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Thank you for your continued custom.
I made contact with Fedex today regarding the invoice, and according to them, they have yet to receive it from you.
I can handle sending the invoice to Fedex, if you could be so kind as to send it to me via email.
Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for your continued business.
I made contact with Fedex today regarding the invoice, and according to them, they have yet to receive it from you.
I can handle sending the invoice to Fedex, if you could be so kind as to send it to me via email.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you all the time.
Today I contacted Federal Express, and they said they have not received an invoice from you yet.
I will send an invoice today to them, and please send an invoice to me by e-mail.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your continued business.
Today, I contacted Federal Express, and they said they have not received an invoice from you yet.
Please send the invoice to me by email, I will forward it to them as soon as I receive it from you.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support Mr. J.
I am Mr. M from O (Pty. Ltd.)

It seems that the contact has not been made.
I think Mr. S has already received a refund.

I must apologize for the mistake on my company's behalf.

If you have any further orders in the future please pass them on to Mr. S.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your support Mr. J.
I am Mr. M from O (Pty. Ltd.)

It seems that I still can't contact them.
I think Mr. S has already issued a refund.

I must apologize for the mistake on my company's behalf.

If you have any further orders in the future please pass them on to Mr. S.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
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I would like to purchase the above item, however, if it contains dangerous goods, I can not import. Please kindly let me know all the items included in the box. Thank you.

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I would like to purchase the item indicated above, however, I cannot import it if it contains dangerous goods. Please kindly let me know all the items included in the box. Thank you.

元の翻訳
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I would like to purchase the above product, if there are any dangerous goods inside the box it will not be permitted to be imported.
Could you please give me full list of the box content. Thank you.

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I would like to purchase the product mentioned above, but I won't be able to import it if there are any dangerous goods is packed inside the box.
Could you please give me a full list of the box content. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hi.

Thank you for your reply.

I understand.

I will get back to you later.

Thank you.

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Hi.

Thank you for your reply.

I understand your point.

I will get back to you later.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the inconvenience. I will accept the product return.
First, please kindly ship using a method that includes a tracking number to the following address.
Next, I would like to pay for the expenses of the shipping so please kindly take a picture and attach the expense receipt in the email.
I will issue a refund of the shipping charges and the product amount.

You seem to have requested for A-to-Z and I can only refund the product amount so it's inconvenient.
Please kindly do a cancellation.

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Sorry for the inconvenience. I will accept the product return.
First, please kindly ship using a method that includes a tracking number to the following address.
Next, I would like to pay for the expenses of the shipping so please kindly take a picture and attach the expense receipt in the email.
I will issue a refund of the shipping charges and the product amount.

You seem to have requested for A-to-Z and I can only refund the product amount so it's inconvenient.
Please kindly consider a cancellation of the request.

元の翻訳
I requested a refund be processed 3 months ago, you should have received it,
but as yet I have not received a refund.
What is happening?

1) The goods have been returned to the address you indicated, return the money, Immediately!
2) If it has not been processed, then process it now!
3) Process the refund NOW!
4) [Oh yeah I get it. Wait a bit longer] is what I will get as a reply? REFUND IT NOW!!

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I requested a refund be processed 3 months ago, and you have accepted it,
but as yet I have not received a refund.
What is happening?

1) The goods have been returned to the address you indicated, so refund the money, Immediately!
2) If it has not been processed, then process it now!
3) Process the refund NOW!
4) [Oh yeah I get it. Wait a bit longer] is what I will get as a reply? REFUND IT NOW!!

元の翻訳
I did request my refund, and you did accept it.
But I still haven't received the refund money.
What's going on?

1, I send the item to the address you requested. Do what you promised and refund! immediately!
2, if you haven't refund, do it immediately.

3, Hey! do my refund!

4, " alright, I'll wait a little bit more." that's what you expected? Do it now!

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I did request a refund three month ago, and you did accept it.
But I still haven't received the refund.
What's going on?

1, I sent the item to the address you designated. Give me a refund immediately as you promised!
2, if you haven't processed a refund, do it immediately.

3, Hey! give me a refund!

4, If you expect me to sit back and wait saying "alright, I'll wait a little bit more," you've gotta be joking. Do it NOW!

元の翻訳
I have requested for refund in three month ago, and you have accepted, but never happened. What is going on?

1. I have returned the item to the address you have indicated. Please return my money. I need it now!
2. If you have not settled yet. I need money back.
3. I urge you to do it now.
4. You think I will wait for a little more? You are joking. Give me the money back!

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I have requested for a refund three month ago, and you have accepted, but never happened. What is going on?

1. I have returned the item to the address you have indicated. Please return my money as you promised me. I need it now!
2. If you have not processed the refund yet. do it immediately.
3. I urge you to process the refund NOW.
4. You think I will wait for a little longer? You are joking. Give me the money back!

元の翻訳
I understand.

I don't have any problems what he American address. The payment will be done immediately once the 5 arrangements are done thus I'll be waiting for your contact

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I understand.

I don't have any problems with the address in the US. The payment will be settled immediately once the 5 arrangements are done thus I'll be waiting for your contact

元の翻訳
We've approved your request.

There's no problem with US address.
We will arrange payment when we prepare 5 pieces.
We're looking forward to hearing from you.

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Your request is duly noted.

There's no problem with US address.
We will settle the payment as soon as we prepare 5 pieces.
We're looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Good afternoon.

