Kanto area local network.

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「Next ＴＶ」

「AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-」
26:25～26:55 （Kanto region locally）

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「Tsugi Naru ＴＶ」

「AAA ARENA TOUR 2014 -Gold Symphony-」
26:25～26:55 （Kanto region locally）

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I am so sorry for bothering you. The return fee was sent today. Best regards.

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I am sorry to have troubled you. The return fee was sent today. Best regards.

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The end of performance
(Alert)
Only remaining!

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Performance is over
(Alert)
Only few remaining!

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Performance End
Remainder
There is only a few remaining.

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Performance is over
Remainder
There is only a few remaining.

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tote bag , price is ￥5,800（Tax included）

Don't miss your chance and get it!

■un SHOP
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/st/event/un1982/?raw=true

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tote bag , price is ￥5,800（Tax included）

Don't miss your chance getting it!

■un SHOP
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/st/event/un1982/?raw=true

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そうですか・・・わかりました。レンズは壊れてしまっていたので返金をお願いできますか。

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そうですか・・・わかりました。レンズには大きな欠陥がありますので返金をお願いできますか。

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Thank you for a quick response.
I was able to understand the design of chart better.
It appears there was a misunderstanding on my side. I'm sorry for asking foolish questions.

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Thank you for the quick response.
I was able to understand the intention of the chart better.
It appears there was a misunderstanding on my side. I'm sorry for asking foolish questions.

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Thank you very much for your quick response.
I see now very well the meaning of this chart.
I guess I misunderstood. Excuse me with my silly questions.

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Thank you very much for your quick response.
I see now very well the meaning of this chart.
I guess I misunderstood. Excuse me for my silly questions.

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Thank you very much for your quick reply. I understand the meaning of the chart very well.
I was completely misunderstanding. Sorry for for my foolish question.

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Thank you very much for your quick reply. I could understand the meaning of the chart very well.
I was completely misunderstanding. Sorry for my foolish question.

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bounce

Published on March 25th
bounce 377 issue

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bounce

Published on March 25th
bounce number 377

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I've received the package you sent me today. Thank you.
However, there is one big problem.
There weren't 2 items below which were on the invoice.

Also, the one above says on the invoice that the size is 150cm×210cm but the one I ordered is 190cm×210cm.
I am having my customers wait so I would like you to send them to me as soon as possible.
When can you send them?

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I've received the package you sent me today. Thank you.
However, there is one big problem.
Below 2 items which are on the invoice are missing.

Also, the invoice shows the size of the first item as 150cm×210cm but the one I ordered is 190cm×210cm.
I have customers waiting so I would like you to send them to me as soon as possible.
When can you send them?