みっしゃん (canuelta) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for the additional offer. I am thinking about purchasing A as well. Just in case, can you please confirm if the COA includes this painting and the three other ones? Please let me know the total price for four paintings. As I am thinking about making purchases regularly in the future, I would appreciate if you could consider as much of a discounted price as possible in my case.

Thank you for your response. As payment is done, can you please process the confirmation and delivery ? I look forward to the arrival.Best regards.

修正後
Thank you very much for the additional offer. I am thinking about purchasing A as well. Just in case, could you please confirm if the COA comes with this painting and the three other ones? Please let me know the total price for the four paintings. As I am thinking about making purchases regularly in the future, I would appreciate it if you could consider giving me the largest discount possible.

Thank you for your response. As my payment is complete, could you please confirm it and ship the package? I look forward to its arrival. Best regards.↵

元の翻訳
2. Price modification function

In the past, I have heard that your company is better than F company.

Not only the system of F company reduces the price, but also F company maximizes its profits that were increasing the price effectively by monitoring the comparison with other rival comapnies and cart acquisitions.

Can we expect to see if your company is able to maximize the profits as well as the reduction of the price for the system?
Would it be possible to explain to us if we can expect to obtain a better arrrangement than with F company?

This does not need to be discussed at today's appointment but we are looking forward to hearing your reponse soon.

修正後
2. Price modification function

In the past, I have heard that your company is better than F company.

Not only the system of F company reduces the price, but also F company maximizes its profits that were increasing the price effectively by monitoring the comparison with other rival companies and cart acquisitions.

Can we expect to see if your company is able to maximize the profits as well as the reduction of the price for the system?
Would it be possible to explain to us if we can expect to obtain a better arrangement than with F company?

This does not need to be discussed at today's appointment but we are looking forward to hearing your response soon.