Do you have stock of this product?

I would like it shipped to Japan.

I await your reply

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Good afternoon.

Do you have this product in stock?

I would like it shipped to Japan.

I await your reply

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
The color of actual item is as the same as it is shown in the photos.

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Thank you for your message.
The color of the actual item is as the same as it is shown in the photos.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your waiting. Since I ordered to maker, I 've just realized that the lauch date has been postponed.
The launch date will be 29 August 2014.
Originally,it was planned to be launched by June which made me misunderstood that it already had been launched.
I would like to appologize for it.
Please select whether you want to keep waiting or cancel.
Sincerely yours,

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Thank you very much for your waiting. When I have placed an order with the manufacturer, I 've just learned that the release date has been postponed.
The release date will be 29 August 2014.
Originally, it was planned to be released in June which made me confused that it already had been released.
I would like to apologize for it.
Please select whether you want to keep waiting or cancel.
Sincerely yours,

元の翻訳
Thank you for your patience.
As we confirmed the order with the maker, it turned out the sales date has been postponed.
The release date is August 29, 2014.

There was a misunderstanding on our side that it was supposed to be released in June, so it has already been sold in the market.
We sincerely apologize for the confusion.

Kindly please choose whether you will wait, or cancel the order.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your patience.
As we confirmed the order with the manufacturer, it turned out the release date has been postponed.
The release date is August 29, 2014.

There was a misunderstanding on our end that it was supposed to be released in June, so it has already been sold in the market.
We sincerely apologize for the confusion.

Kindly please choose whether you will wait, or cancel the order.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
メールを頂きありがとうございます。ご注文の品が届いていないことについてお詫び申し上げます。お客様の荷物について内部調査を開始したとともに、本問題の解決のためUPSにも連絡を取っているところです。問題解決のためにUPSより連絡があるまで７～１０日ほどかかる可能性がありますのであらかじめご了承ください。お客様のお荷物の場所が特定でき次第、直接ご連絡いたします。なお、お客様のお荷物の場所が特定できなかった場合、差し替えた品が到着次第弊社よりお知らせいたします。

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メールを頂きありがとうございます。ご注文の品が届いていないことについてお詫び申し上げます。お客様の荷物について内部調査を開始したとともに、本問題の解決のためUPSにも連絡を取っているところです。問題解決のためにUPSより連絡があるまで７～１０営業日ほどかかる可能性がありますのであらかじめご了承ください。お客様のお荷物の場所が特定でき次第、直接ご連絡いたします。なお、お客様のお荷物の場所が特定できなかった場合、差し替えた品が到着次第弊社よりお知らせいたします。

元の翻訳
ご連絡ありがとうございます。注文をお受け取りになれないこと申し訳なく思います。まずあなたの荷物の内部調査に取り掛かっており、 私たちは現在この問題を解決するためにUSPに連絡をとっております。USPが解決策について我々に連絡するまで7-10日間かかることをご報告いたします。我々が荷物の位置を特定致しましたら、直接ご連絡いたします。見つからなかった場合には、いつ代品が到着するかお知らせいたします。

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ご連絡ありがとうございます。注文がお届けできないとのこと、申し訳ございません。当方ではお客様のお荷物の内部調査に取り掛かっており、 また、USPに連絡をとりこの件について解決するよう依頼しております。USPが解決策について我々に連絡するまで7-10営業日かかることをご承知ください。我々が荷物の位置を特定致しましたら、直接ご連絡いたします。また見つからなかった場合には、いつ代替品をお届けできるかをお知らせいたします。

元の翻訳
ご連絡ありがとうございました。ご注文のお品がまだ届いていないとのこと、申し訳ございません。お客様の商品に関して内部調査を開始し、UPSにも問題解決を要請しています。UPSからの返信には7-10日ほどお時間をいただきたく存じます。お客様の商品のある場所が特定でき次第、こちらより直接ご連絡差し上げるか、あるいはお客様の商品が見つかった場合は交換商品としていつごろお届けできるかご連絡差し上げます。

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ご連絡ありがとうございました。ご注文のお品がまだ届いていないとのこと、申し訳ございません。お客様の商品に関して内部調査を開始し、UPSにも問題解決を要請しています。UPSからの返信には7-10営業日ほどお時間をいただきたく存じます。お客様の商品のある場所が特定でき次第、こちらより直接ご連絡差し上げるか、あるいはお客様の商品が見つからない場合は交換商品のお届け時期についてご連絡差し上げます。

元の翻訳
The goods have not arrived.
Please return my money immediately.
If it is it refunded within 1 day,
I will formally report this to the credit card company.

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The goods have not arrived.
Please return my money immediately.
If it is it not refunded within 1 day,
I will file a formal report from the credit card company.

元の翻訳
Please see the following for the source. (This is an article posted on ABC official blog in February 2013.)

Late in the article, it’s written that they had a hard time thinking whether to continue their activities, but as they decided to continue, they will follow through.

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The source is as follows: (This is an article posted on ABC's official blog in February 2013.)

It is indicated toward the end of the article, that they had a hard time thinking whether or not to continue their activities, but as they decided to continue, they will follow through.

元の翻訳
Hello.

① Is it possible to put on a stand for this watch?

② Could you send me a stand for it? A separate package will do fine with me.

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Hello.

(1) Is it possible to put a tilting stand on this clock?

(2) Could you send me a tilting stand for it? A separate package will do fine with me.